Jump to content

Yankeefan's Card of the day Reviews


Yankee

Recommended Posts

  • Replies 921
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Holy Saint- Augusta

HolyknightAugusta.jpg

 

card effect:This card's effect can be activated during the damage step of either player's turn. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the original ATK and DEF of the monster that designated this card as an attack target. If a monster battling this card is destroyed as a result of battle,inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to 1/3 the total ATK of the destroyed monster.This card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage calculations is applied normally)

 

first time trying out how about you rate mines.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

[align=center]createcard-3php-2.jpg

 

Ancient Gear Berserker

------------------------------------

During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase it's ATK by 200 points. The controller of this card must attack with this card if possible.

 

Review it please.

[/align]

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Well, I have decided to try to review a card, seeing as nobody has taken this over yet >_>

 

 

Ancient Gear Berserker by Card Maker Shinigami

createcard-3php-2.jpg

 

Ah yes, another card by Shini. This is gonna be good ^_^

Now, this card was made for a contest, and I think it was put together very well, it just needs some fixes here and there. Lets get to this, shall we?

 

Well, this cards effect starts out with a bang. Right away you know it does peircing damage. Congrats. Here is somthing you may not like, it's a 1500 ATk peircing daage guy, but he needs a sac, so, meh....

WAIT!

There is more!

The next part says that when it attacks, your opponent can't actiavte spells and traps untill after the damage step. Just looking at that, it's overpowerd....

WAIT Again!

There is even more!

When it does kill a monster, it gets 200 more ATK, making it even more powerfull, and adding to it's overpowerdness....

You know what, don't leave, you listen or die!

Next, it's last part. It mast attack every turn if possible, so, that leaves it VERY vanurable to sakuretsu and other stuff like that, BUT IT'S NOT AFFECTED BY SPELLS AND TRAPS! >_>

 

My probelms with it:

You tried really hard to make it balanced, you made it have to attack, and have it start with 1500, butseriosly, it's effect is just too strong, it gains 200, and has peircing damage, AND your opponent can't activate traps and stuff? WTF?

 

Ratings:

Name: 7/10 Seems cool, and it fits, but idk, can be a little better.

Pic: 8/10 I like it.

Effect: 2/10 Good try on the balance, but it is just too strong man, at least to me.

Grammar/OCG: 10/10 I don't see a problem ^_^

Overall: 27/40 or 6.75/10

Grade: D+

 

To me, this card would be: SEMI-LIITED

 

Good card Shini, but it just seems strong man. Still good though, the rest of the card save it, good job ^_^

 

BTW, sorry if i'm more harsh than usuall, just been a tough time....bear with me

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Well' date=' I have decided to try to review a card, seeing as nobody has taken this over yet >_>

 

 

Ancient Gear Berserker by Card Maker Shinigami

[img']http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii281/Yugiohpics/createcard-3php-2.jpg[/img]

 

Ah yes, another card by Shini. This is gonna be good ^_^

Now, this card was made for a contest, and I think it was put together very well, it just needs some fixes here and there. Lets get to this, shall we?

 

Well, this cards effect starts out with a bang. Right away you know it does peircing damage. Congrats. Here is somthing you may not like, it's a 1500 ATk peircing daage guy, but he needs a sac, so, meh....

WAIT!

There is more!

The next part says that when it attacks, your opponent can't actiavte spells and traps untill after the damage step. Just looking at that, it's overpowerd....

WAIT Again!

There is even more!

When it does kill a monster, it gets 200 more ATK, making it even more powerfull, and adding to it's overpowerdness....

You know what, don't leave, you listen or die!

Next, it's last part. It mast attack every turn if possible, so, that leaves it VERY vanurable to sakuretsu and other stuff like that, BUT IT'S NOT AFFECTED BY SPELLS AND TRAPS! >_>

 

My probelms with it:

You tried really hard to make it balanced, you made it have to attack, and have it start with 1500, butseriosly, it's effect is just too strong, it gains 200, and has peircing damage, AND your opponent can't activate traps and stuff? WTF?

 

Ratings:

Name: 7/10 Seems cool, and it fits, but idk, can be a little better.

Pic: 8/10 I like it.

Effect: 2/10 Good try on the balance, but it is just too strong man, at least to me.

Grammar/OCG: 10/10 I don't see a problem ^_^

Overall: 27/40 or 6.75/10

Grade: D+

 

To me, this card would be: SEMI-LIITED

 

Good card Shini, but it just seems strong man. Still good though, the rest of the card save it, good job ^_^

 

BTW, sorry if i'm more harsh than usuall, just been a tough time....bear with me

 

Good review id say. The only thing that catches my attention though, is that although it has terrible OP potential, it can actually be a pain to get it started, and will most likely fail most of the time.

 

Its a very well looking card, but the effect needs work.

 

And...if you have the time, a review of my card would be awesome.

 

DR-007.jpg

 

And here is a card that is mentioned so you can get a feel of what the cards purpose is. (there is going to be a whole set)

 

DR-001-1.jpg

Link to comment
Share on other sites

With All permision Of Yankee

I have been able to produce a review

 

review.jpg

By IcyBlue

This card is a personal Fav of mine

It has a very unique effect and the member who made this card is very friendly. This is a nice little card and I hope you all appreciate it too

Icyblue is becoming better with his OCG every day

so dont judge him too hard on that

 

Name

 

Name: 8/10 Creative But it lacks the necessity Of a True Name

Picture: 7/10 The pic is Okay It still has the artist signature on it though

Effect: 7/10 It is a very good effect, but there a few OCG errors.

Grammar: 9/10 Well the grammar is pretty good

There are a few mistakes here and there

 

31/40

Overall

7.75/10 or C+

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.


×
×
  • Create New...