Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 [spoiler=chapter 1] YCMaker crouched over his papers in his study. His room was lit by a lamp, and he was alone. He dipped the peacock - feather pen he was writing with in the Kuriboh Blood ink. He was using Kuriboh Blood because it was transparent; he must have been sending a secret message. Out in another world in YCMaker's instant travel universe, Xion 27 was rating a card when someone came up behind him. Then, he felt a burning sensation..... He was being flammed! "Needs some work. summon should be Summon and graveyard should be Graveyard. A little OP'ed." He had said. "Shut up Xion, you retard! He can make his card any way he wants, it he Any Other Card section, you idiot!" The flammer replied to his message. "Stoppit. Chaosdarksoulz, flamming is against the rules. You will recieve a 10% warning." Interrupted a familiar voice. Icyblue! "Th..Thank you, Icy.", Xion said. "No prob. It seems like it's average anymore. Flamers are drawing to YCM more than slimes are drawing near, if I use your title badge." "I havn't noticed, but then again I'm not a mod and I don't have to deal with them very often. What brings you to AOC?" Icy frowned. "Bussiness." "Oh.... Ok." Xion turned to walk off from the thread back into the any other cards section portal. He thought he noticed a user in a dark cloak pass. Oh well. Xion walked into the portal, considering viewing his threads. YCMaker's pen worked faster as he wrote out the message. Sweat poured down his face. Someone knocked at the door. "YCMaker? Why don't you come out for some fresh air? You've been in the admin CP all day." said Falling Pizza from the other side of the door. "I am fine, Pizza. Thank you for asking." "But YC-" "I SAID I WAS FINE! LEAVE! NOW! IT'S NOT SAFE ANYMORE!" "Not safe? YCMaker?" "I said too much. I am sorry. Let it off your mind. Can you tell the mods it's to their best concern to log off as soon as possible?" "Sh.. Shure." "Thank you, Pizza" YCMaker said, ending the conversation. YCMaker walked to a door on the opposite side of the room. "I will now be logging out of the Admin CP" YCMaker said.. "Very well. See you next time, Y-C-Maker" a set electronic MyBB voice said. YCMaker logged into the normal User CP. He grasped the message he was writing, in a black envelope and a large wick stamp sealing it. He chose to compose a private message. It failed. "NO!!!!" YCMaker screamed. "WARNING. WARNING. EVACUATE IMEDIATLY. HACKER APPROACHING. FIREWALL BREACHED. CLOAKING DEVICE DEACTIVATED." an electronic voice said. YCMaker pressed a button on one of his badges, and logged off to stop the hack on his account. "HACKER DOWN. ACCOUNT OFF. FIREWALL BEING REBUILT. 20% COMPLETE. CLOAKING DEVICE REACTIVATED. IMEDIATE PASSWORD CHANGE BEING SENT TO BACKUP ACCOUNT." the voice said again. YCMaker logged on to a backup admin account called "Backupadmin" and recieved his new password. But he wasn't going to use it. He dashed to the admin CP. He sat down at the chair and looked up at the giant computer in front of him. He had to shut down the old account. He never thought he'd have to do this. "Goodbye, YCMaker." he said, and banned and deleted the account. He changed his backupadmin username to YCMaker, and created another backup admin. "So that's the password." a voice said behind him. YCMaker turned around to see who it was, just to fing himself whacked unconcious. When he fell back on the keyboard, he hit a button that logged him out. The figure cursed under his breath. Then, took the seat, on the new backupadmin's Admin CP. [spoiler=Chapter 2] Xion turned his head wildly. Sirens were blazing in his ears. Someone was screaming. Everything seemed so distant. He looked around. Raver was laying on the ground, clurled up and screeching. "NOOOO!!! IT CANNOT HAPPEN! IT IS NOT TRUE!!!!" "What is it?" "NNOOOOO!!!!" He must not have beenn able to hear. Xion felt a burn on his shoulder. There was a large fire. Flamers! Xion dragged Raver away, trying not to get hit. Phantom Roxas stood in front of the fire, trying to hold them back. He was using a new keyblade he got when he was promoted to mad. He calls it the banhammer. Xion hid himself and Raver in his user CP. "Raver." Xion whispered. He was waking up. "I think..., I saw the future. One minute, I was commenting on someone's card, then everything went black." "What do you-" "Let me continue. I heard a voice. It said, 'The past is the future, the future be the past, the past be the ruins.'" "That doesn't sound good. We'll wait here a while longer before leaving." Xion and Raver decided to pass the time with a Duel. "And I'll tag out Darius," Xion said, "Special Summon Bestiari," "Darn it! You destroyed my Dark Bribe!" "And contact fuse Retiari and Bestiari for my friend, Gyazarus." "ORLY?" "YARLY" "ORLY?" Raver flipped a Bottomless Trap Hole. "Ergh.... I end." "hmph. Meet dad!" The Duel mus have lasted a while, becuase it wasn't loud anymore outside. Xion and Raver stepped into the Homepage. Guessing everything was back to normal, Xion headed to his Duel Club. Now, Xion here didn't keep up with 'who'se been banned' or 'who left YCM' or that kind of thing. But don't worry about that now. He decided to check his Duel Club. A new duelist was there, asking to join. He was accepted. "Would you like to Duel, Xion?" The new Duelist - Expic - said. "Sure." Xion replied. "Then let's go!" Xion rolled. 6. Expic rolled. 4. "I'll go first. I'm using a new Deck. It's an archetype called the Kichiwajima Mages." "Ok." Xion: Draw Summon Kichiwajima Mage - Igguanisa (Normal/ level 3/ ATK=1300/ DEF=1300) End turn. Expic: Draw Expic smiled. "You expected this to be easy, didn't you?" He said. set 2 Spell/Trap cards Set 1 monster. End. Xion: Draw Summon Kichiwajima Mage - Horrensic (level 4/DARK/Tuner/Effect=When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Kichiwajima Mage" Synchro Monster, you can tret this card as Level 3. When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, Your opponent can flip and activate 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card they control/ATK=300/DEF=1800) Tune Igguanisa and Hrrensic for Element Master (Level 6/Synchro/Effect= 1 "Kichiwajima Mage" Tuner + 1 non-Tuner Monster When this card is succesfully Synchro Summoned, you can add 1 "Kichiwajima Mage" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand./ATK=2400/DEF=1800) Expic flips a card. "hehehe....." "WHAT? HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE? THAT CARD!" Xion screamed. "hehe... A simple Duel has turned into a gamble for your life!!!" love, hate, comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 ...well, at least it's better than a certain other YCM fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 I know wich one you are talking about, I think. Would you like to be in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 I'd rather not. Everyone who includes me usually ruins me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 Nice. I agree that its better then others I've seen, but the chapters could be made a tad longer. Or was it so short cous its just an intro? EDIT: Second thought, its not that short atall. But It could still be longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 nope. not an intro. wanna be in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 Alright. If you want to get to know me better first to get me more realistic, we'll do it over PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 cool. I'll add you in whe there's an open spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 It felt kinda short, but at least it wasn't not good, which means it WAS good, and so it's fine I suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Unclean One: VK Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 I'd rather not. Everyone who includes me usually ruins me. We'll se about that Larx.... Anyhow, this Fan Fic is moar realistic then mines due to the fact that a Hacker attacking us is more probale then a cordinated attack by Trolls, Spammers, and Narutards. Not to mention it's more life liek then mine's! I give it a 5/5. It's also has more better format style then a certain Fan Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 I'd rather not. Everyone who includes me usually ruins me. We'll se about that Larx.... Anyhow' date=' this Fan Fic is moar realistic then mines due to the fact that a Hacker attacking us is more probale then a cordinated attack by Trolls, Spammers, and Narutards. Not to mention it's more life liek then mine's! I give it a 5/5. It's also has more better format style then a certain Fan Fic.[/quote'] thx!! Thanks for the good comments, everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Yeah I can see this going places. Like Altairs would have if the character who had a name super simillar to mine didn't have a god-power ring or Zex's if he gets off his ass and does something besides copying pasting from the last thread. ANYWAY cool, it's better than... someone elses, who seems to turn anyone who resigned from the forum and turn them into supervillianous traitors (some of which never lost thier mod position in the first place). I would suggest something but until the next chapter comes up i can't. Actually I can. Change the title, do you want it to be confused with the other one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Yeah I can see this going places. Like Altairs would have if the character who had a name super simillar to mine didn't have a god-power ring or Zex's if he gets off his ass and does something besides copying pasting from the last thread. ANYWAY cool' date=' it's better than... someone elses, who seems to turn anyone who resigned from the forum and turn them into supervillianous traitors (some of which never lost thier mod position in the first place). I would suggest something but until the next chapter comes up i can't. Actually I can. Change the title, do you want it to be confused with the other one?[/quote']Thank for comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Wow this fan fic is pretty awsome. I wonder what it would be like if I was in it(subtle question XD) I can't wait to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Wow this fan fic is pretty awsome. I wonder what it would be like if I was in it(subtle question XD) I can't wait to see more. You can be in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Wow this fan fic is pretty awsome. I wonder what it would be like if I was in it(subtle question XD) I can't wait to see more. You can be in it.*camly*Oh well thanks(on the inside is jumping up and down DX) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Wow this fan fic is pretty awsome. I wonder what it would be like if I was in it(subtle question XD) I can't wait to see more. You can be in it.*camly*Oh well thanks(on the inside is jumping up and down DX)lol, ok. glad you like it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 I'm liking it so far...Definitly better than...yeah. I wanna see how this'll match up to VK's. I think his is awesomesauce!9/10...what's the cloaking device for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I'm liking it so far...Definitly better than...yeah. I wanna see how this'll match up to VK's. I think his is awesomesauce!9/10...what's the cloaking device for? It's a security system called the cloaking device because it efficiantly guards passwords, just like a cloaking device. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I'm liking it so far...Definitly better than...yeah. I wanna see how this'll match up to VK's. I think his is awesomesauce!9/10...what's the cloaking device for? It's a security system called the cloaking device because it efficiantly guards passwords' date=' just like a cloaking device.[/quote']Lol, i was about to say. I thought it hid Ycmaker's base or whatever. Hope i'm in it soon :P . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 Very interesting. I can see this becoming great, you spelt flaming "flamming" and you wrote "fing" I assume you mean "find" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 So, when do you plan to post the next chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 No clue. I started it but my parents made me get off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Cool story bro.Dangerous things can happen when ycm'ing. Can I make a cameo in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 No clue. I started it but my parents made me get off. Awww alright. Can't wait to read some more though =). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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