The Angelia Olivia

[Jace Beleren]

[align=center]

 

While this card is face-up on the field, DARK monsters your opponent controls cannot activate their effects and they cannot select other "Angelia" monsters as an Attack Target. During your End Phase destroy this card unless you discard 1 Spell Card from your hand.[/align]

 

 

rate and comment and OCG Fix if there is

[Sleepy]

There is a similar LIGHT ball with 0 ATK in the real game, I don't remember its name though. I mean similar because its an anti-DARK card too.

 

Depending on the other support cards for the archtype, the discarding cost might be too much.

Most likely, I'll still think its too much of a cost. I don't think it needs the discarding at all.

 

If no other card exists for this archtype, at least this makes an anti-DARK semi-barrier at 2.

 

I like it but its underpowered as I see it now.

[Jace Beleren]

There is a similar LIGHT ball with 0 ATK in the real game' date=' I don't remember its name though. I mean similar because its an anti-DARK card too.

 

Depending on the other support cards for the archtype, the discarding cost might be too much.

Most likely, I'll still think its too much of a cost. I don't think it needs the discarding at all.

 

If no other card exists for this archtype, at least this makes an anti-DARK semi-barrier at 2.

 

I like it but its underpowered as I see it now.

[/quote']

 

my Angelia archtype focuses only on bieng anti-Dark monsters so they should have a powerfull effect with a high cost

 

anyways thanx for your comments

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Great card. Good LIGHT Support, even without other angelia's. 8/10 (Would be 9/10, but this card probably wont last more than 1 turn.)

 

Suggested fix:

While this card is face-up on the field, the effects of DARK monsters are negated. Your opponent cannot select other "Angelia" monster you control as an Attack Target. During your End Phase destroy this card unless you discard 1 Spell Card.

[Sleepy]

Here it is:

[spoiler=Spoiler]

 

 

compare and contrast effect^

[Jace Beleren]

Great card. Good LIGHT Support' date=' even without other angelia's. 8/10 (Would be 9/10, but this card probably wont last more than 1 turn.)

 

Suggested fix:

While this card is face-up on the field, the effects of DARK monsters are negated. Your opponent cannot select other "Angelia" monster you control as an Attack Target. During your End Phase destroy this card unless you discard 1 Spell Card.

[/quote']

 

thanx for your comments

 

and Sleepy i got the idea, just remove the card you posted plz

[Sleepy]

I'm not posting my card in another person's thread, that's a real card from the real game... I'll put a spoiler but I don't think I'm breaking any rules... =/

[Jace Beleren]

I'm not posting my card in another person's thread' date=' that's a real card from the real game... I'll put a spoiler but I don't think I'm breaking any rules... =/

[/quote']

 

i know its real, just put it on spoiler

plus: new "Angelia" Monster card has been made, check it out :d

[賢狼ホロ]

I don't think its necessary write "While this is face-up" as face-down monsters cannot activate their effects. OCG looks othewisely fine. 1800 DEF is really good as well. Well done.

[NeosWiseman]

OCG fix:

While this card is face-up on the field, DARK monsters your opponent controls cannot activate their effects and they cannot select other "Angelia" monsters as an attack target. During your End Phase, destroy this card unless you discard 1 Spell Card from your hand.

 

The card is balanced imo. With such an effect nobody can expect it to be a "beast"... :?

 

I think it should be Level 3 with its current stats.

 

Anyhow, I rate this one 9/10

Good job! ^^