TheComposer Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/2576/276354s.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] When this card is summoned successfully, put 1 Shadow Counter on it. Every time this card destroys an opponent's monster, put another Shadow Counter on this card. During your Main Phase, take damage equal to the number of Shadow Counters on this card x100. [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/5299/276354x.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card. Tribute 1 "Shadow the Hedgehog" and 1 DARK monster from your side of the field to Special Summon 1 "Super Shadow" from your hand. [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/9614/276354q.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The 7 Chaos Emeralds". Put Shadow Counters equal to the number of Shadow Counters that was on the "Shadow the Hedgehog" that was used to summon this card on this card. Once per turn, you may remove all Shadow Counters on this card to inflict damage equal to the number of Shadow Counters removed x500 to your opponent's Life Points. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1070/276354o.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] This card can only be equipped to "Shadow the Hedgehog". During your Main Phase add 1 Shadow Counter to the monster equipped with this card. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/6391/276354c.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] Activate this card when "Shadow the Hedgehog" is attacked. Whenever "Shadow the Hedgehog" is going to be destroyed, remove 2 Shadow Counters from it instead. If "Shadow the Hedgehog" doesn't have 2 or more Shadow Counters on it, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [color="#FF0000"][b][center]Super Shadow's lore is slightly confusing. I get what it means, but that way it's worded leaves me confuzzled.[/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Yah I didn't exactly know the correct OCG for that. I hope someone helps me with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [color="#FF0000"][center][i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The 7 Chaos Emeralds". Put Shadow Counters equal to the number of Shadow Counters that was on the "Shadow the Hedgehog" [b]on this card[/b]. Once per turn, you may remove all Shadow Counters on this card to inflict damage equal to the number of Shadow Counters removed x500 to your opponent's Life Points.[/i][/center][/color] [color="#FF0000"][b][center]This is how I interpreted it...?[/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Yah I should put on this card after it. I'll fix that.Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 The cards are good 9/10 Mephiles if you want you can help me too dude if you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Shadow seems a little underpowered to be honest. You could [i]maybe[/i] bump his ATK up to 26 or 2700ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1286159562' post='4678019'] Shadow seems a little underpowered to be honest. You could [i]maybe[/i] bump his ATK up to 26 or 2700ATK. [/quote] That's why I made Super Shadow so strong Also I'm thinking of adding on to this. Working on it right now.Cards have been added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Hmm, have you considered making "Super Shadow' and "The 7 Chaos Emeralds" a Ritual Spell and Ritual Monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 [quote name='Chaos Sonic' timestamp='1286299515' post='4681270'] Hmm, have you considered making "Super Shadow' and "The 7 Chaos Emeralds" a Ritual Spell and Ritual Monster? [/quote] I did, but for it to be what I wanted, it couldn't have been a Ritual Monster. But I did consider it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Krillin! Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 The 7 Chaos Emeralds Lore Says Super Sonic Instead of Super Shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [quote name='InuYasha boy707' timestamp='1286588171' post='4689595'] The 7 Chaos Emeralds Lore Says Super Sonic Instead of Super Shadow. [/quote] wow fail. fixed it. I feel stupid now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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mussr333 Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 The cards are good... except for Shadow. If you don't have the trap that negates his destruction by removing the tokens, all they do is harm you. You should add an effect like "You can remove five Shadow Counters from this card to destroy one face-up spell or trap card on the field." All in all...8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 [quote name='mussr333' timestamp='1287451421' post='4716664'] The cards are good... except for Shadow. If you don't have the trap that negates his destruction by removing the tokens, all they do is harm you. You should add an effect like "You can remove five Shadow Counters from this card to destroy one face-up spell or trap card on the field." All in all...8/10. [/quote] But that would make him too over powered. That's why I made it that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDarkAce Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 They are good but you need more variety than just Shadow you need add like Black Arms and GUN into it (if u r planning to do so destroy this message) So 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 I was not, but that's a good idea. Whenever I get around to it I might start making those, so thanks for the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted October 20, 2010 Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 Shadow could be 2500 i think, wouldn't make him broken pretty cool card 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted October 20, 2010 Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 Pretty good so far. Got some feeback for you on the wordings of some of the cards and some of my own suggestions. As always, I just like to start of by saying you are free to use or not use this advice. Shadow. When this card is summoned successfully, put 1 Shadow Counter on it. Every time this card destroys an opponent's monster [b]as a result of battle[/b], put [b]1[/b] Shadow Counter on this card. During [b]each of your Standby Phases[/b], take damage equal to the number of Shadow Counters on this card x100. Just a couple of minor re-wordings here. Also, if your wondering why I changed the Main Phase to the Standby Phase, consider this: you have two Main Phases, one before and one after the Battle Phase. If you don't specify which Main Phase the effect is active in, ecspecially with an effect that involves damage you could find it quite easily being interpreted into both phases. Thus I generally think it's better to put effects like that in the Standby Phase. You've only got the one and we know it works. The Emeralds. This one is fine. Super Shadow. I'm aware Mephiles gave you some help on the re-wording of this already but it could do with just a little more tweaking. Something like: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The 7 Chaos Emeralds". Put [b]a number of[/b] Shadow Counters [b]on this card[/b] equal to the number of Shadow Counters that [b]were[/b] on the "Shadow the Hedgehog" that was [b]Tributed[/b] to summon this card. Once per turn, you may remove all Shadow Counters [b]from[/b] this card to inflict damage equal to the number of Shadow Counters removed x500 to your opponent's Life Points. Chaos Emerald. Again, just some re-wording. Also, you missed out something rather vital in the text. This card can only be equipped to [b]a[/b] "Shadow the Hedgehog". [b]Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can[/b] add 1 Shadow Counter to the monster equipped with this card. The 'Once per turn' was the vital part. Otherwise you could just add and add and add all in one Main Phase. The 'you can' part I added is entirely optional. I just thought you might want to make the addition of the counter optional but you can keep it compulsory if you wish. I was going to change the last part to 'to the equipped monster' but it really means exactly the same as what you've written and I'm not so picky as to think it matters quite that much. Chaos Control. Again just a bit of re-wording/editing. [b]You can only[/b] activate this card when [b]a "Shadow the Hedgehog" you control[/b] is attacked. Whenever [b]a "Shadow the Hedgehog" you control would[/b] be destroyed, remove 2 Shadow Counters from it instead. [b]If a "Shadow the Hedgehog" you control has less than 2 Shadows Counters after the activation of this effect[/b], destroy this card. The last part was slightly difficult (as it always is with rather unconventional effects) but I think I've managed to re-word the effect you were trying to get. Hope what I've said can be in some way useful to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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