jr junior Posted November 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1290469769' post='4803996'] Earthquake may be a little hard to do. I would give you some ideas but i having been racking my brain and still nothing. Good luck. [/quote] Yeah I've been brainstorming but I always pull through in the end somehow . Thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 OH MY GOSH!!!! I have an idea. Although it may not be the best. Anyway you know how bigger buildings are more likely to fall in an earthquake? Well, why not make an effect with destroying monsters with high ATK points? Just an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1290570446' post='4806522'] OH MY GOSH!!!! I have an idea. Although it may not be the best. Anyway you know how bigger buildings are more likely to fall in an earthquake? Well, why not make an effect with destroying monsters with high ATK points? Just an idea. [/quote] Hey, Dhole thanks a lot for the idea ! I'm kind of bummed though that I won't be able to work on Earthquake since today is Thanksgiving. Anyways, Happy Thanksgiving to you and everyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Happy Belated Thanksgiving! I sorta got lazy with this one since I'm busy enjoying my vacation right now. I'm kind of disappointed at how light the effect came to be but yeah what do you guys think? I tried disabling either player's field. If I think of anything else, I'll add on it to it later on Thanks again and I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving meal yesterday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 I really like the card. You say you got lazy but I think it is up to your normal standard. I am biased to card zone effects so great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Yay! This Set has finally reached 5,000 views! I can still remember in August when this thread only had around 200 views. Thank you everyone who has supported and contributed to this thread [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1290819552' post='4812247'] I really like the card. You say you got lazy but I think it is up to your normal standard. I am biased to card zone effects so great job. [/quote] Thanks again Dhole! I really wanted to make a Field Spell Card since I haven't made one since I made Sunny Day, Rain Dance, Hail and Trick Room. I'm glad you like the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 No problem and I think you were right to make it a Field Spell Card. EDIT: Congrats with so many views. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 HOLY SH*T!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!! ONIX IS ON THE LOOSE!!!!!!! Great card, dude. It's got a great concept. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1290866911' post='4813203'] No problem and I think you were right to make it a Field Spell Card. EDIT: Congrats with so many views. [/quote] Haha Thanks so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zetsu1919 Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 9/10 great cards could i ask you to create whirlpool and waterspout. if you could that would be awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 [quote name='Grand_Hokage_Tsunade' timestamp='1290868336' post='4813226'] HOLY SH*T!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!! ONIX IS ON THE LOOSE!!!!!!! Great card, dude. It's got a great concept. ^^ [/quote] Haha ! Yes, everyone, RUNN!!! And thanks for the support! [quote name='zetsu1919' timestamp='1290871136' post='4813295'] 9/10 great cards could i ask you to create whirlpool and waterspout. if you could that would be awesome [/quote] Sure thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 29, 2010 Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 OMG Did you really just resort to a bump?(JK) When are you planning on a new card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1291073137' post='4819243'] OMG Did you really just resort to a bump?(JK) When are you planning on a new card? [/quote] Haha yeah I know I rarely bump but this was one of those rare situations. I just felt disappointed that I only created 1 new card over the Thanksgiving weekend But I'm planning on starting a new card this Thursday. I'll brainstorm something for Lick for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 YEAH LICK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Sorry I haven't posted a card lately. Been busy. Well, here you go guys. I present to you Lick! The point of the effect was to sort of pass effects on to another monster just like how Licking passes on viruses and stuff. Yeah, I must admit my inspirations are a bit weird The second effect was an attempt to mirror the Paralysis effect of Lick, like paralyzing the opponent's Draw and Battle Phase. Hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][b]Send to the Graveyard[/b] 1 Fiend-Type or Zombie-Type monster you control or from your hand. Select and activate 1 of the following: ● Select 1 face-up monster you control, then equip this card to a face-up monster your opponent controls as an Equip Card on your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. While this card is equipped to a monster by its effect, any effect that targets the selected monster specifically instead targets the equipped monster. Once per turn, by paying 200 Life Points for each effect targeting the equipped monster instead of the selected monster due to this effect, unequip this card from the equipped monster, and equip it to another face-up monster your opponent controls. During your 3rd Standby Phase or if the selected monster is removed from the field, destroy this card, while equipped by this effect, and take 300 damage for each effect that targeted the equipped monster instead of the selected monster due to this effect. ● Place this card face-up at the top of your opponent's Deck. While this card is in a Deck this way, during that player's Draw Phase, they cannot conduct their normal draw [b]except[/b] by returning 2 cards to the bottom of their Deck[b](from where?)[/b]. Before conducting that player's Battle Phases, for each 3 Levels the discarded Fiend-Type or Zombie-Type monster was, they must toss a coin (max. 3). If the result is Tails[b](What if one of them is heads)[/b], they must skip the Battle Phase. During your 3rd Standby Phase, remove this card from play and take 800 damage.[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]I hoped that helped.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1291471387' post='4828079'] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][b]Send to the Graveyard[/b] 1 Fiend-Type or Zombie-Type monster you control or from your hand. Select and activate 1 of the following: ● Select 1 face-up monster you control, then equip this card to a face-up monster your opponent controls as an Equip Card on your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. While this card is equipped to a monster by its effect, any effect that targets the selected monster specifically instead targets the equipped monster. Once per turn, by paying 200 Life Points for each effect targeting the equipped monster instead of the selected monster due to this effect, unequip this card from the equipped monster, and equip it to another face-up monster your opponent controls. During your 3rd Standby Phase or if the selected monster is removed from the field, destroy this card, while equipped by this effect, and take 300 damage for each effect that targeted the equipped monster instead of the selected monster due to this effect. ● Place this card face-up at the top of your opponent's Deck. While this card is in a Deck this way, during that player's Draw Phase, they cannot conduct their normal draw [b]except[/b] by returning 2 cards to the bottom of their Deck[b](from where?)[/b]. Before conducting that player's Battle Phases, for each 3 Levels the discarded Fiend-Type or Zombie-Type monster was, they must toss a coin (max. 3). If the result is Tails[b](What if one of them is heads)[/b], they must skip the Battle Phase. During your 3rd Standby Phase, remove this card from play and take 800 damage.[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]I hoped that helped.[/font][/color] [/quote] Hey, thanks a lot Dhole! I can understand my first mistake since "Discard" isn't the correct wording when sending a monster from the field to the Graveyard. I'm not sure about "Except" though. I know it's correct OCG but it sort of means "with the exclusion of" while "Unless" means "except under the circumstances that". So I think "Unless" is a much better word to use than "Except" in this context. Oh yeah I forgot to add "unless by returning 2 cards from their hand to the bottom of their Deck". Thanks As for the last correction, I forgot to add "If all results are Head, conduct the Battle Phase normally." Anyways, I appreciate the OCG help a lot. How did you like the card overall? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 I like the card a lot it was very creative. I still have a question and a suggestion: Q: What if when you flip the coin it lands on heads, then tails, then heads again or vice versa? What happens? S: I would say just for the sake of grammar put [b]unless your opponent... [/b]in the card. Your chose though. Rating for the card 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1291476948' post='4828221'] I like the card a lot it was very creative. I still have a question and a suggestion: Q: What if when you flip the coin it lands on heads, then tails, then heads again or vice versa? What happens? S: I would say just for the sake of grammar put [b]unless your opponent... [/b]in the card. Your chose though. Rating for the card 8.6/10 [/quote] Well my new revised effect says "If 1 of the results is Tails, they must skip the Battle Phase." so as long as 1 of the results is Tails, the Battle Phase is skipped. As for the suggestion, I'll change it to "unless they return 2 cards from their hand to their Deck." so I won't be too specific since the effect can apply to either player, not just the opponent. Thanks for the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Okay the card looks perfect. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jr junior Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1291479533' post='4828306'] Okay the card looks perfect. 9.5/10 [/quote] You didn't have to do that but I really appreciate a lot Thanks, Dhole! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 I cannot wait for the next card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Next Card would be mine Roar =D .... I hope the effect is somehow like Penguin Soldier which pops monster back to the hand =) .... may only be activated if you have less Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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