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New Type! NATURAL!


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Use the forces of nature to destroy your opponent, get an unusable card, trade it in for a usable one! The nature cards come in 4 types, each for how it's formed:
Wind
Water
Earth
Fire


Now introducing! The first card!




[img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/7942/27867.jpg[/img]


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[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7942/27867.jpg[/img]
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*Infinity facepalm*

No one bans you to make sub-types. But, they go to ANY OTHER CARDS section.

[b]EDIT[/b]
Since this is a realistic cards section, I'll review the cards:

[u]Cumulus[/u]
• 2000 ATK is too much for a Level 3 monster. Put it as Level 4 or 5 monster.
• Last effect: Removing it from play would make it more balanced.
• Pic is bad and blurry and has a white stripe on the bottom.

[u]Cumulonibus[/u]
• It looks like the pic has been made in MS Paint. It's pretty bad.
• Again, if his ATK gets raised, it's too high for a Level 5 monster.
• 2nd effect makes it a little bit faster to summon, which is ok effect.
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I give you a +Rep cause you dont deserve the neg rep

Over to the card. The first is kinda OPed, cause if you have it for 4 turns on the field, it's get back to the Deck and then you can Special Summon the other monster. Now over to that, make it Level 7 or higher, cause it gets to much ATK for a Level 5 monster. And the card is too easy to Summon

1/10 I have 7/10 for single cards only and that is for maximum of 5 cards or less

And you can post Fake-Types here but there are Special Specifications for how they should be but I dont know that

That think it is so

EDIT: Also I neg you cause all we are trying to do is helping you but you dont want our help. If you post here, you must be able to take destructive criticism
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[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1289658073' post='4781292']
EDIT: Also I neg you cause all we are trying to do is helping you but you dont want our help. If you post here, you must be able to take [s]destructive[/s] [b]constructive[/b] criticism.[/quote]

There we go, that's better. ^^

Anyway, don't go insulting other people for their opinions. Otherwise, they tend to bite back. Just take it all with a pinch of salt. You're an alright cardmaker for a 2 star, but you aren't perfect. Don't insult others who are actually trying to help.

Anyway, as was already mentioned, these don't belong here. I know what AxManBoy said, and I can understand why he said it, but all the more I need to say is that this forum is for Realistic cards. In other words, cards with types that exist. That's why you can't post Dark Synchros here anymore, because they are now just Synchros. They belong in Any Other Cards, because they aren't real types. Now that that's been established, I'll do a rate/OCG edit.

Cumulus- Once per turn you can Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to have this card gain 500 ATK. When this card has 2000 ATK, you can return this card to your deck to Special Summon 1 "Cumulonimbus" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

Cumulonimbus (proper spelling)- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Cumulus". When you draw this card, you can return it to your Deck to add 1 "Cumulus" card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn you can Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to have this card gain 500 ATK.
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1SDAN. Naturals/Naturia's are an archetype. Plants... So if you're going to create it, please do so in a more detailed manner and add Spell/Traps to support it on top of existing monsters. Oh and your language is not welcomed. Don't do it again or further action will be taken.
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Naturals and Clouds (Cloudians) are already an Archetype. If you are going to make one surrounded around this theme, it should be "Elemental". There is already one, and it would be interesting you to make an [b]archetype[/b] around it (cards with the same keyword in their name, such as the Monarchs or Cloudians). It doesn't have to be its own [b]Type[/b].
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