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[center]This is the first card I have posted.

[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/240/2/d/am_deleteing_by_edelweissqueen-d2xi7ev.png[/img]

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This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by a card's effect, activate the appropriate effect depending on the type of card that destroyed this card with it's effect:
- Spell: Remove this card from play and send 1 monster card from your Deck to the Graveyard.
- Trap: Add this card to your hand.
- Monster: Remove from play this card and the monster that destroyed this card.[/center]
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OCG Fix:

This card is also [b]treated[/b] as a [b]F[/b]airy[b]-T[/b]ype [b]monster[/b]. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by a card's effect[b],[/b] activate the appropriate effect depending on the type of card that destroyed this card with it's effect:
[b]- [/b]Spell[b]:[/b] Remove this card from play and send 1 monster card from your [b]D[/b]eck to the Graveyard.
[b]- [/b]Trap[b]:[/b] Add this card to your hand.
[b]- [/b]Monster[b]:[/b] Remove from play this card and the monster that destroyed this card.


[font="Comic Sans MS"][color="#800080"][size="3"][b]To be your first card, it was really decent, keep it up. It is a bit Op'd.

8/10[/b][/size][/color][/font]
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[quote name='_Baal_' timestamp='1283103159' post='4578540']
Belial - deceptively beautiful fallen angel whose name means "without worth."

That's why I chose the pic and also the worthless soul part was to try make it sound a bit more cool lol.
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That's an interesting concept.

I like this card. I would make a Deck around it just because the effect is very interesting, useful (no, its not overpowered), and I like the pic and the meaning behind all of it.

Its a great start for a new member ;D
The way the effect is written is the only thing but it was already corrected by someone above.

Keep up the good work.
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YOU!!!! I WANTED TO USE THIS PICTURE FOR MY OWN SET, THE FEMINATRIX!!! :angry:

Ah well, at least it's not wasted to some noobcard with an way too overpowered effect :P. I actually really like the effect. It's very useful and would defenitly be top tier, but it's not overpowered.

It would fit right between Cyber Valley and Marshmallon if you ask me :lol:

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Interesting cards. Lately Newcomers on YCM are starting to get better than some people that have been here longer. 9/10. Your OCG is solid, name and pic is solid. Effect is awesome. There is some draw backs which i like. Keep up the Good work mate. This is nearly the best place to get a pic. http://www.google.ca/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CBYQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fs825.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fzz178%2FJazinKay%2F&ei=I9p9TNDjJYuInQerjaWdCw&usg=AFQjCNEFquq1FH6E-yPfJdNW_GRUuwMY2w have a look
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