First cards...

[Fq2201]

[PickAx]

Awesome. very creative.nice work.

[orangketan]

I don't find any errors here but spell card should be Spell Card* same goes as Trap Cards

good picture and idea but Joker's effect is a little simple, make it more complicated

good job [7.8/10]

[Hyenn]

It should be: it cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap cards. I think.

Anyway for your first cards they are really good. You might want to try and make a bit more creative/cimplicated effects later on.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

OCG FIX:

 

This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

 

Not bad for your first card.

Picture is a tad realistic for this section though. i would try and find an alternate picture.

 

Very good job for your first card though.

[Hyenn]

Your OCG fix is way to off Speiroth_the_Legend, that card is affacted by Trap cards, it just cannot be destroyed by them. Those are totally different things.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

oh, i misread it.

 

here's the correct one then.

 

OCG:

 

This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed as a reuslt of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can select 1 Spell Card in your Deck and add it to your hand.

[ragnarok1945]

2nd card you should put in pop culture

 

1st card effect is balanced out, just on the dull end, give it an effect while it's on the field and you'll be fine

 

8/10

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

ok i didnt see the first card. ill rate it now.

 

OCG is fine and the picture is more YGO like.

a little simple but it works nicely.

well done

 

8.8/10