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[momyr]

this is my dragon ps:im new here so give fell free constructing critisism but keep in mind im new here and i changed the errors that you said here it is again.

[LiAM]

Really bad OCG.

 

And there is no such thing as ???? for an ATK stat.

 

You can't use words like 'my' either.

 

Plus the cards pretty much useless, as it wont ever get to attack because it's destroyed once it's summoned.

[Βyakuya]

I agree with LiAM. Your OCG is horrible, because you use words like "my", and its OPed, because its unfair if its summoned an all cards are destroyed. And your grammar sucks too. You're supposed to capitalize "atk" and Title words. And never use ???? as an attack stat unless it has an effect that when its summoned, it gains ATK or DEF based on something. So stick to 0.

 

3/10.

[Rampage567]

"Round Table"? Really?

 

Anyways, OCG is terrible. It's worthless except for destroying mobsters. even still, it is bad.

[-Athena-]

Si. You have really bad OCG.

Capitalize the first letter of each sentence.

atk=ATK (don't put points)

Get another name and picture.

The effect is not interesting but not boring either.

This is an okay card if the OCG is fixed.

Not bad for starters :)

5/10.

 

Your card have officially been rated by -Athena-

[Marco Polo]

I agree with LiAM. Your OCG is horrible, because you use words like "my", and its OPed, because its unfair if its summoned an all cards are destroyed. And your grammar sucks too. You're supposed to capitalize "atk" and Title words. And never use ???? as an attack stat unless it has an effect that when its summoned, it gains ATK or DEF based on something. So stick to 0.

 

3/10.

This.

+Overused pic

++capitalize the name, except words like "the" "on" "of"