Crushdag Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 2 Fiend-Type monsters. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, you may discard 1 Fiend-Type monster to add it to your hand. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you may select and destroy 1 face-up monster. If this is the only card you control and there are 3 or more Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, it gains 1500 ATK. Img from: Runescape.com (thanks to FriendlyHost) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I see it a little too slow. The drawback is too big for it. And it doesn't give you the option of Summoning it with Mausoleum of the Emperor. You absolutely need to Tribute Summon it, and you can only use Fiend-Type monsters.I think it needs more. And ite level is also not helping much... other than that, I have no problems with OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 That pic is so epic. OCG is great, and the playability is OK, if a bit slow. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 It might be a little slow, I'll think of reworking the summoning conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeal1995 Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 ITS A BIT SLOW AND IS TRUE THE LEVEL WONT HELP I SAY THAT YOU SHOULD MAKE THE LEVEL LOWER AND OCG IS GOOD GOOD PIC I LIKE IT WELL 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I changed the effect...or does that make it TOO fast? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 yeah its a little too good now.. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 2 Fiend-type monsters.This part is ok When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.This is a little too much concidering its ATK and the fact it has other good effects included. I suggest, re-writing it in a way that it will be harder to Special Summon it this way. Not nessesarily completely getting rid of the effect. When this card is sent your Deck to the Graveyard, add it to your hand.This makes it overpowered. I have an idea.. what if you leave this effect then the one above as part of the card, but with a "discard 1 card" effect? or better.. a "discard 1 Fiend-Type monster" effect. from If there are 3 or more Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard when this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you may select and destroy 1 face-up monster.I don't think this effect needs a condition. I think you can get away by getting rid of the red part. Oh, and "successfully" is not needed. If this is the only card you control, it gains 1500 ATK. The "3 or more Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard" part could on the other hand, be added to this effect instead. it looks like a little too easy. And combining it with the "Tribute Summon" condition to make it balanced is a bad solution in my opinion. Those are the things I can think of right now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 good pic,good effect bit slow, and good ocg. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I decided to scrap the "Special Summon from hand" effect completely, and added a negative effect to balance it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 really overpowered, decent ocg (replace Fiend-type with Fiend-Type), and the image is from runescape lol, which is copyrighten, so you should give credit ): ! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Hmm, well I wasn't aware of that. I guess I'll give credit. Are you really going to say ocg is bad because of one typo? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 you make this typo like 3 times but its still cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I rewrote the effect 3 times, so it must've slipped through. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 ill giv u rep for this card XD because your a beginner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Lol, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmmed6 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 nice card 8.3/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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