The Legendary Card Of Hell: Hell Lord DeVille

[KeithTehFire]

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Please Rate and Fix.
Lore:
This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by offering one "Mazera DeVille" and two Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field. When this card is Tribute Summoned, your opponent discards their entire hand. Once per turn, you may activate one of the following effects.
● You can discard any number of DARK monsters from your hand to Hell. If you do, discard an equal amount of cards from your opponent's hand. If you use this effect, you cannot Special Summon any of those monsters from Hell until the 3rd turn after using this effect.
● You may send any amount of DARK monsters from your Graveyard to Hell. If you do, increase the ATK of one DARK or Fiend-Type monster on your side of the field by 500 until the end of this turn.

Placed in Hell is something new in Traveling Through Destiny. For now, treat it as a second removed from play. The 2 effects ARE correct OCG. Remember, this is something new to be shown in the next post.

[BT]

so your doing zera cards?

BTW good card.

OCG:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 "Mazera DeVille" and 2 Fiend-Type monsters you control. When this card is Tribute Summoned, your opponent must discard their hand. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects.
● You can discard any number of DARK monsters from your hand. If you do, your opponent must discard an equal amount of cards. If you use this effect, the discarded monsters cannot be Special Summoned for the next 3 turns
● You can place any amount of DARK monsters from your Graveyard to Hell/[i]your Hell Zone[/i]. If you do, increase the ATK of 1 DARK or Fiend-Type monster you control by 500 until the End Phase.

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='1284426833' post='4625447']
so your doing zera cards?

BTW good card.

OCG:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 "Mazera DeVille" and 2 Fiend-Type monsters you control. When this card is Tribute Summoned, your opponent must discard their hand. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects.
● You can discard any number of DARK monsters from your hand. If you do, your opponent must discard an equal amount of cards. If you use this effect, the discarded monsters cannot be Special Summoned for the next 3 turns
● You can place any amount of DARK monsters from your Graveyard to Hell/[i]your Hell Zone[/i]. If you do, increase the ATK of 1 DARK or Fiend-Type monster you control by 500 until the End Phase.
[/quote]

Actually it would be sending the card to Hell not to your Hell Zone lol."To your Hell Zone" sounds like Engrish.
P.S. New update for Hell Support

[BT]

ok then... whatever

would this card help your game?
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/221836-amra-the-wild-black-lion/page__p__4624552__fromsearch__1#entry4624552

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='1284430328' post='4625598']
ok then... whatever

would this card help your game?
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/221836-amra-the-wild-black-lion/page__p__4624552__fromsearch__1#entry4624552
[/quote]

Its a little broken but might fit if I limit it. Do you want me to put it in?

[BT]

if you want... I'm adding a white lion soon

[KeithTehFire]

Demon Bump

[Smesh]

hmm..placed in hell? It's creative, but just say removed from play. But its pretty good, OCG is in order, you just said "may" instead of "can" one time, but thats about it.

Very good for a new guy.

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1284503194' post='4627479']
hmm..placed in hell? It's creative, but just say removed from play. But its pretty good, OCG is in order, you just said "may" instead of "can" one time, but thats about it.

Very good for a new guy.
[/quote]

There is a difference, big difference.

[TheComposer]

[quote name='KeithTehFire' timestamp='1284503702' post='4627504']
There is a difference, big difference.
[/quote]
Because there's no "return from hell" cards XDD Good card, like everyone said before. 9/10

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='Bass666' timestamp='1284504137' post='4627524']
Because there's no "return from hell" cards XDD Good card, like everyone said before. 9/10
[/quote]

Yep, I can't even believe Smesh gave a good review. So surprising I had to put it in my status

[Master White]

[quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1284503194' post='4627479']
hmm..placed in hell? It's creative, but just say removed from play. But its pretty good, OCG is in order, you just said "may" instead of "can" one time, but thats about it.

Very good for a new guy.
[/quote]
He is implying that b/c it does not exist, he made a new zone, like a secondary remove from play zone. So, if the opponent used a RFP deck, they'd have to choose want remove from play pile they sent them to and etc, it is an interesting idea, very very creative, which is why I like this card. But I'm not sure how they would do that?

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='General White' timestamp='1284504464' post='4627544']
He is implying that b/c it does not exist, he made a new zone, like a secondary remove from play zone. So, if the opponent used a RFP deck, they'd have to choose want remove from play pile they sent them to and etc, it is an interesting idea, very very creative, which is why I like this card. But I'm not sure how they would do that?
[/quote]

Actually cards that state it will be sent to Hell go to Hell. Then effects that work with cards in Hell trigger. My new pack, Hell Awaits, will take advantage of this a whole lot.

[Master White]

Well, then I don't lnow how the mechanics would work, b/c the rule book would make it if they want somewhere unknown by a card effect, they would litterally be removed from the game and can't be brought back, unless card effect stated otherwise, so you might want to think about it, as you did say it is like an secondary remove from play zone at the top.

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='General White' timestamp='1284505543' post='4627623']
Well, then I don't lnow how the mechanics would work, b/c the rule book would make it if they want somewhere unknown by a card effect, they would litterally be removed from the game and can't be brought back, unless card effect stated otherwise, so you might want to think about it, as you did say it is like an secondary remove from play zone at the top.
[/quote]

See my pack called Hell Awaits, they can come back, but thats not the ONLY purpose

[Master White]

Yea, what I am saying is if thats the case, you'll have to say "This card comes back from this Zone" etc. on all your cards, in the game itself if you were going to play it in yn, it wouldn't work. If you left it to say hell zone, it would probably do 1 of 2 things, send it to the RFP zone, or freeze up. So, you should clarify on all the cards until the new Zone comes out, type deal.

[KeithTehFire]

[quote name='General White' timestamp='1284509822' post='4627958']
Yea, what I am saying is if thats the case, you'll have to say "This card comes back from this Zone" etc. on all your cards, in the game itself if you were going to play it in yn, it wouldn't work. If you left it to say hell zone, it would probably do 1 of 2 things, send it to the RFP zone, or freeze up. So, you should clarify on all the cards until the new Zone comes out, type deal.
[/quote]

I am a little confused, explain

[Master White]

In other words, this game does not exist, so there for, your opponent would probably think that you were trying to trick him out of hurting you in the game, so when it exists, you can do it. But b/c this game does not exist, the Zone does not exist, than you will have to explain what this Zone does and where it is located, as if it a Zone all of its own, also, if you so desperately think this game with a new zone will come out, provide a link to it that is not a wikia page, b/c people can write anything there and virtually get away with it, and saying this, you could have.

But all in all, these are what you need to do to make this stay here or move it to the any other section:

1st: Provide a link to the game which does not exist, b/c I have searched and ended up with nothing.
2nd: Prove to us this Zone exists, which means say where do the cards go and why they are and is their any other special things while they are, and is it a secondary whatever or an actual new zone?
3rd: Make sure all your criteria is accurate, and in that case, if so, continue making the cards here, but at least say where they go, or it is considered a fake card, which is not allowed here.
4th: If you cannot do any of the above, then they are fake, which does not belong in this section:

I'm actually being nice, what if a mod actually came into this thread, I'm sure they move it right away... So I hope all this helps, just hope a mod don't come into this thread...

[DarkSaint]

Why not just make it to be remove from game?A hell zone...i think it is not necessary.Althought in YGO 1,Noah have use a special ablity,a ship that can absord all monster in the Graveyard into it,by removing all monster in the ship from game,Noah gains 500 Life Point for each monster that removing from game.Well,that is same as "removing all monster in the Graveyard from game,and gain 500 Life Points for each monster that removed from game."Dun need to make a "Hell" zone,just use Graveyard well be fine.If you want make the monster cannot be special summon by your opponent card effect or fear them effect it like remove it out of game,you can just make them cannot special summon except by the effect of card name with "Hell",and make them cannot remove from game.(Althought that will become OP)A Hell Zone is just too cheap as opponent player cannot effect the Hell Zone at all.Well,this is good to be a Boss Special Card Deck though.

Sorry for Bad English.

[KeithTehFire]

Thanks for the comment^^. I am thinking now it will be removed from play, but they can only be special summoned back to the field by cards with "Hell" in their name.

[Master White]

[quote name='KeithTehFire' timestamp='1285438467' post='4653703']
Thanks for the comment^^. I am thinking now it will be removed from play, but they can only be special summoned back to the field by cards with "Hell" in their name.
[/quote]

That would actually work, since it is bringing them back. So, i give thumbs up if you went that route.