Mortal Kombat Kards

[McHotcakes]

Let me know what you think

 

[spoiler=Kards]

When this card changes its position, select 1 Monster on your opponents side of the field. The selected card cannot attack, change position, or activate it's effect until your next Standby Phase.

 

If this card is in your graveyard at the start of your Main Phase you may discard two cards to Special Summon it to the field in Face-Up Attack Position or Face-Down Defense Position.

 

As long as this card is Face-Up on the field all EARTH Warriors you control cannot be targeted by your opponent's trap or spell cards.

 

As long as you control another Face-Up DARK Warrior this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's trap or spell cards.

 

Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for ever monster in your graveyard.

 

[Face McShooty]

nice cards, nice pics and (from what i can tell) nice OCG 10/10 +rep

[BT]

great cards

 

some OCG errors

 

9.2/10

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

 

These are my very first cards let me know what you think.

 

Think Sub Zero should read something like (and this is the 1st time I've done OCG advice so I may be wrong).

 

'When this card is changed from Defence position to Attack position, select 1 Monster on your opponents side of the field. The selected card cannot attack, change position, or activate it's effect until your next Standby Phase.'

 

I haven't bought new cards in a looooooong time so my OCG may be old-fashioned, but that looks a bit clearer to me.

 

As far the cards themselves; the kards are well balanced, the effects fit the kharacters, pictures are good, very good job for first go.

 

More please.

[D Lord Danny]

pretty cool cards man!

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Yes pretty cool indeed :)

[McHotcakes]

 

 

Thanks for the advice Matt.

[Face McShooty]

you should make more, like Raiden, Noob & Smoke, Reptile, and all the other ones

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Any time.

 

Ermac and Baraka would be cool.

[McHotcakes]

Does any one know a place where I could find good mk pics?

[Face McShooty]

just type in cool Mortal Kombat pics in google or something and see what you get

 

EDIT: make sure you change your Sub-Zero card at the top of the post and delete it on the one you change it

[McHotcakes]

More to come soon

[McHotcakes]

Ermac added

[Icy]

Generic and titles are wrong .-.

 

Grandmaster of the Lin Kuei - Sub-Zero

Hellspawned Ninja of the Shirai Ryu - Scorpion (he can go by many Titles but thats the most formal)

Elder God of Thunder - Raiden

Emperor of Outworld - Shao Kahn

Outworld Ninja of Many - Ermac

 

Yeah... And your cards are almost generic to a fault >_<"...

[Stoopid1]

All I'm gonna say is that it's lame for a created card to share the effect of card that already exists, especially when the real card is better than yours. Whether you knew about it or not, "Chaos Necromancer" > Ermac.

[McHotcakes]

Generic and titles are wrong .-.

 

Grandmaster of the Lin Kuei - Sub-Zero

Hellspawned Ninja of the Shirai Ryu - Scorpion (he can go by many Titles but thats the most formal)

Elder God of Thunder - Raiden

Emperor of Outworld - Shao Kahn

Outworld Ninja of Many - Ermac

 

Yeah... And your cards are almost generic to a fault >_<"...

 

1. My titles aren't wrong. They are not as specific as your suggested titles but they aren't wrong. Your's aren't wromg either but they are unnecessarily specific. I chose the titles so people could identify the character and their main attributes. i.e. Sub-Zero the Ice Ninja. Sub-Zero is mainly know for two things being a ninja and having ice powers. So that's what I put. That's all the reader needs to know in order to properly identify the character and his powers.Yes he is grandmaster of the Lin Kuei but this information is not needed when describing a character's basic features. It makes his title too clunky for someone who say is not a Mortal Kombat fan and has no idea who the character is. Saying he is Grandmaster of the Lin- Kuei tells them nothing. While sayinf he's an ice ninja let's them know exactly what this character can do. For example if I made a Barack Obama card and titled it President Obama, my title is not wrong, granted its not as specific as naming it The President of tohe United States of America Barack Obama, that would be his more "formal" title. Which is too long and distracting when you pass the same information with President Obama. It may be simple but it's more effective.

 

2. Elaborate when you say my cards are too generic. Saying that is well...too generic. You could mean anything. Are the pictures too generic? Are the monster types? The Atk and Def? I assume you meant effects are too generic, and if so tell me why. Don't just say my cards are bad. I made the monster effects to match the characters. Sub-Zero freezes people, Scorpion comes back from the dead, Raiden protects Earth and it's fighters etc. I'm not a big fan of giving a character an elaborate effect if it makes no sense for them to have one. I thought the effects matched the characters well enough so if you have any advice let me know.