"Dark Paladin Girl" Card

[BatMed]

[color="#FF0000"][size="5"]///Dark Paladin Girl[/size][/color]
[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/1262/258394.jpg[/img]
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[size="3"]"Dark Magician Girl" + "Buster Blader"
This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can negate the activation of 1 Spell / Trap Card and destroy the Trap / Spell Card by discarding 1 card from your hand. The ATK of this card increases by 500 points for each "Dark Magician" monster on the field and in either Graveyard.[/size]

[Blake]

"Dark Magician Girl" + "Buster Blader"
This monster can[b]not[/b] [s]only[/s] be Special Summoned[b], except[/b] by Fusion Summon. [s]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, y[/s][b]Y[/b]ou can negate the activation of 1 Spell [s]/[/s] [b]or[/b] Trap Card and destroy the Trap [s]/[/s] [b]or[/b] Spell Card by discarding 1 card from your hand. [s]The ATK of this card increases[/s] [b]Increase the ATK of this card[/b] by 500 points for each "Dark Magician" monster on the field and in either [b]player's[/b] Graveyard.

I think that's all the OCG issues...

Better Name: Dark Templar (Synonym for Paladin). Adding "Girl" at the end sounds too... cliche, I guess?

Anyways, I think you made it too strong with the effect negating Spells AND Trap cards. Make it just Traps OR Monsters, because Dark Paladin has Spells.

As for the gaining effect... I feel it does not do justice to Buster Blader, but it's not too bad.

6/10

[snowyash]

I'd like to point out something I noticed the last time I saw a card like this.

Girl + (What I assume to be a) Male = Girl ???

Name: Not original but realistic all the same. 6/10
Pic: Nice pic. I like it a lot. 10/10
OCG: Only 1 problem - Spell / Trap = Spell or Trap. Still good for a newb though. 8/10
Stats: Ok, even of it is just a small drop off of Dark Paladin. 8/10
Effect: Basically a stronger effect than Paladin, with a bit more of a dodgy power boost effect. Not sure it's effect should be better than Paladin's though. 7/10

39/50 or 7.8/10

[Outré]

I mostly agree with them, although I don't get why they are saying it's too much like Dark Paladin,it's supposed to be a... I cant think of the word, not counterpart, but whatever.
Anyway, pretty nice card

[Blake]

[quote name='Outré' timestamp='1288997872' post='4764249']
I mostly agree with them, although I don't get why they are saying it's too much like Dark Paladin,it's supposed to be a... I cant think of the word, not counterpart, but whatever.
Anyway, pretty nice card
[/quote]
I said nothing of the sort =/ Just told 'im how to make it a bit better, and to change the name. Templar is a perfect counterpart to Paladin.