έκλειψη Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 The story isn't that bad, though it is a bit difficult to tell an entire story via one card. It can be done, though, and was pulled off nicely with both this card and SJ's. It's a Vanilla, and it was meant to Rival Blue-Eyes. However, with no card-specific support, it can't Rival Blue-eyes, because it can't get that exclusive power needed to beat it. *Pokes Challengers of Blue-Eyes thread* See? It is telling a story while bringing in different characters, but if I'm going to make a Rival, which it was already stated Blue-Eyes has 2-3 of, I'd need some exclusive support or an effect made just for the destruction of Blue-Eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 You mean BEFORE the "and" then. I feel like released TCG Vanillas all have one style: boring lol Anyway, it's still a good Vanilla nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 The story isn't that bad' date=' though it is a bit difficult to tell an entire story via one card. It can be done, though, and was pulled off nicely with both this card and SJ's. It's a Vanilla, and it was meant to Rival Blue-Eyes. However, with no card-specific support, it can't Rival Blue-eyes, because it can't get that exclusive power needed to beat it. *Pokes Challengers of Blue-Eyes thread* See? It is telling a story while bringing in different characters, but if I'm going to make a Rival, which it was already stated Blue-Eyes has 2-3 of, I'd need some exclusive support or an effect made just for the destruction of Blue-Eyes.[/quote'] Thank you very much for you INFORMED oppinion. I would just like to say that this card is more to do with the mythology behind the blue-eyes rather than the usage in the deck. I actually made this card as a somewhat "tradgic hero" compelling to the audience but at the same time amplifying the power and status of the protagonist, in this case that would be BEWD. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Keep the feedback coming, even if you don't like vanillas, do you like this one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 A, um..."tradgic" hero needs to be part of a tragedy. There are no events in this story, just a few notes about a character and the implication that this dude will probably lose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 A' date=' um..."tradgic" hero needs to be part of a tragedy. There are no events in this story, just a few notes about a character and the implication that this dude will probably lose.[/quote'] Oh my poor fool ignorant of literature, although a tragic hero may need to be involved in a tragedy, A tragedy can be born through the contrast and rise and splendour of the hero, in this case the BEWD. True, I have only 2 cards so far in this story, mine and the BEWD, but I was actually hoping that most people would use their imagination, don't worry if you haven't got one you can always look. Needle in a haystack spring to mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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