Sins Lead to Sorrow, and Vice-Versa...

[玄魔の王]

Sin Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare

DARK

Level: 12

[Fiend/Effect]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare" from your Deck. There can only be 1 "Sin" Monster face-up on the field. Other monsters you control cannot attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card, destroy this card. If this card battles an opponent's monster, send that monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to ikts ATK, without applying Damage Calculation.

ATK/ 0

DEF/ 0

 

So, what does everyone think?

[Dr. Cakey]

First, I <3 Yubel and I really like the concept. However...

 

All the Sin versions of Effect Monsters have weakened or no effects. So, here's my analysis:

 

"Other monsters you control cannot be attacked."

Did you mean to say "cannot attack"?

 

"If this card battles an opponent's monster, send that monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to ikts ATK, without applying Damage Calculation."

Battles? How about only when it attacks (sort of a reverse of the other two Yubels), and make it indestructible through battle. Then you used "send to Graveyard" instead of "destroy". There's a reason people use Phoenix Wing Wind Blast: it dodges cards like Stardust. By "sending to the Graveyard" instead of "destroying", you get all the advantages of destruction without any of the risks. That, and Yubel destroys anyway. Also, I don't believe you need to include the "applying" or capitalize "Damage Calculation".

 

Last but not least, Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare is a Fiend, not a Dragon. Same goes for Sin Yubel, I think.

 

I really do like it, though. Trust me.

[玄魔の王]

First' date=' I <3 Yubel and I really like the concept. However...

 

All the Sin versions of Effect Monsters have weakened or no effects. So, here's my analysis:

 

"Other monsters you control cannot be attacked."

[b']Did you mean to say "cannot attack"?[/b]

Yes, and I will fix this.

 

"If this card battles an opponent's monster, send that monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK, without applying Damage Calculation."

Battles? How about only when it attacks (sort of a reverse of the other two Yubels), and make it indestructible through battle. Then you used "send to Graveyard" instead of "destroy". There's a reason people use Phoenix Wing Wind Blast: it dodges cards like Stardust. By "sending to the Graveyard" instead of "destroying", you get all the advantages of destruction without any of the risks. That, and Yubel destroys anyway. Also, I don't believe you need to include the "applying" or capitalize "Damage Calculation".

 

I needed to shorten the effect, so that the real card wouldn't have print the size of lice.

 

Last but not least, Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare is a Fiend, not a Dragon. Same goes for Sin Yubel, I think. Sin Yubel? Never heard of it. But Dragon-Type was a typo. I'll fix it.

 

I really do like it, though. Trust me.

[Bringerofcake]

Judai would be saddened.

 

I however, am impressed.

Good show. I won't add any cards atm, as I don't know whether to make support for this, or another Sin.

[玄魔の王]

Judai would be saddened.

 

I however' date=' am impressed.

Good show. I won't add any cards atm, as I don't know whether to make support for this, or another Sin.

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Ironically, a piece of my fanfiction involves Paradox trying and failing to change Yubel into a Sin while she's in her Ultimate form.

 

This card was just a one-shot deal, separate from my sins for the above reason.