Aliens

[tim0tee]

Er, I guess you could call this an attempt at 2% of a set, sort-of..... Anyways, just my attempt at making cards that work together.

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Advice and tips and OCG fixes (if its not too much work) are appreciated.


Lore for alien Shifter:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 face-up "Alien" monster, except "Alien Shifter"
When this card is Special Summoned, its Name, ATK, and DEF are treated as the sacrificed monsters.When this card is Special Summoned you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Alien" monsters from your hand, deck, or Graveyard.

[Dante Dimercurio]

[b]Picture: (8/10.) One of these cards doesn't have a background, other than that everything is awesome.

OCG: (?/10.) Are you able to put a Lore for one of the cards? I can't read it... So I can't give you a full rating.

Total: (?/10.) Please make an Lore.[/b]

[Marco Polo]

Mind Controller:
Effect: Overpowered. Similar to creature swap just without the exchange. 7/10
OCG: some OCG errors, very good for a new member. 8/10
Pic: not very impressive. 7/10
Stats: 9/10

Overall: 7.7/10


Robotic Walker:
Use: 3/10, it won't ever see a game
Description: 6/10 could've done better
Pic: 8/10 good.
Stats: 1/10 sorry, there are no such ATK and DEF stats.

4.5/10 overall


Shaman:
Effect: overpowered considering these other aliens are overpowered. 7/10
OCG: *D*eck not deck, *if not, destroy this card* not "or destroy this card" 9/10
Pic: could've found better, 8/10
Stats: great 9/10

Overall: 8.2/10



Shifter:
Effect: it's O-V-E-R-P-O-W-E-R-E-D. 5/10
OCG: average 6/10
Pic: 7/10
Stats: only one question mark. not four. 5/10


Warrior:
Use: once again, it won't see a game. 6/10 maybe with ancient rules but I'm not sure.
Description: that's common? 7/10
Pic: 6/10 could've found better
Stats: 7/10

Overall: 6.5/10


Aura:
Effect: 7/10 nothing special.
OCG: 7/10 written wrong
Pic: 7/10 I don't understand how this pic is connected to increasing the ATK and DEF of aliens.

Overall: 7/10

Homeland:
I'll rate it in another time.
but it's WAAY overpowered since you draw many cards.

[tim0tee]

[quote name='Ilan' timestamp='1282729709' post='4563758']
Mind Controller:
Effect: Overpowered. Similar to creature swap just without the exchange. 7/10
OCG: some OCG errors, very good for a new member. 8/10
Pic: not very impressive. 7/10
Stats: 9/10

Overall: 7.7/10


Robotic Walker:
Use: 3/10, it won't ever see a game
Description: 6/10 could've done better
Pic: 8/10 good.
Stats: 1/10 sorry, there are no such ATK and DEF stats.

4.5/10 overall


Shaman:
Effect: overpowered considering these other aliens are overpowered. 7/10
OCG: *D*eck not deck, *if not, destroy this card* not "or destroy this card" 9/10
Pic: could've found better, 8/10
Stats: great 9/10

Overall: 8.2/10



Shifter:
Effect: it's O-V-E-R-P-O-W-E-R-E-D. 5/10
OCG: average 6/10
Pic: 7/10
Stats: only one question mark. not four. 5/10


Warrior:
Use: once again, it won't see a game. 6/10 maybe with ancient rules but I'm not sure.
Description: that's common? 7/10
Pic: 6/10 could've found better
Stats: 7/10

Overall: 6.5/10


Aura:
Effect: 7/10 nothing special.
OCG: 7/10 written wrong
Pic: 7/10 I don't understand how this pic is connected to increasing the ATK and DEF of aliens.

Overall: 7/10

Homeland:
I'll rate it in another time.
but it's WAAY overpowered since you draw many cards.
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Thanks for the ratings, I realize these are overpowered now, maybe my next card I'll try and balance them more. And HomeLand you can only draw 5 cards, only 5 monster areas.

[quote name='Leo Fin' timestamp='1282718986' post='4563572']
[b]Picture: (8/10.) One of these cards doesn't have a background, other than that everything is awesome.

OCG: (?/10.) Are you able to put a Lore for one of the cards? I can't read it... So I can't give you a full rating.

Total: (?/10.) Please make an Lore.[/b]
[/quote]


How do I put Spoiler Tags on things so I can put lores for all of them without making it a mess?