My First Three Cards, tell me what ya think

[RoxasReaper]

 

I just tested the card maker, my future cards will be better!

[Drawmaster Duelist]

Umm, some spelling mistake. But good for 1 star member. ^_^

[RoxasReaper]

Umm' date=' some spelling mistake. But good for 1 star member. ^_^

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Thanks, i try to improve everyday but this place has a tough crowd, its nice to get a compliment

[Xenogears]

Some OCG errors, Roxas pic needs background.

7/10, really good for a new member.

[RoxasReaper]

Some OCG errors' date=' Roxas pic needs background.

7/10, really good for a new member.

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thanks

[Aibara]

There are only a few OCG. I'll try to correct them. For ex.:

 

Cosmo Space- When this card is activated, all cards on the Field, that include "Cosmo" on their name gain 1000ATK. When this card is removed fron the Field. you lose 1000Life Points.

 

Roxas- When this card is succesfully Normal Summone to your side of the Field, you can add one "Sora", from your Deck to your Hand. Your Deck is ,then, shuffled.

 

Total Ground Zero- This card can only be activated, when your opponent summons a monster, with ATK higher than your Life Points. The Summoned monster is destroyed. Half the ATK of the destroyed monster, is applied as Direct Damage to your Life Points.

 

So, I think, this is the right OCG. So, you didn't have much errors. And my judgment:

Pic: 8/10 (Roxas need a background)

OCG: 7/10 (great for a new member)

Overall= [(7+8)/2]+1(because I love Kingdom Hearts)= 15/2+1= 7.5+1= 8.5

So, the Overall= 8.5/10! Well done! Maybe,I give you a high rate, but you're a new member. And these cards are very good. So, keep on improving.

"Keep on posting"- Johnnie Poster

[B3lly N3rd]

oo i like the idea cuz i love outer space..but i see no monsters with cosmo in their names so first card is somewhat useless unless you make a set roxas would be more of a warrior than a hero really i wouldnt know i dont watch the show

[RoxasReaper]

There are only a few OCG. I'll try to correct them. For ex.:

 

Cosmo Space- When this card is activated' date=' all cards on the Field, that include "Cosmo" on their name gain 1000ATK. When this card is removed fron the Field. you lose 1000Life Points.

 

Roxas- When this card is succesfully Normal Summone to your side of the Field, you can add one "Sora", from your Deck to your Hand. Your Deck is ,then, shuffled.

 

Total Ground Zero- This card can only be activated, when your opponent summons a monster, with ATK higher than your Life Points. The Summoned monster is destroyed. Half the ATK of the destroyed monster, is applied as Direct Damage to your Life Points.

 

So, I think, this is the right OCG. So, you didn't have much errors. And my judgment:

Pic: 8/10 (Roxas need a background)

OCG: 7/10 (great for a new member)

Overall= [(7+8)/2']+1(because I love Kingdom Hearts)= 15/2+1= 7.5+1= 8.5

So, the Overall= 8.5/10! Well done! Maybe,I give you a high rate, but you're a new member. And these cards are very good. So, keep on improving.

"Keep on posting"- Johnnie Poster

 

well on total ground zero its supposed to the damage goes to your opponents life points lol but ill let that slide, thanks man

[Dante Dimercurio]

oo i like the idea cuz i love outer space..but i see no monsters with cosmo in their names so first card is somewhat useless unless you make a set roxas would be more of a warrior than a hero really i wouldnt know i dont watch the show

 

And "Hero" is a fake type.

 

Total: 6/10. Nice.

[Phantom Roxas]

"Warrior" is more fighting than "Hero", especially since it's a real type.

 

People don't really look hard enough for Roxas pics and almost always use the same pic.

 

Total Ground Zero has to be the best card in this set.

 

Oh, and since the Spell Cards aren't Pop Culture cards, this thread belongs in this section.

[RoxasReaper]

"Warrior" is more fighting than "Hero"' date=' especially since it's a real type.

 

People don't really look hard enough for Roxas pics and almost always use the same pic.

 

Total Ground Zero has to be the best card in this set.

 

Oh, and since the Spell Cards aren't Pop Culture cards, this thread belongs in this section.

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so i did good is that what your saying?

[DARKPLANT RISING]

You have cards that are good in comparison to other cards newbies made. However,

 

1. The effects for the 1st and 2nd cards are unratable, you need to make the main cards for those.

2. The 3rd card is pretty good.

 

Since only 3rd card is ratable, 8/10

[:^)]

Moderately Good. I've seen better by 1 and 2 stars. 5/10

[RoxasReaper]

You have cards that are good in comparison to other cards newbies made. However' date='

 

1. The effects for the 1st and 2nd cards are unratable, you need to make the main cards for those.

2. The 3rd card is pretty good.

 

Since only 3rd card is ratable, 8/10

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my bad dude lol ill remember to make the followup cards for those for sure.

[Aibara]

There are only a few OCG. I'll try to correct them. For ex.:

 

Cosmo Space- When this card is activated' date=' all cards on the Field, that include "Cosmo" on their name gain 1000ATK. When this card is removed fron the Field. you lose 1000Life Points.

 

Roxas- When this card is succesfully Normal Summone to your side of the Field, you can add one "Sora", from your Deck to your Hand. Your Deck is ,then, shuffled.

 

Total Ground Zero- This card can only be activated, when your opponent summons a monster, with ATK higher than your Life Points. The Summoned monster is destroyed. Half the ATK of the destroyed monster, is applied as Direct Damage to your Life Points.

 

So, I think, this is the right OCG. So, you didn't have much errors. And my judgment:

Pic: 8/10 (Roxas need a background)

OCG: 7/10 (great for a new member)

Overall= [(7+8)/2']+1(because I love Kingdom Hearts)= 15/2+1= 7.5+1= 8.5

So, the Overall= 8.5/10! Well done! Maybe,I give you a high rate, but you're a new member. And these cards are very good. So, keep on improving.

"Keep on posting"- Johnnie Poster

 

well on total ground zero its supposed to the damage goes to your opponents life points lol but ill let that slide, thanks man

 

Oh... Sorry for the mistake! In fact the OCG remains the same. You just change "your Life Points"-->"your opponent's Life Points"

[RoxasReaper]

There are only a few OCG. I'll try to correct them. For ex.:

 

Cosmo Space- When this card is activated' date=' all cards on the Field, that include "Cosmo" on their name gain 1000ATK. When this card is removed fron the Field. you lose 1000Life Points.

 

Roxas- When this card is succesfully Normal Summone to your side of the Field, you can add one "Sora", from your Deck to your Hand. Your Deck is ,then, shuffled.

 

Total Ground Zero- This card can only be activated, when your opponent summons a monster, with ATK higher than your Life Points. The Summoned monster is destroyed. Half the ATK of the destroyed monster, is applied as Direct Damage to your Life Points.

 

So, I think, this is the right OCG. So, you didn't have much errors. And my judgment:

Pic: 8/10 (Roxas need a background)

OCG: 7/10 (great for a new member)

Overall= [(7+8)/2']+1(because I love Kingdom Hearts)= 15/2+1= 7.5+1= 8.5

So, the Overall= 8.5/10! Well done! Maybe,I give you a high rate, but you're a new member. And these cards are very good. So, keep on improving.

"Keep on posting"- Johnnie Poster

 

well on total ground zero its supposed to the damage goes to your opponents life points lol but ill let that slide, thanks man

 

Oh... Sorry for the mistake! In fact the OCG remains the same. You just change "your Life Points"-->"your opponent's Life Points"

 

bump just cause im board

[Xp11708]

Cool cards

rate u 8/10

 

I wish when u create a card u can make them into real cards.

P.S. I like the space idea (because i like space).

Check out my card at the any other cards section.