upsman1023 Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 OHHHHH Yea Please do Poll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Nice drawing. You should've done it on printer paper; the stuff without the lines. You should make a background for it. Could you please post the lore? Its kinda hard to read. I like this card. It is OP'd, like a /Assault Mode should be (the only one I have right now is Hyperpsychic Blaster). 9/10 cuz it is a drawing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elementalist111 Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 I like the drawing. Its better than anything I can draw =Pminor ocg errors, such as capitalizationlike t3ra said, op'd, but hard to summon8.5/10 (the drawing is pretty awesome, but it is hard to see when its on folder paper. It looks like something you drew when you got bored) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Not to take the let your tyres down abit but isnt your effect exactly the same as the standard Synchro Black Rose Dragon? Also shouldnt you have on the end of the effect: When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard. I do like to see when people draw there own pics so thumbs up for that, encourage talent and effort when I see it!! You also got the 500 ATK/DEF point increase bit right so nice save with that, but you need to improve the effect of Balck Rose Dragon to make it an Assault Mode for example something like:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except woth "Assault Mode Activate". When this card is Special Summoned to the field you can destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change all Defence Position monster your opponent controls to face-up Attack Position, and reduce there ATK to 0 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard.Hope this helps player 7.5/10 good try, can be improved but a like the effort keep it up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyenn Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Nicely done, maybe a bit OP but I guess since it is Assault Mode it should be fine, also I think every AM can summon synchro version when destroyed so shouldn't this one, too?The drawing is nice, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upsman1023 Posted March 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 thats the revised version of its effect i forgot the part about summoning black rose but its now added This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with its own effect or "Assault Mode Activate. When this card is summoned you can destroy all cards on the field, if this card is destroyed by this effect you can summon it again during your opponents next standby phase. You can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the positions of all monsters in your opponents control to face-up Attack Position, and reduce their ATK to 0 until the end phase of you opponents next turn. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can special summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your graveyard. there it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Sync BRD, nuke field, chain ASM, SS this.It's actually pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upsman1023 Posted March 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 abbatonstrikes you cant really say that the effect is incorrect because i got it off my stardust dragon/assault mode.hay thanks for pointing out about the summoning the new Black Rose thing so i fixed it and heres its effect. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with its own effect or "Assault Mode Activate. When this card is summoned you can destroy all cards on the field, if this card is destroyed by this effect you can summon it again during your opponents next standby phase. You can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the positions of all monsters in your opponents control to face-up Attack Position, and reduce their ATK to 0 until the end phase of you opponents next turn. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can special summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 This should be a better effect fittable for an Assault Mode monster ^^ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". When this card is Summoned you can destroy all other cards on the field. You can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the battle positions of all monsters in your opponent side of the field to face-up Attack Position, and reduce their ATK to 0 until the End Phase of you opponent's next turn. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard. That would makes this card worthy of an Assault Mode ^^ why? let's take Stardust as an example: As Synchro it can only negate the effect of cards that destroy and destroy them... in Assault Mode it can negate any card and destroy it..... and in Majestic it can negate any card and destroy the entire opponent's side of the field.... you see what I mean? ^^ The effect need to be sorta like that to make the Majestic the most powerful D: Lol BTW the draw is amazing ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 The only thing I want to remark is that your drawing is a standard Black Rose Dragon. Assault Modes usually have a sort of armor in their chest or something. Other than that it's very good. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Im just wondering what part of the effect did I say was wrong? I meant you just need to add one more line that was all, I never said what you did was incorrect. If you meant the card effect was I wrong in saying that your first attempt it was exactly the same effect as the BRD?! Im liking the new improved effect thanks for taking my advice under consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doomguy500 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 WoW. this is actually a great card, a great picture, and no real insane abilities. I really like this. I can think of quite a few ways to make this card its own deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Great, through the lines are not so good. Pretty good drawing. Anyways, the effect is pretty OP'ed, as through it doesn't rebirth Black Rose, its effect doesn't allow your opponent an Direct Attack. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Nice photograph of your school notepad. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Nice photograph of your school notepad. :/ This, but me likey... It is quite useful... I usually draw on Paint... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 sweet man!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 How many times have I seen a BRD/AM?Alot.The pic isn't Realistic - could you post a Lore, because I am having a hard time squinting my eyes to read it. =.= >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Post your effect in the top of this thread. That would help people a lot I see a loop hole in this card: When this card is summoned you can destroy all cards on the field, if this card is destroyed by this effect you can summon it again during your opponents next standby phase....When this card on the field is destroyed, you can special summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your graveyard. So when this card wipe the field you can Special Summon BRD because this card is also "destroyed". Then when it is Special Summoned again due to its own effect you can again wipe the field because it is "summoned"... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 unless you drew the pic yourself, it's not very impressive glad to see you wrote out the lore, was REALLY hard to read it summoned should be Summoned standby phase should be Standby Phase, minor capitalization errors like that, nothing big it should be fine by Assault Mode standards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upsman1023 Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 jack781217 thaanks for that little tidbit that is a good point and i suppose thats why it is nota card yet lol! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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