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Super Mario Set 12/??


Grahoben

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Your cards are alright' date=' OCG isgood in some cards while others bad (mushroom). Some words need capitalization (deck). Pics are blurry, whats up with toad? Why are there blue lines in him?

 

Altogether, 6/10

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Heh heh, about Toad.... Idk, I thought it might look cool, but it doesn't really.

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+The ATK and DEF are balanced for their Levels.

-Like what you said, the images are too pixellated (try to upload bigger images). The effect on Toad's image looks a bit weird, since I can't find a reason why it would have thin blue streaks across it. Also, "Mushroom" could do with a background, too.

-There are several OCG errors:

face up= face-up

one= 1

increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500= this card gains 500 ATK and DEF

 

Overall, they are good, but several adjustments could be done to make these cards better. Just keep improving by understanding everyone's comments, and these cards will turn out to be a lot better than they are now. They are far from terrible, though. 6/10. If you need any advice, PM me.

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i like yours but why is koopa troopa a Fiend? it IS a turtle XD

same with paratroopa xD

turtles are usually reffered to Reptile or Aqua xD

and u know wat? i forgot to make paratroopa... i had a pic for it but then i forgot... how sad... oh well i made all of those in one night -_-

 

i would give yours a 7.9/10 i like teh idea and stuff but they COULD be better cards

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