Polarbear96 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 During each of your End Phases, you can remove this card from play from your Graveyard as a cost for 1 "Koa'ki Meiru" monster instead of discarding 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru". During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to return this removed from play card to your Graveyard. Yes, I know the pic is bad, and the effect may be worded wrong. So please try to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 I really don't see how this is a Koa'ki Meiru card. Where the symbol? Otherwise, it's a good card! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 I really don't see how this is a Koa'ki Meiru card. Where the symbol? Otherwise' date=' it's a good card! Keep it up![/quote'] Well, he'd need to draw it in... Your wording is fine, but I would have written it: "When a "Koa'ki Meiru" monster would require you to discard 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru", you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard instead."On the other hand, that's still seems a little iffy. You could also try: "When a "Koa'ki Meiru" monster you control would be destroyed by its effect during the End Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard instead." I want you to know this is a really, REALLY awesome card that desperately needs to exist (Pure Koakis FTW). About the name, I think you can get rid of the dash. Or, you could emphasize the connection to the Iron Core by calling it "Copper Core of Koa'ki Meiru". Just my thoughts, but this is a great card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fakecardmaker222 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 It is excellent.Minor grammatical errors but however nobody writes 100% correct.Other is fine.Good card 7.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polarbear96 Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Thanks, everyone for your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polarbear96 Posted June 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 @ crudge you cannot just rate you mite get reported My opinion - card looks great. A good substitue for iron core and the pic is good 9.8 / 10 - brilliant for a new member ~MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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