Hollow Ichigo! Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter I]You know the story of my adventures but Im here to tell you everything your about to read is the truth. So if your a fellow shinobi or a rouge ninja I dont care just know this is scary so scary that well while writing this I peed my pants. Now what was I saying oh yeah so I had to go to the market to get some new undies and ..... well thats a story for another day. [spoiler=Chapter II]So this morning was like any other morning. Got out of bed, went pee, ate some ramen, well you know. Out of know where popped Kakashi sensei, thinking to myself what the heck. "Naruto get dressed lets go!" roared Kakashi "Whats your problem uh kinda eating here." Now yelling "Naruto sasuke is at the gate!" This is were a little yellow surprised appeared in my pants. "Uh...Er...Um...HOLY sheet!" "Yea so get dressed and go to your office" You see Im Hokage now so I have an office its pretty cool there are books and pictures and drawings and scrolls and....oh sorry anyway, I went to my office like Kakashi said. "B-Bring him in" I said nervously "Yes my lord." "S-S-Sasuke." "What I only came back 'cause I wanted to see if a jackass like you was really Hokage." (takes out sword and preps chidori) "Your reign was short Naruto, tell Orochimaru I said Hi." Thats were I blacked out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 .....You're kidding, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 ^MI's pardoned for having a point. Hardly "chapters", and your grammar is atrocious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Seeing as you don't get the point...... Chapters are supposed to be long. Jam your Chapter 1 and 2 together would only make HALF the usual length of chapters. I've never seen chapters this short, not even from Starly and those other bad Fanfic Writers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Seeing as you don't get the point...... Chapters are supposed to be long. Jam your Chapter 1 and 2 together would only make HALF the usual length of chapters. I've never seen chapters this short' date=' not even from Starly and those other bad Fanfic Writers.[/quote'] He's got a point. You're gonna want somewhere between 4-5 pages on Microsoft Word (or Open Office) at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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