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Arm' date=' by Jim you do mean the Crocodile Eye guy, right? That guy is awesome, and you better not kill him off. He made GX slightly interesting.

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Yes, Jim is the same Jim Crocodile Cook.

Sadly, we have to wait until Season 2 for that.

 

But in the mean time, Zane finally appears.

 

 

Good. Zane will have to do in the meantime though.

 

Cut off right when Zane appears, of course.

EPISODE 8 IS FINISHED!

 

Oh crap' date=' I can't believe that I'm not the only guy who noticed that in episode 8 Tristan appeared!

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Even though 4Kids used Tristians voice fo that guy, theres still more then enough proof to say that it is.

Like how the "shadowey figure" is wearing an over coat and has spiked hair.

More things that relate him to tristian.

 

And ugh, episode 9 is the one where Chumley duels his father.

Is that episode REALLY needed?

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Arm' date=' by Jim you do mean the Crocodile Eye guy, right? That guy is awesome, and you better not kill him off. He made GX slightly interesting.

[/quote']

 

Yes, Jim is the same Jim Crocodile Cook.

Sadly, we have to wait until Season 2 for that.

 

But in the mean time, Zane finally appears.

 

 

Good. Zane will have to do in the meantime though.

 

Cut off right when Zane appears, of course.

EPISODE 8 IS FINISHED!

 

YESH.

 

Oh crap' date=' I can't believe that I'm not the only guy who noticed that in episode 8 Tristan appeared!

[/quote']

Even though 4Kids used Tristians voice fo that guy, theres still more then enough proof to say that it is.

Like how the "shadowey figure" is wearing an over coat and has spiked hair.

More things that relate him to tristian.

 

And ugh, episode 9 is the one where Chumley duels his father.

Is that episode REALLY needed?

 

NOOOO.

 

YAY! More Jaden abuse. Make moer now.

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Arm' date=' by Jim you do mean the Crocodile Eye guy, right? That guy is awesome, and you better not kill him off. He made GX slightly interesting.

[/quote']

 

Yes, Jim is the same Jim Crocodile Cook.

Sadly, we have to wait until Season 2 for that.

 

But in the mean time, Zane finally appears.

 

 

Good. Zane will have to do in the meantime though.

 

Cut off right when Zane appears, of course.

EPISODE 8 IS FINISHED!

 

YESH.

 

Oh crap' date=' I can't believe that I'm not the only guy who noticed that in episode 8 Tristan appeared!

[/quote']

Even though 4Kids used Tristians voice fo that guy, theres still more then enough proof to say that it is.

Like how the "shadowey figure" is wearing an over coat and has spiked hair.

More things that relate him to tristian.

 

And ugh, episode 9 is the one where Chumley duels his father.

Is that episode REALLY needed?

 

NOOOO.

 

YAY! More Jaden abuse. Make moer now.

 

I wonder why MY story doesn't get so much critical acclaim, in exchange for thousands and thousands of views? Hmm...

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I wonder why MY story doesn't get so much critical acclaim' date=' in exchange for thousands and thousands of views? Hmm...

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Um... I looked at your story, and then I forgot where I was, so I couldn't find my place. Then I forgot to post a comment, mainly because by the time I was reading it, you were in the thirties. So, I wasn't able to keep up, and I didn't want to write a comment just then. And then I forgot.

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I wonder why MY story doesn't get so much critical acclaim' date=' in exchange for thousands and thousands of views? Hmm...

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Um... I looked at your story, and then I forgot where I was, so I couldn't find my place. Then I forgot to post a comment, mainly because by the time I was reading it, you were in the thirties. So, I wasn't able to keep up, and I didn't want to write a comment just then. And then I forgot.

 

:(

 

Well, uh... good luck with that? I've learned a valuable lesson today... never make a really long story. Or...

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I wonder why MY story doesn't get so much critical acclaim' date=' in exchange for thousands and thousands of views? Hmm...

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Um... I looked at your story, and then I forgot where I was, so I couldn't find my place. Then I forgot to post a comment, mainly because by the time I was reading it, you were in the thirties. So, I wasn't able to keep up, and I didn't want to write a comment just then. And then I forgot.

 

:(

 

Well, uh... good luck with that? I've learned a valuable lesson today... never make a really long story. Or...

Nah.

It also might help if you copy+paste each chapter onto 1 page. It makes it more neat and organized.

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I wonder why MY story doesn't get so much critical acclaim' date=' in exchange for thousands and thousands of views? Hmm...

[/quote']

 

Um... I looked at your story, and then I forgot where I was, so I couldn't find my place. Then I forgot to post a comment, mainly because by the time I was reading it, you were in the thirties. So, I wasn't able to keep up, and I didn't want to write a comment just then. And then I forgot.

 

 

:(

 

Well, uh... good luck with that? I've learned a valuable lesson today... never make a really long story. Or...

 

Nah.

It also might help if you copy+paste each chapter onto 1 page. It makes it more neat and organized.

 

I tried that at first, but after my 3rd chapter they were all too long to fit 2 to a page. I really DID want to stick chapters 25/26 on the same page, but then they kept glitching themselves up. Thus, I can only be allowed to have a directory... which had to be moved to a different post itself after 20 chapters...

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I'd suggest for your episodes 10/11 you could take the idea I did and have them duel them some Tristans' date=' but then people would call it plagiarizing. Also I think you captured the essence of episode 9.

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No, Episodes 10 & 11 will result in a perma B& for Para&Dox

 

Also, Episode 9 was already a filler episode, so might as well "add to it" >__>

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