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"Chaos-End Master" + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters

When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard with 1600 or less ATK. By removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard, your opponent cannot play or set any Spell or Trap Cards until the End Phase of your next turn. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon that monster to your side of the field.[/align]

 

This beautiful piece of art was done by ~jadenkaiba.

And yeah, I'm the one who requested for this artwork.

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The effect is slightly different from "Chaos End Master" but that is a good thing. But you know that already I hope. Great card Xander! Love it! And the art is just beautiful.

 

(There should be a " after Chaos End Master) It is not that important but then it would be absolutely perfect.

 

9.99/10

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~ P O L A R I S ~ Newbie

~ P O L A R I S ~

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I'M PUTTING THIS EVALUATION IN A SPOILER SO ONLY THE OFFICIAL POSTER CAN SEE IT. So, why am I not PMing this instead? Because I'm also in it for the post count and am fine with everyone else seeing it if they're curious or something for whatever reason about anything. I dunno.

 

[spoiler=NAME AND PICTURE]

IT'S LIKE DESTINY END DRAGOON BUT CHAOS END DRAGOON BECAUSE WE RAMMED CHAOS-END MASTER AND DESTINY END DRAGOON TOGETHER! I dunno, maybe hyphenate Chaos-End just for the synergy with Master, in spit of the lack of a hyphen on the other Dragoon? Your choice, kinda trivial KINDA.

 

Picture serves its purpose well, DESPITE ITS COMPOSITION INCLUDING THE USE OF PENCIL CRAYONS WHICH MULTI-WHATEVERUNITOFMONEYKONAMIHASNAIRE CORPORATIONS TEND TO NEGLECT IN FAVOUR OF DUDE SICK GFX. I'm just sayin'.

 

 

[spoiler=BALANCE]

Removing from play cards from your Graveyard's a cost Konami heavily overrates, so be careful with them. Although having benefits outweigh these costs is in the spirit of realism, you can keep the realism as well as have effects with these costs be a little more balanced. Now, this generates free advantage right off the bat, nets free one-sided Cold Waves with no cost of card advantage whatsoever which has its cost pre-fulfilled by the Synchro material, AND has a HEAVILY upgraded Goyo Guardian effect, in that you can attack with the monster you took. They stack for too much benefit, even considering the Summoning condition which isn't even that hard to fulfill. Have the Cold Wave effect be two-sided and put some sort of restriction on what you can Special Summon with the Goyo Guardian effect/add a cost to it/put some form of handicap on the Special Summoned monster, or any combination of those.

 

 

 

[spoiler=OCG]

-This's a little obscure and understandable for people to trip up on, but for Ignition Costs, "By _________, __________" is early GX-era. "You can ________, to __________" would be current.

 

-Stats before location. You don't have a selection of Graveyards with 1600 or less ATK to pick from, you have a selection of monsters. You built the card around Chaos-End Master, might as well reference its OCG. "1 monster from your Graveyard with 1600 or less ATK" = "1 monster with 1600 or less ATK from your Graveyard."

 

-"set" = "Set", caps. A little surprised at "play" in place of "activate", but looking at a recent reprint of Cold Wave, that does appear to be correct. ;J

 

 

[spoiler=ORIGINALITY]

IT'S NOT ORIGINAL! SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

[spoiler=THE MOST IMPORTANT PART]

FOUR CHARACTERS IN THE SET ID PREFIX, NOT FIVE. BLUNDERRRRRRRRRRR. SUFFIX CONTAINS "EN" WITH 3 MORE CHARACTERS, NOT FOUR CHARACTERS.

 

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