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~Absolute Powerforce - Everlasting Burning Soul~


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Funny you should ask, I just started bouncing ideas off with DL yesterday and I've already made a bunch of changes.

One problem I had was too many characters, so I'm merging some together.

So right now, I started character design. A revised plot and stuff should slowly begin forming as I go through that.

 

DEF II won't be here though, I'm going to make this into an actual book if I can. So I won't actually write anything until I've taken courses in college to guide me along.

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Exactly it.

I was trying to include everyone I knew with a cameo, but in the end I realized I was focusing more on fanservice than the actual story.

Then I ended up with more characters than I knew what to do with.

Hell, I introduced this whole group one time and made them out to be important, but that was it. Never heard from again after their intro >.>

It was just a mess.

But it's looking cleaner with a more compact cast, so there we go.

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Exactly it.

I was trying to include everyone I knew with a cameo, but in the end I realized I was focusing more on fanservice than the actual story.

Then I ended up with more characters than I knew what to do with.

Hell, I introduced this whole group one time and made them out to be important, but that was it. Never heard from again after their intro >.>

It was just a mess.

But it's looking cleaner with a more compact cast, so there we go.

 

I better be in it again.

except, with less me dying.

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I better be in it again.

except, with less me dying.

 

Ah you don't need to worry about dying.

RAEG is hinting at me making another GX fanfic, or continuing my existing disaster.

.....

Should I?

 

@Smear: What if "you dieing" is a running gag, though? O,o

 

Yes.

 

And nah, the running gag is Chase always falling into a coma.

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Guys, if candy-colored ponies have taught us anything, its that you can explode twice and still survive.

So of course Smeargle can be killed multiple ties.

 

Speaking of which...

Powerforce got 1000 pages in like, what, 1 year?

Sugar Cube Corner has 1000+ pages, and its only been about 5 months.

 

And no, I cant take sides, as I'm part of both.

 

Yes.

Thing is, I would love to do another re-write, except I basically swap all the characters with ones I made up, and "fix" a few things along the way.

Only problem is, everyone will be a scrub, and the main character's deck is god-tier regardless of what he runs :/

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