DPTD Comments needed D:

[wero-vasto]

[align=center] After a long (not that long xD) chat with QoBH and Tom xD

I decided to post this card and see what happens =O

 

 

 

Lore:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select 3 DARK Monsters from your Deck, have your opponent pick one of them at random, and add it to your hand. Return the remaining cards to your Deck. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 DARK Monster in your Graveyard instead. Once per turn, you can select 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard and equip it to this card. You can send a monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

 

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[Icy God]

Great OCG, I didn't find any errors. The picture is epic.

 

9.6

[Adogadog8]

Well now obviously its a JD rip off, but it's a little OPED, I mean with foolish burial this card can be summoned easily as long as it's near the top of your Deck, and then it had a ton of effects to equip cards to destroy your opponent's monsters and then add more DARK's to your hand.

8/10

[Cloister]

It is OPed. I don't know how to make it balanced though. Lol.

Wont rate sorry. Wish I knew how to balance it. Good that it follows the equip effect that PTD has.

[ragnarok1945]

after returning the other 3 cards to your deck, you should have added "Then shuffle your Deck"

 

as always, the pic and OCG are just fine

 

though for the most part it reminds me of a weaker form of Judgment Dragon, which is too Oped anyway, so I'll let this go

 

9/10

[wero-vasto]

Actually "shuffle your Deck" is not necessary to write =/ everyone knows that after searching in a Deck is necessary shuffle it <_<

Thanks everyone! ^^ NP Tom ;D and well, I maybe add something to balanced it a little O:

[Darj]

This card is OP'ed. If you keep your Graveyard full of DARKs, this card will be virtually indestructible, and with its searching effect, doing so won't be a hard task.

 

The equipping effect is completely unnecessary, because it gains no benefit from being equipped except for destroying a card; in other words, the last two effects are virtually a "Once per turn, destroy 1 card your opponent controls" unless you get the chance of using the equip with a card effect, but that would be too situational.

 

Well, at least it doesn't have insane ATK and as a DARK Machine it would work well with the unsupported "Allies of Justice", or with Cyberdarks.

 

And if you want to know which changes you can do, you could follow the effect of the original "Power Tool Dragon" and mix the last 3 effects in:

"Once per turn, you can select 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard and equip it to this card. You can send a monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this card would be destroyed, the monster equipped is destroyed instead."

With this effect, you will either protect your monster OR destroy 1 card.

[wero-vasto]

Actually you could decide to not use the last effect :3

then wait for other 2 turns :3 then you would have 3 monsters equipped to it :3 and you can just blow them and 3 opponent's cards :3...

yes is OPed i know <_< thanks!:3

[Jazin Kay]

I have to give unique props here.

 

That image has been sitting on my HD for almost a year now and I totally did NOT see this as an epic use for what you have here.

 

Mind = blown.

[Black★Star]

10/10

[RedRaptor10]

good and balanced card. 9/10

 

also, is there something wrong with the card maker to make that text so small? there's a lot of open room under it.