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Ice. Newbie

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Wouldnt you think that after i got tortured by YCM, i wouldnt steal A SMALL PIECE OF AERO TEXT again? and i didnt get banned for that, Black-eye Hacked my account. i am glad he got banned. and sorry for the Jap text, i copied the wrong thing. Biatch.

 

You're rejected. Get out.

Is it that hard to understand? Come back in a month, and I'll gladly reject you again.

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Looks like the spider...

 

* sunglasses*

 

Had to fly.

 

YEAAAAA- Wut? That makes no sense.

 

 

Aaaaaaaaaaanyway. I was thinking, and I figured out that I should try to remake my RP as a fanfic instead, but my previous fanfics has only been read by a very few people so I'm sceptical. Would anyone here be interested to read something written by me?

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My writing skills be epic, especially after spellchecking and stuff. It just seems that

 

1. I'm not a famous enough storywriter so that I don't attract potential readers.

 

OR

 

2. I can't come up with enough interesting stories.

 

The story would be the same as in the RP. Humans goes to Asgaard, a planet in the Galaxy Andromeda. Humans gets pwnt and can't leave. Aesir, the natives, get's angry and tries to pwn the humans. Some Aesir are nice and does not want to kill the humans.

 

But I feel that I need something to spice it up.

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Yea it is quite generic. I planned that the Chapters would "change" with one following a human and the next following the Aesir Thor, who does not wish the humans any harm, and then this would go on like human, Aesir, H, A and so on unless they are together during the course of the Chapter.

 

But I definately need something more.

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I don't really know, atm. You add what you want to add and crap.

 

f***ing writers block is hindering my process on my plot.

 

God dammit.

 

Uhh, if you want inspiration or something, listen to music and just look at your surroundings (by that I mean outside, not your house). That usually gives me ideas.

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[spoiler=Original Prologue of "Children of the World Tree"]

A lone figure sat on a chair in the middle of a room that appeared to be a kind of control room. The man was surrounded by monitors, showing different locations of what seemed to be a military base. The room was dark except for the faint light from the monitors, and the man was cleaning the sweat off his face. It had been two weeks of terror since the Aesir had revealed themselves. General Warren knew that some of the Aesir had nothing against human, but that Loki, he really wanted to kill all of them. Suddenly, the middle and largest monitor changed into a black screen with the small text "Incoming transmission" in blue letters. The source was unknown, but Warren decided that he had nothing to lose by accepting it, it's not like if it could get any worse.

 

The screen changed to show a somewhat human-like creature with an oblong face. It had silvery skin with a faint azure color and it's eyes were glowing with a golden shine. It wore some sort of golden metal headdress, and underneath it blonde hair was falling down on it's back. It had no ears, and a small nose. It had no lips, but still a mouth. On each side of it's neck two short tentacles of the same color as it's skin was visible. This was the Aesir's Sithr tendrils, small segments of it's body that absorbed the magical power in the air around it to strengthen it's Sithr.

 

"Greetings, Human General Warren Herman Fedric of Midgard." The Aesir spoke with an echoing, dark voice. The alien was not smiling, but it still didn't seem to look angry or sad.

 

"Counsilor Thor." Warren greeted the Aesir. Thor was one of the Aesir who did not want the humans eradicated, and even though he was fighting together with Loki he tried to end the war in peace through diplomatic ways. "What do you want now?"

 

"I wanted to warn you, Herman." Thor said, his facial expression didn't change.

 

"Warn me for what? I know that Loki wants us to just die, but my people is a proud people, and we won't flee!" Warren knew what Thor was about to say.

 

"I understand that you will not follow my proposal, then?" Thor's voice had a tone of disappointment. "I will make sure that Loki won't follow you if you leave."

 

"WE WILL NOT LEAVE!" Warren yelled, and the monitor returned to show one of the barracks of the humans' base. Warren laid back, sweating more then he did before. He wanted this to end peacefully. If there was more aliens out there he was sure that at least some of the other twelve colonies had ran into unfriendly ones, and the Aesir was a strong people.

 

The truth was that they couldn't leave. The engine of the ship that they had arrived in was burnt after the time-space jump, a side effect that had not been discovered during testing. Warren was too proud to tell the Aesir the truth, and even if he did he knew that Loki wouldn't allow the humans to borrow any of the aliens' equipment. This could only end in three ways;

 

Loki's death, which would break the Aesir Anti-Humans down, or the end of Terra 13.

 

 

Children of the World Tree would be the first "book" in a series that I currently call WarSpace, which is one of the most cheesieest names I've ever come up with >_>

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I, Firon, have just thought of a way to make Mario win.

What is it now.

 

Okay, Ice, go on your Facebook or whatever and then....BAM!

Beg your friends to join and vote for Mario!

Uhh...I don't know if I can do that?

 

WHO GIVES A f***?

 

...Yeah...you're right.

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