my first fusion monster

[superspeck]

"A trap" + "Foolish Warrior"

this card cannot be destroyed by battle ,and taken no damege.Once per turn you can destory three cards on you side of the field to increes the ATK/DEF of this card by 1000 points

 

 

[najnaj]

i dont think you can fuse monsters w/traps

[Jarl Ballin]

You can't fuse traps with monsters. Maybe make a trap hole type monster. Also, the ATK gain should be temporary because of it's immortality. And obvious spelling errors.

 

5/10

[superspeck]

thanks for your tips

[Aero~]

can't fuse monsters w/ traps.

you spelled "Trapped" wrong in the card name

[superspeck]

Thanks for the help

[Home Slice]

ocg-needs work

pics-kinda bad

effects- fusion one seems oped

overall 4.3/10

[Phantom Roxas]

"A Trap" + "Foolish Warrior"

This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and Battle Damage you take from battle involving this card becomes 0. Once per turn, you can destroy 3 cards you control to have this card gain 500 ATK and DEF.

 

This card is underpowered, dfgk. Destroying 3 of your monster to get a monster with 500 ATK is a terrible idea considering the cost and result.

 

You people obviously haven't heard of Critias or NEX. You could easily say "This card can only be Fusion Summoned by sending 1 "Foolish Warrior" and 1 Trap card to the Graveyard" and it would be fine.

 

This warrior is fast, but foolish.

 

Hence the name of the monster.

 

This swarm of bugs chases anything it sees.

[DARKCHAOS445]

cards are ok 3.2/10

[Uchiha Sasuke XII]

OK, but Pics need work. 4/10. Oh yeah, try not to make vanillas(Cards with no effect).

[superspeck]

Thanks for you replys.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

"A Trap" + "Foolish Warrior"

This card cannot be destroyed by battle' date=' and Battle Damage you take from battle involving this card becomes 0. Once per turn, you can destroy 3 cards you control to have this card gain 500 ATK and DEF.

 

This card is underpowered, dfgk. Destroying 3 of your monster to get a monster with 500 ATK is a terrible idea considering the cost and result.

 

You people obviously haven't heard of Critias or NEX. You could easily say "This card can only be Fusion Summoned by sending 1 "Foolish Warrior" and 1 Trap card to the Graveyard" and it would be fine.

 

This warrior is fast, but foolish.

 

Hence the name of the monster.

 

This swarm of bugs chases anything it sees.

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/\__/\ That

And here use my Guide to make better cards

[spoiler=Find the Image]

You can find suitable images on sites such as these...

 

http://www.deviantart.com/

http://photobucket.com/

http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warrior

http://www.wizards.com/magic/

http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.html

http://www.animecubed.com/galleries/

http://www.animegalleries.net/

http://www.advancedanime.com/

http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/

Or even find images in the showcase section

Remember to CREDIT the Artists

 

For example I will choose this image

[spoiler=This one]

http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg

 

Instead of saving it and uploading via a site, just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it

 

should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.

[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far]

 

Now we will go onto the next step

 

[spoiler=Details]

This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect.

 

Finding a good name;

Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a

 

graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.

But for names, you can either make something like;

-The Frightening Beast

OR

-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast

 

However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end

 

For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster.

 

Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix

 

between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image.

 

It will look like this with most of it filled in.

 

[spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]

The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name.

 

For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects.

 

Rough OCG plan:

-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less

-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases

-and lose 500 ATK

 

OCG fixed up:

Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your

 

Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases.

 

That's the effect pretty much sorted out

 

If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html

 

And for the ATK and DEF

Pretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of

 

average ATK and DEF stats.

1 : 300

2 : 600

3 : 1400

4 : 1800

5-6 : 2300

7-8 : 2800

9 : 3000

10+ : 4000

 

*there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header

 

Dragon"

The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000

remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:

ATK: 0 DEF:2200

ATK:1900 DEF: 0

ATK: 3000 DEF: 100

 

This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an

 

advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about

 

300.

 

 

Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards.

 

 

Reps Aprreciated

 

 

Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved.

[superspeck]

"A Trap" + "Foolish Warrior"

This card cannot be destroyed by battle' date=' and Battle Damage you take from battle involving this card becomes 0. Once per turn, you can destroy 3 cards you control to have this card gain 500 ATK and DEF.

 

This card is underpowered, dfgk. Destroying 3 of your monster to get a monster with 500 ATK is a terrible idea considering the cost and result.

 

You people obviously haven't heard of Critias or NEX. You could easily say "This card can only be Fusion Summoned by sending 1 "Foolish Warrior" and 1 Trap card to the Graveyard" and it would be fine.

 

This warrior is fast, but foolish.

 

Hence the name of the monster.

 

This swarm of bugs chases anything it sees.

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Thank for the backup, I will try to fix them.

[Kuri]

needs work before I'll rate it

[superspeck]

I fixed them.:)

[sunrider]

Soz mate but your cards aren't good at all

you must learn how to speak English before you start making cards

that's all i got to say