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[White-kryptonite]

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if i have made eny spelling mastakes soz i don't care if u give me bad things or good things +}

[LiAM]

Aside from the OCG errors and quite LQ images, there is a consistent amount of spelling and grammatical errors.

 

How old are you?

[Βyakuya]

Some pics are terrible, as with your OCG and grammar which is terrible. Also some pics don't appear. Add in more effort.

 

I give you 1/10

[MarshyK-XS]

@ liam XD LMFAO how old are you xD

 

0.7 / 10

 

~MK

[White-kryptonite]

13 nd wtf is ocg

[PandoraMaster]

Dude your 13 and your making such grammar mistakes.

Bad pics,OCG and effect (grammar).

1/10

From were are you.I'm from Croatia and i still make almost no mistakes.

[Legokun]

lrn2English

[SonikFan]

0/10. You broke my fail meter with these cards.

[The Tin Trooper]

lrn2everything

 

 

0/10

[White-kryptonite]

that's harsh i have dyslexiya

[LiAM]

that's harsh i have dyslexiya

 

I noticed a big bomb of silence after this post.

[SonikFan]

Alrighty then. But if you do have dyslexia, then you shouldn't be posting cards.

[White-kryptonite]

y the hell shouldn't i be

[SMAL]

You did a REALLY bad job here. You should put a lot more effort into these cards and I'll give you an example for Sniper Rifle.

"Equip this to any Warrior-Type monster on your side of the field. When you call an attack with the monster that is equipped with this card, you may flip a coin. If heads, attack your opponent directly instead of attacking the targeted monster."

There you go. Credit me if you use it. But for now, 0/10.

[Βyakuya]

You did a REALLY bad job here. You should put a lot more effort into these cards and I'll give you an example for Sniper Rifle.

"Equip this to any Warrior-Type monster on your side of the field. When you call an attack with the monster that is equipped with this card, you may flip a coin. If heads, attack your opponent directly instead of attacking the targeted monster."

There you go. Credit me if you use it. But for now, 0/10.

 

He says he has dyslexia. Yes, its horrible, but lower on criticism.

[SonikFan]

y the hell shouldn't i be

Because you and anyone else knows your going to be flamed for bad grammar and bad OCG.

[SMAL]

He says he has dyslexia. Yes, its horrible, but lower on criticism.

 

Well he's got this for so I don't think he has dyslexia.

[Βyakuya]

Well he's got this for so I don't think he has dyslexia.

 

Then how come his OCG and grammar are terrible?

[SonikFan]

Then how come his OCG and grammar are terrible?

Have you seen some of the other members grammar?

[.GhostRyder]

@All of you: Leave the kid alone.

OT:I suggest looking at some other peoples cards and see how they are judged and set out. Good try though.

[White-kryptonite]

thank u ghost rider nd Byakuya Kuchiki

[poopybuttoxes]

oh crap haha. This thread should be closed. The comments here are not necesary.

[SMAL]

^We were stating the truth.

Although seriously, I know you can improve even if you have dyslexia (which I actually doubt)

So yeah. Look at other people's cards and it'll help you a lot.

BTW I reference to real cards which may help you. Try that. :)

[The Tin Trooper]

I have dyslexia and I type just fine. Having dyslexia is a bad excuse.

[Black Rose Dragon]

Well, he was trying to be creative. And we do understand what he is trying to say in the card effect's, don't we?