Relinquished Servant PLUS NEW NEW NEW lv 3 and lower support ULTIMATE GEL BEAST

[TTR~]

Picture credit to JazinKay

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Relinquished" from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card attacks, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the selected monster until the End Phase.

 

all pic credit to JazinKay

this can be used to get rid of Relinquished and another monster

 

 

NEW NEW NEW !!

[byak]

I actually like this a bit.

Need to add the nomi text, but whatever.

[TTR~]

I actually like this a bit.

Need to add the nomi text' date=' but whatever.

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holy crap, you actually liike one of my cards

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new card

[byak]

Yeah, fixed OCG:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Relinquished" from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card attacks, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the selected monster until the End Phase.

[TTR~]

Yeah' date=' fixed OCG:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Relinquished" from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card attacks, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the selected monster until the End Phase.

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alright i'll fix

[Yang Xiao-Long]

So the servant has higher DEF than the master? hmm....

 

But anyway, good concept, awesome pics. Effects look good.

 

OCG looks good, Byak got the fixes already.

 

Good cards. I would put them in a deck any day.

[TTR~]

So the servant has higher DEF than the master? hmm....

 

But anyway' date=' good concept, awesome pics. Effects look good.

 

OCG looks good, Byak got the fixes already.

 

Good cards. I would put them in a deck any day.

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yup, the servant has become the master

[SmallieBigs]

Picture credit to JazinKay

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Relinquished" from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card attacks' date=' select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the selected monster until the End Phase.

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all pic credit to JazinKay

this can be used to get rid of Relinquished and another monster

I would tech the the third one, no run it in 2 or 3s in any deck. Seems slightly broken. Card number 2 is cool it can make my Hunter Dragon a 2700 attack monster :D. The first one, it's interesting, very interesting. 9/10

[TTR~]

bump

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[Sp1at]

I find Relinquished's Servant OPed. I mean you take no damage and he be destroyed. I won't mind a "As long as this card remains face-up on the field "Relinquished" cannot be destroyed by battle. Increase "Relinquished's" ATK and DEF by 200x the equipped monsters card Level." Then add a drawback.

 

Now that is what I call a support for Relinquished.

 

Anyway I didn't read the others thinking they'll be OPed to.

 

7/10 Its still a nice card though.

[SmallieBigs]

I find Relinquished's Servant OPed. I mean you take no damage and he be destroyed. I won't mind a "As long as this card remains face-up on the field "Relinquished" cannot be destroyed by battle. Increase "Relinquished's" ATK and DEF by 200x the equipped monsters card Level." Then add a drawback.

 

Now that is what I call a support for Relinquished.

 

Anyway I didn't read the others thinking they'll be OPed to.

 

7/10 Its still a nice card though.

Lol. That would make it terrible. You can still destroy these cards by effect...

 

The next two I like them. Drawing 1 extra card is always good, the last one is interesting equip it to a Level 3 for it to gain 1000. Still liking it a lot...

[TTR~]

new card

[Sp1at]

I find Relinquished's Servant OPed. I mean you take no damage and he be destroyed. I won't mind a "As long as this card remains face-up on the field "Relinquished" cannot be destroyed by battle. Increase "Relinquished's" ATK and DEF by 200x the equipped monsters card Level." Then add a drawback.

 

Now that is what I call a support for Relinquished.

 

Anyway I didn't read the others thinking they'll be OPed to.

 

7/10 Its still a nice card though.

Lol. That would make it terrible. You can still destroy these cards by effect...

 

The next two I like them. Drawing 1 extra card is always good' date=' the last one is interesting equip it to a Level 3 for it to gain 1000. Still liking it a lot...

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I was just making a suggestion. And besides it is a little OPed. And it needs is a small drawback like: "This card must pay 100 Life Points to declare an attack." I mean thats not that bad.

[pluemer]

Trap Treasure Chest is OPed. if ur opponent gained 3000 lp instead of just 600, maybe it would be fairer

[Sp1at]

Trap Treasure Chest is OPed. if ur opponent gained 3000 lp instead of just 600' date=' maybe it would be fairer

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Are you crazy!!!!!!!

 

That card is perfectly fine.

[Darj]

So the servant has higher DEF than the master? hmm....

 

But anyway' date=' good concept, awesome pics. Effects look good.

 

OCG looks good, Byak got the fixes already.

 

Good cards. I would put them in a deck any day.

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yup, the servant has become the master

 

Then why is she called "Servant"? Such name is not appropriate for her. You could change it for... "Summoner", "Master", "Incarnate",etc.

 

Instead of making a second "Soul Absorbing Dimension", why don't you simply update your 1st "Soul Absorbing Dimension"? No one will use the 1st dimension anyways, as it's outclassed by the 2nd.

 

Why do you focus in Level 3 monsters? I would like to know what (or which monsters) do you have in mind.

[TTR~]

So the servant has higher DEF than the master? hmm....

 

But anyway' date=' good concept, awesome pics. Effects look good.

 

OCG looks good, Byak got the fixes already.

 

Good cards. I would put them in a deck any day.

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yup, the servant has become the master

 

Then why is she called "Servant"? Such name is not appropriate for her. You could change it for... "Summoner", "Master", "Incarnate",etc.

 

Instead of making a second "Soul Absorbing Dimension", why don't you simply update your 1st "Soul Absorbing Dimension"? No one will use the 1st dimension anyways, as it's outclassed by the 2nd.

 

Why do you focus in Level 3 monsters? I would like to know what (or which monsters) do you have in mind.

there are two skyscraper cards, skryscaper and skyscraper 2

that increases teh chance of drawing a field spell if you have 3 4 each

i'm focussing on lv3 monsters cuz there isn't enough support 4 them

[Darj]

Your arguments are true, but note that each Skyscraper have a completely different effect, unlike your absorbing dimensions. Trust me, with an upgraded version available, no one would run the Absorbing Dimension #1.

And, if I wanted to increase my chances of drawing a Field Spell, I would use "Terraforming" or "Demise of the Land".

 

Do you know what would work amazingly? Change one of your fields to Continuous Spell (preferably the Dimension #1), that way it will stack with the Dimension #2 and boost the ATK of a Level 3 monster by 2000.

[ragnarok1945]

for Soul Absorbing Dimension, this is going be hell if your opponent uses Injection Fairy Lily against you

 

change may to can

 

Interesting to see the Relinquished Servant actually has more def power than Relinquished itself

 

for Trap Treasure Chest, you should have said UP TO 2 monsters on the field

 

as for Gel Beast, the 2nd sentence should be This card cannot be SPECIAL SUMMONED except.......

 

personally given that effect for Gel Beast, I had hoped it'd be stronger than just lv1, and it could get OPed when combined with Soul Absorbing Dimension

 

7/10