New Lightsworn Monster!

[Canadian]

 

Armite, Lightsworn Wolf

 

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Lore: If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, during your first Main Phase, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to draw 1 card. If you activate this effect, you cannot declare an attack this turn. During each of your End Phases, send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Helpful criticism is welcomed.

[White Hollow]

I think ist underpowered.....sending too many cards to the grave...

nice try 8/10

[CARLCGL]

wow at last a leveled 3 spellcaster tuner, i need it to my deck lol

 

do you know all the lightsworn have the same background?

[psychicplayer]

it could be a little more powerful, and it's good that its a tuner (they needed one). Hope you make a Synchro! One thing though, I think i saw other wolf lightsworns though.

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

well the draw power is compensated by its milling effect

 

but unfortunately you're still losing too many cards to the graveyard this way, so in that aspect I feel it's on the UPed end

 

7/10

[Dr. Cakey]

well the draw power is compensated by its milling effect

 

but unfortunately you're still losing too many cards to the graveyard this way' date=' so in that aspect I feel it's on the UPed end

 

7/10

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I hope you were being sarcastic. Or rather, I wish. You can thin your deck by 4 cards every turn, and one of those is an extra draw!

 

Aside from the fact that we don't need any more Lightsworn cards (except for the special Lightsworn Konami keeps in a secret vault: Seth, Lightsworn Rapist), I guess I'll make this suggestion: give it extremely low ATK and DEF (like in the 400-800 range) to compensate for its incredible effect. Seriously, it's a little like Garoth.

On an aesthetic note, I don't think you should call it 'Lightsworn Wolf'. This is going to sound really petty, but since there is already 'Wulf' (who is a wolf), the identical sounds are kind of...I don't know, jarring. Maybe, Armite, Lightswon Fuzzy-Wuzzy Puppy?

[Canadian]

Thanks for your criticism guys.

 

I know all lightsworns have the same backing, but I can't do anything to put the blue diamond in it.

 

Also, I wanted to change it to bear, but I didn't think of it at the time (lol).

 

One more thing: If you have multiples of it on the field you get 1-3 extra draws instead of this 1 alone. I don't think its underpowered, and the fact its a tuner makes it all the better.

[byak]

I think ist underpowered.....sending too many cards to the grave...

nice try 8/10

 

well the draw power is compensated by its milling effect

 

but unfortunately you're still losing too many cards to the graveyard this way' date=' so in that aspect I feel it's on the UPed end

 

7/10

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lol u guys

 

Milling is good. >__>

 

If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can draw 1 card from your Deck.

 

If the player would be locked down, or in a situation where they can't attack, that's probably the only reason someone would use the other effect.

This effect, sir, is broken.

This monster can be searched with Charge, and brought back with Lumina.

I know they're limited but still.

It turns Lumina into a +0 Tempest/Goyo/Brionac.

It turns Synchros into +0s and that is bad for the game.