kardas4210 Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 The Sons of Makuta are finally here! Feel like owning these bad boys? You must master them in order to control them.Level: 8Attribute: FireType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: You can only summon this card by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, you can have your opponent flip all his monster's into Defense Position.Level: 8Attribute: WaterType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: This card can only be summond by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, this card can gain 500 Attack Points for each card in your hand.Level: 8Attribute: WaterType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: You can only summon this card by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field and inflict 500 points of damage for each monster destroyed.Level: 8Attribute: EarthType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: You can only summon this card by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, during your battle phase, you can attack your opponent directly, or you can destroy all of your opponent's monsters.Level: 8Attribute: EarthType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: This card can only be summond by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, you can use this Monster's Staff to absorb 1000 Life Points from your opponent and add it to your own.Level: 8Attribute: WindType: RahkshiATK: 3000DEF: 3000Lore: This card can only be summond by using the Spell Card Call of Darkness. Once per turn, you can use this monster's staff to cause your opponent to lose 500 life points for each card he/she draws. This effect will last for six turns.This card is used to summon Makuta-type or Rahkshi-type monsters to the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Fine,first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name.you made it like what for a reason ? the fake type or the Oped? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name.you made it like what for a reason ? the fake type or the Oped?Both. The reason: The movie pictures are not jpg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name.you made it like what for a reason ? the fake type or the Oped?Both. The reason: The movie pictures are not jpg. Ok fine besides the Opedness and the fake type there are ocg errors.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Destor Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like the fake-type, and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name.you made it like what for a reason ? the fake type or the Oped?Both. The reason: The movie pictures are not jpg. Ok fine besides the Opedness and the fake type there are ocg errors....Like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Fine' date='first of all it is OPed,If you are gonna make it 3000 atack and defence incress the level.Still dont like the fake type Rahkshi but whatever,maybe could you find a picture with out words? Bad ocg3 or 4 /10[/quote']First, I made them like that for a reason. Second, I can't find any pictures without words in it that has jpg in it's name.you made it like what for a reason ? the fake type or the Oped?Both. The reason: The movie pictures are not jpg. Ok fine besides the Opedness and the fake type there are ocg errors....Like... IDK, i know it is wrong but ask somone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like the fake-type' date=' and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!![/quote']I Did That For A Reason. They are very hard to beat in the Bionicle Video game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like the fake-type' date=' and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!![/quote']I Did That For A Reason. They are very hard to beat in the Bionicle Video game. children's video games are the same as children's card games !what is this world coming to ? my point is that just cause they are strong in a game does mean they have to be insanely strong in yugioh in my oppenion they could beat the god cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like the fake-type' date=' and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!![/quote']There man, they're fixed. Are You Happy? {:|I like the fake-type' date=' and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!![/quote']I Did That For A Reason. They are very hard to beat in the Bionicle Video game. children's video games are the same as children's card games !what is this world coming to ? my point is that just cause they are strong in a game does mean they have to be insanely strong in yugioh in my oppenion they could beat the god cards! Please. At least give me points for effort. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like the fake-type' date=' and making them level 6 is a good choice, but the picture has words in them (In Vorahk's case, however, it is all blurry) and these cards have extremly bad OCG. If I didn't like Bionicles i would give it a 1/10, But since i do, I have something to say. YOU HAVE DISGRACED THE NAME OF BIONICLES! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! -99999/10 Update: They are also OVERPOWERED!![/quote']There man, they're fixed. Are You Happy? {:| here is every probem i can find1.its not called info its lore2."Once per turn, you can use this Monster's Staff to absorb 1000 Life Points " 3. ocg erors4. if your gonna make them that strong make a requierment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Turahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn, you can change all face-up monsters your opponent controls to face-down Defense Position. Reason it's OP'd: It's a full field Book of Moon, which stops effects, weakens, and stuff. Sure it's not chainable, but it's still OP'd. Kurahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". This card gains 500 ATK for each card in your hand. Reason it's OP'd: 5000 beater much? Guurahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed by this effect. Reason it's OP'd: It's like using Raigeki with average burn every turn. Need I say more? Panrahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. Reason it's OP'd: Direct attack, Raigeki. ... Vorahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn, you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent and increase your Life Points by 1000. Reason it's OP'd: Well, it's not OP'd as the rest but it still creates a 2000 LP difference without cost. Lehrak: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Each time your opponent draws a card, they lose 500 Life Points. This effect lasts for 6 turns. Reason it's OP'd: Well... It's not, actually. >___> Overall a horrible set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Ya^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Turahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn' date=' you can change all face-up monsters your opponent controls to face-down Defense Position. Reason it's OP'd: It's a full field Book of Moon, which stops effects, weakens, and stuff. Sure it's not chainable, but it's still OP'd. Kurahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". This card gains 500 ATK for each card in your hand. Reason it's OP'd: 5000 beater much? Guurahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed by this effect. Reason it's OP'd: It's like using Raigeki with average burn every turn. Need I say more? Panrahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. Reason it's OP'd: Direct attack, Raigeki. ... Vorahk: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Once per turn, you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent and increase your Life Points by 1000. Reason it's OP'd: Well, it's not OP'd as the rest but it still creates a 2000 LP difference without cost. Lehrak: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Call of Darkness". Each time your opponent draws a card, they lose 500 Life Points. This effect lasts for 6 turns. Reason it's OP'd: Well... It's not, actually. >___> Overall a horrible set.[/quote']What would you know about Bionicle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 [large amount of text]What would you know about Bionicle? I don't need to know anything about Bionicle.I just need to know about Yugioh and what makes a card OP'd and UP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 [large amount of text]What would you know about Bionicle? I don't need to know anything about Bionicle.I just need to know about Yugioh and what makes a card OP'd and UP'd.Listen To Me. This Is Just A Prototype, OK? I MIGHT Make A Better Set Soon. P.S. You need to know about Bionicle to know how to comment on cards about them. SO....comment on here once you learn about Bionicle. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Destor Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Good, You fixed it. That is MUCH better. NOW i would give it a 8/10. All you have to fix is to put the effects IN the card, fix the OCG, and, maybe, please make a "Call Of Darkness" card. Good Job fixing it! Just a few more tweaks and they will be perfect!P.S. I really like Bionicles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 [large amount of text]What would you know about Bionicle? I don't need to know anything about Bionicle.I just need to know about Yugioh and what makes a card OP'd and UP'd.Listen To Me. This Is Just A Prototype' date=' OK? I MIGHT Make A Better Set Soon. P.S. You need to know about Bionicle to know how to comment on cards about them. SO....comment on here once you learn about Bionicle. :P[/quote'] This is a YU-GI-OH card maker not a bionicle card maker,take a chill pill, your a new member and you got negitive 4 reps,a bunch of people are reporting you. you dont need to know any thing about bionicle ,you need to know about yugioh card witch you seem to know nothing about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kardas4210 Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Good' date=' You fixed it. That is MUCH better. NOW i would give it a 8/10. All you have to fix is to put the effects IN the card, fix the OCG, and, maybe, please make a "Call Of Darkness" card. Good Job fixing it! Just a few more tweaks and they will be perfect!P.S. I really like Bionicles[/quote']I can't put the effects in the card, but I can make a call of darkness card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omenhiikoyashi Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Okay first off this set... sucks plain and simple. all of them are way OP'ed for a 3000, if anything make them a little harder so summon, you have a lot of OCG errors and some big issues with people giving you some real critisism, might want to tone it down a little before somebody reports ya or something cause everybody gets the same type of critisism on our hard work and sheet but we all deal with it cause it makes us better card makers. So i'm going to point out some big factors in these cards for you to see/read Turahk: it should be switch to Defence Position. atleastKarahk: can gain a lot of power at no cost which makes him really OP'edGuurahk: it's level 6 and in one turn you can deal atleast 5500 points of damage for nothing OP'ed? i think soPanrahk: also level 6 a direct attacker or a raigeki at no cost also OP'edVorahk: it's effect is OP'ed and the OCG is really badLehrak: if anything get rid of the 6 turns B.S. and have it deal 500 damage when the opponent draws outside of their draw phase.OH AND THEIR ALL FAKE TYPES!!! There CRITISISM take it into accout to help you out not to make you feel bad so deal with it all instead of getting mad at everybody for it other than that I can even see the hard work you put into these but your the one who posted them up for all of us to see and rate and give our two cents on them so if anything don't blame us for the ratings but blame yourself for putting yourself into that type of situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Okay first off this set... sucks plain and simple. all of them are way OP'ed for a 3000' date=' if anything make them a little harder so summon, you have a lot of OCG errors and some big issues with people giving you some real critisism, might want to tone it down a little before somebody reports ya or something cause everybody gets the same type of critisism on our hard work and s*** but we all deal with it cause it makes us better card makers. So i'm going to point out some big factors in these cards for you to see/read Turahk: it should be switch to Defence Position. atleastKarahk: can gain a lot of power at no cost which makes him really OP'edGuurahk: it's level 6 and in one turn you can deal atleast 5500 points of damage for nothing OP'ed? i think soPanrahk: also level 6 a direct attacker or a raigeki at no cost also OP'edVorahk: it's effect is OP'ed and the OCG is really badLehrak: if anything get rid of the 6 turns B.S. and have it deal 500 damage when the opponent draws outside of their draw phase.OH AND THEIR ALL FAKE TYPES!!! There CRITISISM take it into accout to help you out not to make you feel bad so deal with it all instead of getting mad at everybody for it other than that I can even see the hard work you put into these but your the one who posted them up for all of us to see and rate and give our two cents on them so if anything don't blame us for the ratings but blame yourself for putting yourself into that type of situation.[/quote'] Thank you for agreeing with me, he reported me just cause i told him that he used a fake type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 *facepalm*well...im not going to repeat previous posters since by now you should know that your cards are overpowered bla bla bla....i like bionicles but i think instead of making them have 3000 ATK you should make them four stars and make them about 1700-1900 because in Bionicles i believe these guy arent the strongest. A 3000 ATK monster should be like your "leader" card (ex-Great Shogun Shien to the Six Samurai, or Blue-Eyes White Dragon to the Blue-Eyes cards, etc) also you have fake types that some how everyone gets mad over (i dont but everyone else does) overall-4.5/10 (for the effort)the cards need work but i assume you know that already...also try to listen to the advice of others because that helps you get better and know what to do etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Destor Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Hey, Guys who are getting mad at him for making a fake type, LAY OFF! FAKE TYPES ARE AWESOME, AND JUST AS GOOD AS NORMAL TYPES! THE ONLY REASON YOU HATE FAKE TYPES IS PROBABLY BECAUSE YOU CAN'T MAKE FAKE TYPES! AND YES, SOME FAKE TYPES ARE STUPID, BUT THESE ARE AWESOME! BTW, a few errors on the call of darkness card. Either make it a field card and make it like the card in this link: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Pyramid_of_Light , or make them ritual monsters, and the call of darkness a ritual spell card! Yes, it is that simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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