Rikden Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikden Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Blaze Dragons come from a book I'm writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Fire Blaze RitualTribute 1 "Grey Stone the Blaze Dragon" and 1 Level 7 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Complete Blaze Dragon". Not sure about this being a Ritual Spell. Maybe just make it a Normal Spell. Can you summon Complete Blaze Dragon from your hand, Deck, and Graveyard, or only one or two of those? Complete Blaze DragonSend 1 Dragon-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF. I suggest make this a regular Effect Monster. It's effect is rather overpowered, so I suggest lowering its stats a little bit and/or placing a limit on the effect. I'm moving this to Realistic Cards, since these cards are best suited there. I wish you the best of luck with your story. If you want, you can use Fan Fic if you feel like sharing the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Ocg errors. All cards are epic fail 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 OCG errors have been pointed out already WAY too simple and boring effects 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikden Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 More characters from my book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 You have good ideas but if u want to make it a ritual card then you should make the spell card effect like this "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Complete Blaze Dragon" . You must also tribute monsters whose total levels equal 10 or more from the field or your hand. If you have a "Fire Blaze Dragon" on your side of the field send it to the grave yard as a substitute." and CBD "This card can only be ritual summoned with the ritual spell card "Fire Blaze Ritual". You must also offer monsters whose total levels stars equal 10 or more as a tribute from the field or your hand. Once per turn, by sending one Dragon-type monster from your hand to the graveyard this card gains 500 ATK and DEF." and I would consider changing the ATK and DEF of CFD to about ATK 2700 DEF 2500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Robert, Adam, and Aron's pics are all overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 No lie, but Human is a real Type. Thus it doesn't matter whether I like or hate Fakes. One thing about the Ritual - You need to say how the card can be Ritual Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 change human to ether "spellcaster" or "warrior" and also Adam is a Lv 4 noraml with a ATK of 2200. thats a bit over powered, plus all the pictures are realy colorful and detailed but then there is Adam, full armor. try to find a pic that is a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Roxas basically pointed out everything. Also, I need to ask. About your "Characters". Do they turn into cards or something? If not, why make cards for them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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