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Races of Hate [PG-16] [Accepting/Started]


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RP: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/217284-races-of-hate-pg-16-acceptingnot-started/

 

Centuries ago, the 3 races lived in peace...

Then came the Orcs.

They ravaged the lands and turned the races against each other. They became tyrants.

The Elves were always a peaceful race, but the day the Orcs came, they turned hostile towards everyone except for humans.

The Humans were only hostile towards themselves, but they remained a bond with both Elves and Nekos even after the Orcs.

The Nekos, part feline, were usually peaceful. However, they turned hostile towards the Elves in the time the Orcs came.

All of these races are now struggling for survival.

You are a warrior for a race of your choice- Orcs, Humans, Elves, and Nekos.

 

The Orcs are a powerful people. They use immense strength, brute force, and large weapons.

The Elves are a noble people. They use tactics and nature to their ability. They do not have much strength, but they to have cleverness and skill.

The Humans balance out their their skill and strength. They as well have skilled blacksmiths to create powerful and elite weapons.

The Nekos use stealth and agility to their advantage. Their armies are small, but they are killing machines.

 

Your people; your country, needs your help.

 

[spoiler=Rules]

All YCM rules.

No GMing, PPing, or MGing.

No making allies with people of other races that I did not specify were friendly.

No making NPC's promote you to King or whatever.

You can control any NPC you want except for the leaders of a country.

 

 

 

[spoiler=App]

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Race:

History:

Personality:

Other:

Appearance:

 

 

 

[spoiler=My Character]

Name: Ghost Burgeonis

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Human

History: Ghost escaped his home at an early age due to higher goals. He never enjoyed his home, despite never being mistreated. He found a good trainer quickly and became an assassin for the human army. He is now one of the most feared assassins in the lands.

Personality: Ghost is talkative, but somewhat cruel. He leads his team of assassins very efficiently, though.

Other: N/A

Appearance: AnimeGuySwordBrown.jpg

 

 

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Name (In Elvish): XrSPg.png

Name (in English): Kholai Ederoi

Name (Pronunciation): kol-lay eh-der-oi

Name (Meaning): White Angels

 

Age: 34 by human calander. 17 in 'elf years'.

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Elf

 

History: As a young elf, she grew in the forests of WhateverTheNameForThisLandIs. Her favourite activites growing up were tending to flowers and playing with other elf children. She learned basic defense, with bows and arrows and basic healing, but was never all that gifted with magic. One day, a human traveler encountered her village. At first, he was treated as an outsider, until the man managed to bravely fend off an Orc raid with the elves. But that's a story for another day.

 

The elves grew to accept this man as one of their own, and brought him into their customs. He, in turn, offered to share his knowledge of the outside world with the elves. He even personally taught Kholai the handfuls of English she knows.

 

She was inspired by this man and, as she grew older, offered her services mostly as a guide to any would be human travelers into the forest.

 

Personality: A rather timid, easily frightened, young lady when first meeting people. Despite her original timidness, she makes friends and warms up to people very easily. She is mostly naive about the outside world, however if threatened she will valiantly defend herself, or those she loves.

 

Other: I'm drawing from like... 2 or 3 sources for all the information here, so forgive me if my dialect of Elven isn't the same as the ones you're familiar with... nerds. <_<

 

And yes, she will speak little, and sprinkle plenty of elf-like speak. I'll bother to translate if ever I feel like, or merely write the translated section instead of writing elf-speak, for fellow elves who don't wanna bother looking stuff up. ._.

 

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Name (In Elvish): XrSPg.png

Name (in English): Kholai Ederoi

Name (Pronunciation): kol-lay eh-der-oi

Name (Meaning): White Angels

 

Age: 34 by human calander. 17 in 'elf years'.

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Elf

 

History: As a young elf, she grew in the forests of WhateverTheNameForThisLandIs. Her favourite activites growing up were tending to flowers and playing with other elf children. She learned basic defense, with bows and arrows and basic healing, but was never all that gifted with magic. One day, a human traveler encountered her village. At first, he was treated as an outsider, until the man managed to bravely fend off an Orc raid with the elves. But that's a story for another day.

 

The elves grew to accept this man as one of their own, and brought him into their customs. He, in turn, offered to share his knowledge of the outside world with the elves. He even personally taught Kholai the handfuls of English she knows.

 

She was inspired by this man and, as she grew older, offered her services mostly as a guide to any would be human travelers into the forest.

 

Personality: A rather timid, easily frightened, young lady when first meeting people. Despite her original timidness, she makes friends and warms up to people very easily. She is mostly naive about the outside world, however if threatened she will valiantly defend herself, or those she loves.

 

Other: I'm drawing from like... 2 or 3 sources for all the information here, so forgive me if my dialect of Elven isn't the same as the ones you're familiar with... nerds. <_<

 

And yes, she will speak little, and sprinkle plenty of elf-like speak. I'll bother to translate if ever I feel like, or merely write the translated section instead of writing elf-speak, for fellow elves who don't wanna bother looking stuff up. ._.

 

Appearance: 5u35o.png

 

The one problem I have with this is your History. I intended for it to be that Elves and Humans were friends prior to the coming of the Orcs and had already somewhat... taught each other their knowledge.

And as far as Other. I don't know anything about elves, so what you gave me is beyond enough.

 

As far as your history, you can do 1 of 2 things:

1: Increase her human age by about 10-15 years, or

2: Change your history.

 

My character is 23, and he's intended to have been born after the Orcs came and the war started.

 

Actually...

Nevermind, don't. You say the human came in your childhood.

If you meant that as in early child hood (5-6 human years), then that fits perfectly.

 

Accepted.

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The one problem I have with this is your History. I intended for it to be that Elves and Humans were friends prior to the coming of the Orcs and had already somewhat... taught each other their knowledge.

 

I wasn't a hundred percent with all that, so the implication was that the Orc invasion has already occurred (possibly hundreds of years ago?), and now this specific elf community had become less... trusting of the other species since then. At the very least, they now had less humans traveling through their woods. Since: "they [Humans] remained a bond with both Orcs and Nekos even after the Orcs." (unless that's a typo for 'a bond with the Elves and Nekos' ._.) I figured they'd grow weary of humans siding with enemies so they'd slowly close off contact with them too.

 

Don't forget, her small community =/= the entirety of elves, so any other elf who is pretty much "human with pointy ears" should be fine in the RP given all the other information presented.

 

I also assumed whatever small bits of human knowledge this particular group of elves had would have been lost between the time the invasion started and they closed themselves off, and the time it current is, hence the need for the particular group she belonged to having to relearn it.

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I wasn't a hundred percent with all that, so the implication was that the Orc invasion has already occurred (possibly hundreds of years ago?), and now this specific elf community had become less... trusting of the other species since then. At the very least, they now had less humans traveling through their woods. Since: "they [Humans] remained a bond with both Orcs and Nekos even after the Orcs." (unless that's a typo for 'a bond with the Elves and Nekos' ._.) I figured they'd grow weary of humans siding with enemies so they'd slowly close off contact with them too.

 

Don't forget, her small community =/= the entirety of elves, so any other elf who is pretty much "human with pointy ears" should be fine in the RP given all the other information presented.

 

I also assumed whatever small bits of human knowledge this particular group of elves had would have been lost between the time the invasion started and they closed themselves off, and the time it current is, hence the need for the particular group she belonged to having to relearn it.

 

It actually was a typo.

Thanks for pointing that out :D

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On a completely unrelated note, what's the name of the land? <_<

 

I'm still sorta thinking about that much.

The country in which elves live is called Haven (because that just seems like a good name for an elven country because of the whole portrayal of elves in a peaceful manner). But as far as the other countries and the land itself, I have no clue. I was thinking maybe calling the orcish country something involving the word "War."

 

But once I get all the names done, I'll draw a map of sorts.

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Name: Selene (her elven name is Tiranwynn)

Age: 17 in elf years.

Gender: Female

Race: Elf

History: Selene's parents were attacked by orcs when she was born, so she grew up alone, away from the big elf communities in the forest, though she was still living on her own in the forest. One day she was found by a brave human while she was hunting for herself, and the human helped to bring her to the large elf community for an easier life. From that day onward she swore that she would help others in any way she could; they might have ended up like her. She adjusted to life as an elf and grew up knowing the skills she needed to use to survive plus the skills of living with social grace in the elven world.

Personality: She is happy, smart, and nice to all who approach her, and is a very sociable elf. However, if you are unknown to her, she will approach you with caution, but if you are good then she will eventually open up. But watch out! If you are her enemy, or are in any way abusive or mean towards her, she will lash out, having a sharp, sarcastic retort for usually every word thrown at her. She is fearsome with a bow and arrow, and passable with a sword.

Other: She carries a longbow of lemon wood, along with a quiver of arrows, and a sharp sword at her side just in case.

Appearance: I couldn't find an adequate enough picture, so I'll just describe her:

She has long, shoulderlength black hair, usually groomed and kept silky for Selene's benefit. She has green eyes that sparkle in sunlight and moonlight. She is taller than normal, with a lanky frame and long fingers, deft with small things. She is a fast runner because of her long legs.

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I will definitely make an orc sometime...

ahh what the hell.

how about now?

 

 

Name: Vargul Ashnazai

Age: unknown (I don't know how orcs count, same as humans? I don't want an adolescent orc...)

Gender: Male

Race: Orc

History: he was raised in the harsh way that orcs raise their young. He was taught that they were the superiors of all other races, and he believed them. Growing up he trained hard in all sorts of things, and never had any friends; he was more focused on being the best warrior he could be for the orc ciivilization. He was praised by even the orc king, but that wasn't enough for him. he practices fighting every place he can.

Personality: He enjoys bullying and sometimes injuring or hurting those smaller than him ifthey aren't orcs. He goes on rampages through some areas of the forest nearby his home and kills all in his way. He never wanted to make any friends, and never had to. He always just concentrated on his ambition. He is the opposite of gentle in all his ways and he never wanted to be, either.

Other: He carries this humongous broadsword at his side, no shield needed, and usually wears a helmet on his head.

Appearance: HIs actual appearance is hard to discern from all the armor he puts on. But he has a greasy mop of brown hair on his head, and amber eyes, and that's mostly how people know him. But underneath his body is more elvish than orcish for some distant part of his family, but his body is still the disgusting shape of an orc. (pic: 6983848.png)

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