To any one who like fairies...

[MarshyK-XS]

my latest card....

 

[spoiler=lore]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This car can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Fairy-Type monsters from your Graveyard from play. when this card is Special Summoned, each player must draws 3 cards. When this card attacks, discard 1 card. When a card is sent from yuor hand to the Graveyard by this effect, inflict 800 Life Points of damage to your opponent. When a monster you control is a selected Attack target, you can Tribute this card to destroy the attacking monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by it's own effect, each player must draw 1 card. While this card is in the Graveyard you can return this card to your hand. If this card is returned to your hand from the Graveyard, by discarding 2 cards Special Summon this card.

 

 

 

~MK

 

EDIT having problems wiv the card maker real card up in a minute

[FSBolthof]

HOW ABOUT WAY TOO OP'ed

5/10

[Elementalist111]

Some minor spelling errors, also, the fact it can be Special Summoned two different ways is kind of contradicting.

Other than that, it looks fine

8/10

[MarshyK-XS]

thanks

 

@ guy who posted first - how is it oped your opponent draws 3 cards :? Plus it is a level 10 so it is allowd to be Oped

 

~MK

[wero-vasto]

Fix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Fairy-Type monsters from your Graveyard from play or by it's own effect. When this card is Special Summoned, each player must draw 3 cards. When this card declares an attack, discard 1 card. When a card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard by this effect, inflict 800 Life Points of damage to your opponent. When a monster you control is a selected as an attack target, you can Tribute this card to destroy the attacking monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by it's own effect, each player must draw 1 card. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can add it to your hand. If this card is returned to your hand from the Graveyard, by discarding 2 cards Special Summon it.

 

 

 

Do you want to know why OPed? .... you can add it to your hand without a cost....

 

 

7/10

[MarshyK-XS]

yh but you have to discard 2 to special summon it again

 

~Mk

[wero-vasto]

or you can just Tribute other 3 Fairy-Type monsters....

then again, when you add it to your hand, it will be so easy to discard 2 cards from your hand.... I'll make it that you add it to your hand instead of conducting your Draw Phase....

[MarshyK-XS]

clever good idea. I can see where that needs improving but your opponent does draw upto / 5 cards

 

~MK

[wero-vasto]

you too! :3

[Hyenn]

FIX:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summoned this card by removing 3 Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, each player must draw 3 cards. When this card declares an attack, discard 1 card. When a card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard by this effect, inflict 800 Life Points of damage to your opponent. When a monster you control is a selected as an attack target, you can Tribute this card to destroy the attacking monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by it's own effect, each player must draw 1 card. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can add it to your hand. If this card is returned to your hand from the Graveyard, you can discard 2 cards to Special Summon it.

I think this fits Yugioh OCG, better.

Also I think you should make so that the opponent draws 1/2 cards when it is summoned instead of both of you 3, or else it is OP. and maybe you can then reduce the number of discarded cards needed to SP summon it to 1.

The enemy may draw up to 4 cards but so do you, and the one on turn when drawing 3 cards is you and after you already got out a strong monster with SP summon, you get 3 cards, which allows you to easily reduce your opponent's LP to 0 in a good deck with little luck.

[The Great Wolf Sif]

The Drawing part is just asking to be obliterated.

 

misspellings OCG yah...other than that 5/10

[ragnarok1945]

interesting to see this has no LP gaining effects like Fairies should have

 

you said it can only be special summoned ONE way at the beginning of the text, now at the end you want to be summoned another way? That's confusing

 

7/10

[Guest JoshIcy]

When, While, When, While, When, While... Geezus.

Make up your mind and have the card flow, the idea behind this card is terrible ._."

 

@Ragnarok: My Union Fairies, the Counter Fairy Decktype etc all don't have LP Gaining effects in their deck. The only one currently that does is Parshaths and Judgment Fairies; which are hardly played.