F.E.A.R.3 Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 take a look at my plants vs zombies cards, plz comment and give me a out of 10. [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/aesmbk.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/10oib7b.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2mhefc.jpg[/IMG] more are going to be made soon. hope so you like it. as i said please comment. and give me a score out of 10 and tell me if its good. thanks [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/j0k37k.jpg[/IMG] this card is the strongest out of all the zombie cards i am going to make. i am making 13 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Poorly made. Needs better wording. They also need a [i]Type.[/i] Effects of the Zombies can be made stronger, and I'm sure you can do something to better approximate their effects to what they do in-game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack of All Spades Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 First off, capitalize the first word in every sentence. Next, give "DR. ZOMBOSS" a better card. I'll fix it for you: Zombie/Effect "In order to Tribute Summon this card, you must Tribute 4 Zombie-type monsters from the field. After doing so, you must draw 4 cards from your deck. For every Plant-type drawn, add 200 to your Life Points. For every Zombie-type drawn, inflict 400 Damage Points Directly to your opponent." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F.E.A.R.3 Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 [quote name='Some Guy in a Whambulance' timestamp='1290261546' post='4797468'] First off, capitalize the first word in every sentence. Next, give "DR. ZOMBOSS" a better card. I'll fix it for you: Zombie/Effect "In order to Tribute Summon this card, you must Tribute 4 Zombie-type monsters from the field. After doing so, you must draw 4 cards from your deck. For every Plant-type drawn, add 200 to your Life Points. For every Zombie-type drawn, inflict 400 Damage Points Directly to your opponent." [/quote] thank you for all your comments and i will improve because its my first time doing this so yeah. thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daimon620 Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 i got more here [img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/905/313631.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zetsu1919 Posted November 22, 2010 Report Share Posted November 22, 2010 doom-shroom is very nice but the 2300 attack seems kinda redundant since it will just tribute itself but ill give it an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted November 22, 2010 Report Share Posted November 22, 2010 the monsters should have Zombie as their types, the first 3 have OCG errors, they should have this effect - This card can Attack your opponent Directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redroom Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 I love PLants vs Zombie, Doom Shroom is good but needs more grammer, and the other cards need more help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daimon620 Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 i thing those zombie can attack directly if your opponent dont got any plant monster on the field i got more than that ^^ [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/905/313631.jpg[/img][img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4995/313631a.jpg[/img][img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7516/313631l.jpg[/img][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6564/313631m.jpg[/img][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4175/313631k.jpg[/img][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/905/313631.jpg[/img][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/905/313631.jpg[/img][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/4223/313631w.jpg[/img] i can got more if you like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 The Dancer Zombie could have a better effect. Maybe something like this: "Once per turn, you can Special Summon one Level 4 or lower Zombie from your Graveyard to your side of the field." Either this, or it can Special Summon "Backup Zombie Token"s instead if that's too broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F.E.A.R.3 Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 [quote name='Gadjiltron' timestamp='1290613551' post='4807124'] The Dancer Zombie could have a better effect. Maybe something like this: "Once per turn, you can Special Summon one Level 4 or lower Zombie from your Graveyard to your side of the field." Either this, or it can Special Summon "Backup Zombie Token"s instead if that's too broken. [/quote] thats a great idea thanks i will do that thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daimon620 Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 i think for boss zombie you should add the effect: you can tributed 1 zombie monster to destroy 2 card on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zetsu1919 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 the sunflower shouldnt have to be tributed to special summon it should stay on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zetsu1919 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 the sunflower shouldnt have to be tributed to special summon it should stay on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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