ReyZaBurrel Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 Some cards have been deleted and some have been changed. Errors hopefully fixed^_^...will be making a set on this when i get the hang of it^^.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 in its card name is much prefered. Spellcaster-Type Special Summon a few other errors also Some pictures could be improved Good effort tho ^_^ and if these are your first cards, good job ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 These are awsome for a frst few cards! 9/10Just listen to Dj, he is really good at finding problems, ALMOST as good as Bloodrun. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReyZaBurrel Posted January 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 Thank you for the good responses^^..i appreciate it..and a 9 out of ten^^..wow!!...and yea..ive been watching the posts he is like..the most famous person on here^^..i will listen..im kinda a dark magicin fan so i will be making more^^...without mistakes h opefully..i look forward to your responses^^ also..are these cards overpowered,,underpowered?..if so..tell me please..i want to make..balanced cards..and i do know whats wrong with them..i just asking for a few ideas?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 I think their balance is alright ^_^ Also yankee, bloodrun isnt even that good, he gives ppl false information, i cornered him once in a thread he gave false information and he admitted that he sometimes doesnt bother and writes anything At least with me you get the facts ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReyZaBurrel Posted January 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 ^^ good^^..i was worried about that..a few of them..kinda feel overpowered to me..^^...but you say there not so yay! ^_~... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 great cards cant wait to see more 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 make a set on them cause they are really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 Some of those pics don't quite look realistic...Anime-Girl styled pics are not good for cards. But I love the second card's image! Nice!! 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 ^_^ good cards 6.9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 Do even Quick-Play Trap Cards exist? :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 Silent Dark MagicianDark / 4 / Spellcaster / Effect / 1900 / 1300You can Special Summon this card by removing from play 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard. This card gains 100 DEF for each "Magician" card in your Graveyard.Might be better to make it so it can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Spell Card, similar to Gigantes and co. Defense gain seems a bit pointless. 6/10 Power of the Dark MagicianSpell / FieldActivate only when you control a Spellcaster-Type monster. All "Magician" monsters gain 500 ATK and lose 600 DEF. Whenever a Level 6 or higher "Magician" monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card.Overpowered, perhaps, although admittedly there's plenty of S/T removal out there. Decent secondary effect. 7/10 Magician's RebirthTrap / Quick-Play?!Special Summon 1 "Magician" monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position.I'm guessing you misclicked... I'm guessing it's meant to be just a normal. Anyway, a cost is necessary, in my opinion. 5/10 Dark Magicians UnitedSpell / Quick-PlayActivate when you control a "Dark Magician" and "Dark Magician Girl". Select 1 of each of these cards you control. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the combined ATK of the selected cards. These cards cannot attack during this turn.Not bad, requiring 2 Tribute monsters to use. Necessary "no attacking" text. 8/10 Dark Magician Silent SoldierDark / 4 / Spellcaster / Effect / 1500 / 1200This card gains 100 ATK for each "Magician" card ???. While you control a "Dark Magician" or "Dark Magician Girl", this card can attack directly.You don't say where the Magicians have to be. Nice secondary effect. No rating 'til effect is fixed. Dark Magician PriestessDark / 1 / Spellcaster / Effect / 0 / 0FLIP: Send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Dark Magician" from your Graveyard in Attack Position. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is targetted by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster Card, destroy this card.FLIP: Goes at the start. 7/10 Ancient Dark MagicianDark / 8 / Spellcaster / Effect / 3200 / 2600This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Dark Magician" and "Dark Magician Girl" from your hand, field or Graveyard. "Magician" monsters cannot be destroyed by battle.This card is so easy to summon. Don't make it so you can remove from the deck and it'll be nice. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 HEY, these are brilliant, if these are like you first real cards they are pretty outstanding; loads of potential, keep it up. 10*/10 *Your first brilliant effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 I think their balance is alright ^_^ Also yankee' date=' bloodrun isnt even that good, he gives ppl false information, i cornered him once in a thread he gave false information and he admitted that he sometimes doesnt bother and writes anything At least with me you get the facts ^_^[/quote'] O.O Wow, DJ...jealous much? XP Anywho, regarding the cards themselves I like them, OCG errors have been pointed out of course, however, the one error I can't let go is "Dark Magician's Unite".....there is no apostrophe!!! A bad name ruins the card in my opinion...almost as much as a pad picture does... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 youve have some great ideas keep it up 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 change the quick play trap to a counter overall... they are pretty good cards... good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted January 15, 2008 Report Share Posted January 15, 2008 Great cards! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Some are overpowered, don't capitalize hand or field, good pics. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Some are overpowered, don't capitalize hand or field, good pics. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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