~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 [center][spoiler=Stardusk Dragon] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/2176/293562o.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] [b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters Once per Duel, you can reveal this card in your Extra Deck and discard 1 DARK monster to decrease this card's level by half the discarded monster's level (rounded up). Each time a card is Set in the Spell/Trap Card Zone, destroy it and reduce this card's level by 2. When this cards level is 2 or lower, destroy this card.[/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Stardoom Dragon] [img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/1440/293562v.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] [b]1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters Each time a monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, you can have this card lose 500 ATK and have its level decreased by 2, to decrease the Summoned monster's ATK and DEF by this card's level x 500. If the ATK of a monster is reduced to 0 by this card's effect, destroy it instead.[/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler][/center] +Reps appreciated^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 [quote name='GladiatorBeastAleksander' timestamp='1290530231' post='4805120'] [center][spoiler=Stardusk Dragon] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2756/293562.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] [b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters Once per duel, while this card is in the Extra Deck, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to reduce this cards Level equal to half the Level of the discarded monster. Each time a Spell or Trap Card is Set, you can reduce this cards Level by 2 to destroy it. If this monsters Level becomes 2 or less, destroy this card.[/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Stardoom Dragon] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2756/293562.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] [b]1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters Each time a monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, you can reduce this cards Level by 2 to decrease that monsters ATK equal to this cards Level x500. If the selected monsters ATK reaches 0, destroy it. Decrease this cards ATK by 500 each time you use this effect.[/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler][/center] [/quote] Not bad, not bad. Where did you get the images? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 from JazinKay's Photobucket archives Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 Stardusk is a bit overpowered in my opinion, and it should say that you have to reveal it for its effect to activate in the Extra Deck. Otherwise it wouldn't work. Stardoom is pretty bland, but it works. Overall they're okay cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 Thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 There both good first one is op'd a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='Majora Raichu' timestamp='1290614824' post='4807152'] There both good first one is op'd a [/quote] Could you please elaborate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1290548886' post='4805702'] Stardusk is a bit overpowered in my opinion [/quote] Honestly, its not overpowered at all. Sure the "lol u can summon it easier" portion of the effect might make it an easier beatstick to play, but that just means you -2 yourself. As it is, it easily gets run over by a Book of Moon, and most monster destruction cards dont really get set at first anyway. So at most, it would be overpowered in a Dark Simorgh.dek Everywhere els, its fine and balances. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 I likey. I get what you're trying to do with the whole negating-like-stardust thing, but I would like it if you could tie at least one of the cards in with Stardust Dragon. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1290628439' post='4807547'] Honestly, its not overpowered at all. Sure the "lol u can summon it easier" portion of the effect might make it an easier beatstick to play, but that just means you -2 yourself. As it is, it easily gets run over by a Book of Moon, and most monster destruction cards dont really get set at first anyway. So at most, it would be overpowered in a Dark Simorgh.dek Everywhere els, its fine and balances. [/quote] A lot of monsters get easily beaten by Book of Moon. It pretty much is a beatstick that stops your opponent from making any plans for the turn after it hits the floor. Trap cards are especially popular these days, and not being able to Set them at all makes this card extremely annoying and strong. Plus, the obvious combo with Anti-Spell Fragrance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Thanks to all of you for the rating, i like seing different points of view^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 None are Op'd too me. Their names are pretty cool as well. But I have a question for Stardusk, what if the discarded monster's Level is a odd number? For example: Half of 5 is 2.5 and how do you subtract that many levels? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='~Jay~' timestamp='1290629492' post='4807599'] None are Op'd too me. Their names are pretty cool as well. But I have a question for Stardusk, what if the discarded monster's Level is a odd number? For example: Half of 5 is 2.5 and how do you subtract that many levels? :/ [/quote] I thought about that just a minute ago, but I can't figure out how to solve it :/ any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Make it say "(rounded up)" after the effect and just before the period. Some anime effects have such stipulations. You could round it down... but I personally wouldn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 OCG Fix FTW First Card: Once per Duel, you can reveal this card in your Extra Deck and discard 1 DARK monster to decrease this card's level by half the discarded monster's level (rounded up). Each time a card is set in the Spell/Trap Zone, destroy it and reduce this card's level by 2. When this card's level is 2 or lower, destroy it. (I also made the effect mandatory as a balanced measure...just in case...XD) Second One: Each time a monster is Summoned, you can have this card loses 500 ATK and has its level decreased by 2, to decrease the Summoned monster's ATK and DEF by this card's level x 500. If the ATK of a monster is reduced to 0 by this card's effect, destroy it instead. OK... Hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 ok, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [size="1"]bump?[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 bumppp^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Ok, stop bumping ! Now I'll rate the cards : Neither of them have OCG mistakes. Stardusk is not as good as stardoom because it destroys himself easily. I like the Destroy Set Cards part though. Stardoom is strong is a little OP IMO, as he can decrease the ATK of a monster too much, but only in the first time. Well, good cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Thanks^^ Rating greatly appreciated.I like bumping old topics! >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 [quote name='~Shadow of Alpha~' timestamp='1295185614' post='4938178'] Thanks^^ Rating greatly appreciated. I like bumping old topics! >.< [/quote] You're welcome. Its nice to see people appreciate my rating ! Well, just take care not to bump 1 month old topics, as its necrobump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Alright^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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