Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 This relentless Warrior will banish her opponents from the battlefield, and she won't let them return again...Effect: The effects of your opponent's Effect Monster that this monster destroys as a result of battle are negated. Any monster this card destroys by battle is removed from play and cannot be Special Summoned. Monsters removed from play by this card's effect cannot be Special Summoned and their effects are negated. Somewhat short effect, but that is all what she needs. Could this card send Warrior Decks to Top Tier? Overpowered? Underpowered? Please let me know Image created by: chopstickmadness from Deviantart. EDIT: The effect was reworded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Good warrior support. Nice OCG, see no errors, but the wording makes me nervous. Pic is good, background is... average. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 I know, "destroys by battle" repeats twice and one is under the other. But I really couldn't find a way to merge both effects in a single sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 maybe"Negate the effect of any monstr this card battles and remove from play the monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Hmm. I was thinking in something like this:"Any monster this card destroys by battle is removed from play. Also, that monster cannot be Special Summoned and its effect(s) is negated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Skip the Also. "Any monster removed from play by this effect cannot be Special Summon and has its effect negated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Thanks for your suggestion, but for not repeating "Any monster", I think this effect sound better: "Monsters removed from play by this card's effect cannot be Special Summoned and their effects are negated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 bit overpowered with 1700 atk and def and a good effect. I would put it 1700 - 1500 MK 8.9 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 I don't think it has too high DEF, if we compare her with "Exarion Universe" or "Skilled Dark Magician". New Level 4 monsters with even more ATK and DEF are being released, why should we stay behind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 good point :D yeah I spse all this is a bit of fun hey, yea sorry MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 "Remove from play any monster that battles this card. Monsters removed from play by this effect cannot be Special Summoned and have their effects negated." is about as good as I can get it. I just noticed why the BG bothers me. It's wooden planks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 @MK: No problem. We all have different opinions, and I respect yours. @Darklink. Well, the title of the image given by the author was "Steel" so I suppose those things are huge rusty iron bars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 wording is a little weird at times though the effect is balanced enough, good to see more support for warrior monsters 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 OCG looks good, though depending on what deck its put in, can be slightly OP, also a bit simple. Would do well in a D.D. set very well. Picture is ok, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Scary eyepatch girl scares me...w/ eyepatch. But yeah, I could see that effect fitting that pic. It's a real killer for Zombie Decks and other mass Graveyard-summoners, and it just beats Different Dimension out of existence. (Ironically.) Um...card is good, although it's not really screaming FRESH NEW CARD CONCEPT! so 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 great warrior support 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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