aydane Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 making set as i go so new cards being added hope you like them CARDS YOU SEE HERE ARE NOT RIGHT BEING FIX AT PERSANT TIME.... This card cannot be Special Summon or Set. This card can only be Summoned by the effect of "Magic Art Dragon". As long as this card is in Face-up defense position all your monsters gain 500 DEF points. as long as this card is in Face-up attack position you can halve this cards ATK to attack your opponet's Life Points directly. Pay 300 Life Points during your Standby Phases. If you do not, Destroy this card. plz rate as i go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Although I don't seem like I have much YGO experience, I do. That was something I didn't even need to say, ignore it. I can see this being potentially limited. Only to 2, though. But destroying a card after Battle Damage is pretty powerful. What is that, -2 for the opponent or something? I think it should randomly discard a card from the opponent's hand, since it's effect would let it destroy 2 of the opponent's monsters per turn....Potentially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Although I don't seem like I have much YGO experience' date=' I do. That was something I didn't even need to say, ignore it. I can see this being potentially limited. Only to 2, though. But destroying a card after Battle Damage is pretty powerful. What is that, -2 for the opponent or something? I think it should randomly discard a card from the opponent's hand, since it's effect would let it destroy 2 of the opponent's monsters per turn....Potentially.[/quote'] Actually not at all... The monster says... "destroy 1 card on the field" So, if your opponent has an empty field and this card attacks directly... you will destroy 1 of your own cards.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I guess that balances it out.Well, that may be a rare situation. Where your opponent cannot put down any Spells, Traps or Monsters. The part where it returns to your hand is better, though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 This is probably how they should have originally designed the Spirit cards, it's quite well balanced, can bring worthwhile advantage and so on. Spirit Decks would still need a couple more cards like this before this would really be playable anywhere, but its a great start on them. Good job here, the only problem I see is my personal peeve that I dislike ATKs ending in 50, but that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I guess that balances it out.Well' date=' that may be a rare situation. Where your opponent cannot put down any Spells, Traps or Monsters. The part where it returns to your hand is better, though...[/quote'] Well, not at all... Mostly of the new meta don't retain many Spell or Trap Cards just monsters... so other situation can be that your opponent only controls 1 monster, you attack it with this card, you destroy it and inflict damage to your opponent and... you destroy 1 of your cards :D Well... I think to balances it a little more you should reduce a little its attack... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Sounds like you think I created the card. I haven't played YGO in a year or so, I started playing about a month ago. A year back, Sakuretsu Armor was considered needed, I think. Take of those nostalgia glasses, son! Ok, I would approve of this monster, if you made it's ATK 1800.Other then that, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 The only reason that my comments are like this is cuz I comment to improve the card... So I comment all that I think that could help to improve this card and, if this card has a good effect, prove that it's good... But it's true, reduce a little it's ATK and this card would be perfect ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 just some capitalization errors the effect is fine on its own, you just gave it too much atk power Drop it down to 1700ish or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I'd recommend sticking to 1900 or 2000 ATK, 1800 if you're really wanting it weaker, this would only be really used in a dedicated Spirit Deck I expect, because of Spirit's slow nature, and it seems reasonably balanced, not breaking the Deck but supporting well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 BUMP need a few more rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Hmmmmm..... The Ice Dragon Spirit is balanced. I like it. As for his brother, the Lava Soul Rock Dragon, I'd have to say it's pretty darn underpowered. Spirits tend to go back to the owners hands, thus making it extremely difficult for them to be sent to the graveyard. X1000 will do the job. Overall, with newby bonus, 8.5/10. You can make the effects a little bit more original. P.S. Isn't spirits based on Japanese Mythology... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 thxs ill change that now a update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Pics are ok/bad, can't see the first card.Intersting choise of making Dragons/Spirit Subtype.Why is the Synchro also an Spirit, it doesn't have any such effect.It's "Dragon-Type".A 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I don't like too much the 3rd card... other than that the idea is good... maybe change the effect of the 3rd card... to something more relative to mist... something that can be attacked?? or can attack directly or something like that.... 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 BUMP still updating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 and exactly which card did you add in this time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 over halve way now keep rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 In a time... I defend a Counter Spell I think, so I can Defend you Quick-Play Trap... but being seriously plz don't make it... OCG errors and ... meh... boring and dull.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 At the beginning these seemed quite interesting and such. Now, I have to say they seem rushed. Losing creativity, but you still have a chance to redeem yourself. Also, really quick question. Is 30 Cards enough for an Archetype? Actually, how many cards should an Archetype have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swimmer117 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 the pic for Black Spirit is Overusedtry to find a different pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 yer your right there are rushed so ill spend some time geting new pics and changing them might take a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Don't worry, you have time... that the base of a Good set^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 there i updated some of the cards and got rid of some more plz rate so i know what i still need to fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Reduce the DEF of "Mist Dragon" and pu a cost to it's summon cuz it's easy to destroy the "Magic Arts Dragon"... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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