Six Samz 500 Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 I may do more if you like them and would like a pic for the trade card. The equipped monster gains 100 attack times the number of cards in your hand During your standby phase you may send this card to your graveyard to special summon one machoke from your deck to the feild in face up attack position. If this card is equiped with trade you may send it to the graveyard to special summon 1 machamp from your hand or deck. This card gains 200 attack for each machop in the grave. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. this card can only be special summoned by tributing 1 machoke equipped with trade. This card cannot be destroyed by spell or trap card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 -The first card has no picture.-You have lots of OCG errors. Don't say things short like "trade", or "grave", and keep it organized.-The card effects are mildly OPed, and so are the ATK of the cards.-There are some grammatical errors you need to capitalize and fix.-Add more effort. Add more effects or fix your effects by adding an effect that fits the Machop evolution chain best. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted August 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 -The first card has no picture.-You have lots of OCG errors. Don't say things short like "trade", or "grave", and keep it organized.-The card effects are mildly OPed, and so are the ATK of the cards.-There are some grammatical errors you need to capitalize and fix.-Add more effort. Add more effects or fix your effects by adding an effect that fits the Machop evolution chain best. 3/10no need to be so serious just a bit of fun ,im not gonna play them so i dont really care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 no need to be so serious just a bit of fun ,im not gonna play them so i dont really care Okay then. I get critical when I rate cards. You can fix them if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted August 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 Okay then. I get critical when I rate cards. You can fix them if you want. and also i actually asked for pic sugestions for the first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justinator119 Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 I have to agree with him. The OCG is messed up, and instead of saying trade, you should say "Trade" 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 eh... ppl here get serious when rating cards... i like machamp's pic lolbut yeah they are a bit OP in ATK wise.... but i don't mind that since i do that too a lot xDand for Trade... its pretty hard to find a pic that fits that lol... unless you want a screen shot from the game... that wouldn't be too hard lol i don't give a crap about OCG unless they actually word the effects wrong like "search your deck for ----"... i don't like that kind of stuff but it seems like you don't have much of that 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted August 12, 2010 Report Share Posted August 12, 2010 Pics aren't that badOCG is bad, but still readable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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