The Black Chain

[Darj]

2 way-too different Archetypes are being united by this card, whose weapon of choice is a Black Chain...

Effect: This card gains 1 of the following effect(s) while this monster(s) is face-up on the field: "Blackwing" monster: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, add 1 non-Tuner "Blackwing" monster with less ATK than the destroyed monster from your Deck to your hand. "Iron Chain" monster: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, send the top 2 cards of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

 

For Blackwings: Yet another beatstick with an effect that goes with them.

For Iron Chains: The beatstick they possibly need to be more competitive.

 

This card could be the first of a new Archetype. (I am not promising anything; but I wouldn't complain if you post "Black Chains" and it becomes a Community Archetype)

 

Overpowered? Underpowered? Please let me know.

 

Image created by: Jazin Kay

 

 

EDIT:

1. I forgot to type the effect.

2. Reduced the ATK from 1900 to 1600 and made an slight change to the effects.

3. Changed the ATK from 1600 to 2100. Added 1 Level.

[usetheforcehan]

You forget to type the effect on your post.

I can't read the little letters.

[MarshyK-XS]

ditto

 

MK

[Darj]

Done. I added the effect to the post.

[MarshyK-XS]

I would say a bit overpowered for a lvl 4

 

7.8 / 10

 

MK

[usetheforcehan]

If the opponent have "Blackwing" & "Iron Chain" monsters on their field, you basically can add 1 monster from your Deck to your hand AND discard 2 cards from opponent Deck to the Graveyard when you destroy their monsters?

 

OP'd IMO.

[Darj]

Good point. I didn't see it that way. You very well may run this card in BW or IC, but it your opponent happens to run one of those Decks as well, you would get a nice, overpowered monster.

 

I shall tone down the ATK and effects right away.

[usetheforcehan]

If you want to keep the "Blackwing" and "Iron Chain" Effects, you better give this card a drawback.

Maybe like this: "If opponent Summoned a "Blackwing" OR "Iron Chain" monster(s) on their field, destroy this card during your next End Phase."

[Darj]

I don't like that idea. I would prefer to negate 1 effect if both a BW and IC are on the field.

 

How about this effect?

This card gains 1 of the following effect(s) while this monster(s) is face-up on the field: "Blackwing" monster: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, add 1 non-Tuner "Blackwing" monster with less ATK than the destroyed monster from your Deck to your hand. "Iron Chain" monster: When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

[usetheforcehan]

Great idea! So your card is good against "Blackwing" OR "Iron Chain", but not both.

 

A situational card, but balanced.

7/10.

[Darj]

Great. So... would it be wise to raise her ATK now? 1600 ATK is barely something it today's Meta. I would like to give her 1900 again so she will be able to destroy something.

[ragnarok1945]

the effect is just fine for the card

 

the only thing is that it doesn't seem to suit a lv4 monster

 

Raise the atk up 500 pts, and make it lv5 instead

 

8/10

[Darj]

You are right: It will work better as a Level 5. I will make the last changes right now.

[ragnarok1945]

all right then

 

with the modifications I can raise my rate to 8.8/10