_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 [center]This is the first card I have posted. [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/240/2/d/am_deleteing_by_edelweissqueen-d2xi7ev.png[/img] lore This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by a card's effect, activate the appropriate effect depending on the type of card that destroyed this card with it's effect: - Spell: Remove this card from play and send 1 monster card from your Deck to the Graveyard. - Trap: Add this card to your hand. - Monster: Remove from play this card and the monster that destroyed this card.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Next time, post the lore - It was a little hard to read. Anyways, it's a nice card for a new member. The idea is nice with multiple effects. I like the D.D. Warrior effect at the end. Overall, a balanced card (if not even UP'ed) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Thank you for that and there was me thinking I was crap lol your words are very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Of course! You're off to a good start! Good luck with the rest of your cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Post the effect, you have some OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 sorry was trying to post effect asap but kinda getting used to the hole ycm interface lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 OCG Fix: This card is also [b]treated[/b] as a [b]F[/b]airy[b]-T[/b]ype [b]monster[/b]. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by a card's effect[b],[/b] activate the appropriate effect depending on the type of card that destroyed this card with it's effect: [b]- [/b]Spell[b]:[/b] Remove this card from play and send 1 monster card from your [b]D[/b]eck to the Graveyard. [b]- [/b]Trap[b]:[/b] Add this card to your hand. [b]- [/b]Monster[b]:[/b] Remove from play this card and the monster that destroyed this card. [font="Comic Sans MS"][color="#800080"][size="3"][b]To be your first card, it was really decent, keep it up. It is a bit Op'd. 8/10[/b][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Thank you very much for the OCG fix I am surprised I got so little wrong lol will change card soon.Edited the lore but not the card yet will do that tomorrow now I am off to bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 besides the OCG, very nice beginner's card. Since the name has worthless in it, a better pic? When i see a card, I compare the name with the pic and effect/description. Overall 8.5/ 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Belial - deceptively beautiful fallen angel whose name means "without worth." That's why I chose the pic and also the worthless soul part was to try make it sound a bit more cool lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 [quote name='_Baal_' timestamp='1283103159' post='4578540'] Belial - deceptively beautiful fallen angel whose name means "without worth." That's why I chose the pic and also the worthless soul part was to try make it sound a bit more cool lol. [/quote] That's an interesting concept. I like this card. I would make a Deck around it just because the effect is very interesting, useful (no, its not overpowered), and I like the pic and the meaning behind all of it. Its a great start for a new member ;D The way the effect is written is the only thing but it was already corrected by someone above. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Thank you very much I am so glad everyone likes it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Best first card I've seen from a new member. Congratulation you have won a rare and elusive rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 high quality work from a new member. card itself is fine, some ocg errors, useful effect. keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Thank you for the reps and such generous compliments I really do appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 erm hope this is not to early but bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosstein Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 YOU!!!! I WANTED TO USE THIS PICTURE FOR MY OWN SET, THE FEMINATRIX!!! Ah well, at least it's not wasted to some noobcard with an way too overpowered effect . I actually really like the effect. It's very useful and would defenitly be top tier, but it's not overpowered. It would fit right between Cyber Valley and Marshmallon if you ask me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Baal_ Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Thank you for your post and sorry if I stopped you using this pic I would hope to see the card you intended to use the pic on please post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 WOW, this is great for a first card! 8.5/10! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Interesting cards. Lately Newcomers on YCM are starting to get better than some people that have been here longer. 9/10. Your OCG is solid, name and pic is solid. Effect is awesome. There is some draw backs which i like. Keep up the Good work mate. This is nearly the best place to get a pic. http://www.google.ca/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CBYQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fs825.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fzz178%2FJazinKay%2F&ei=I9p9TNDjJYuInQerjaWdCw&usg=AFQjCNEFquq1FH6E-yPfJdNW_GRUuwMY2w have a look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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