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A little OP'd. Good Pic. ATK and DEF balanced for level. Overall, 7/10.

I would say "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned, all monsters on your side of the Field gain 500 ATK." That makes it sound better, and it's a lot less OP'd. This way, the cards permanently gain the 500 ATK, which isn't very unbalanced at all. If you wanna balance it more, go even lower than 500.

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"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

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"During the turn this card is Summoned..."

 

That is all that is necessary. Pretty good. 7.8/10

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"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

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Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..


"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[/quote']

Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..

Nice cards, but you have some Grammer mistakes.

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"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[/quote']

Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..


"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[/quote']

Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..

Nice cards, but you have some Grammer mistakes.

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"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[/quote']

Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..


"During the turn this card is successfully Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned..." Use that. It fixes the OCG and sounds more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[/quote']

Actually, it's "During the turn this card is Summoned"

there are also:

"During the turn this card is Normal Summoned or Flip"

etc..

Nice cards, but you have some Grammer mistakes.

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