Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [center]Well this could possibly be one of my Member Cards but I made it as a real card. What do you think about it?[/center][center][spoiler='Earthbound Immortal Dhole'][/center][center][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7949/earthboundimmortaldhole.jpg[/img][/center][center]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn if your opponent has more monsters on the field than you then you can Special Summon 1 Hound Token(1200 ATK/ 1200 DEF/ level 3/ Beast-Type/ DARK Attribute). Once per turn you can Tribute 1 Hound Token to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is destroyed, other than by its own effect, all monsters Special Summoned by this cards effect(this includes Tokens) are destroyed and then your opponent takes damage equal to the number of monsters(this includes Tokens) destroyed this turn x400.[/center][center][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 First of all, Earthbound Immortals are cheap has hell, because you can't attack them and they can attack you directly. Second, You need to add a effect when it's destroyed NOT by it's own effect. Third, the token thing is pretty boring. I've seen it before. Finally, Earthboud Immortals are based on symbols in a desert in SOUTH AMERCIA!!! It's not cool if you make one that is not a symbol from that region all and all, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 So I am guessing you didn't like it. I will add an effect about when it is destroyed other than by its own effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1293128375' post='4877169'] So I am guessing you didn't like it. I will add an effect about when it is destroyed other than by its own effect. [/quote] Yes and I don't like Earthbound immortals[quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1293128375' post='4877169'] So I am guessing you didn't like it. I will add an effect about when it is destroyed other than by its own effect. [/quote] Yes and I don't like Earthbound immortals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='Demon wolf' timestamp='1293127577' post='4877135'] First of all, Earthbound Immortals are cheap has hell, because you can't attack them and they can attack you directly. [b]And yet people still play them?[/b] Second, You need to add a effect when it's destroyed NOT by it's own effect. [b]What? No he doesn't? Only 2 or 3 EBI have effects like that[/b] Third, the token thing is pretty boring. I've seen it before. [b]Everyone has and yet people still make cards around them. It's rather rude to take off points just because it uses something that has happened before.[/b] Finally, Earthboud Immortals are based on symbols in a desert in SOUTH AMERCIA!!! It's not cool if you make one that is not a symbol from that region [b]Really...? That's the anime. The cards are originated from Native American symbols and such (And even then not all of them are). The names are in the language that Incas used. Not only that but it's called originality. You do not have to make the image exactly match the "lore". If it has the essential components of an EBI it's fine.[/b] all and all, 5/10 [/quote] I'm sorry but this "comment" is bias and should not be followed. Do not post to a card if you're going to be bias and close minded. I dislike Excess monsters yet I rate fairly and openmindedly and hell I even made support. Now. I'm not going to comment on the name as it is rather difficult to find a Quechua translator. It's effect is way UP for EBI. EBI have stronger effects than just hitting weak monsters. At least make it destroy any monster, not just Level 4 or lower =/. Way to UP. >< Im not totally in this so I may edit this later as my mind is scattered atm so >> sorry for the boring comment. Why add onto the effect? It was unnecessary. That is not a component of EBI that must be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 I changed the effect and I have a question if they are based on symbols from a South American desert how come their is a whale one I mean I know they are based on the Nazca Lines but there is no whale in the desert. Maybe you meant the Nazca Lines themselves. Oh and you double posted.[quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1293128618' post='4877182'] I'm sorry but this "comment" is bias and should not be followed. Now. I'm not going to comment on the name as it is rather difficult to find a Quechua translator. It's effect is way UP for EBI. EBI have stronger effects than just hitting weak monsters. At least make it destroy any monster, not just Level 4 or lower =/. Way to UP. >< Im not totally in this so I may edit this later as my mind is scattered atm so >> sorry for the boring comment. Why add onto the effect? It was unnecessary. That is not a component of EBI that must be there. [/quote] Thank you for the comment and I will change the effect again. I was trying to not make OP'd and I guess I made it UP'd. Perhaps I should make an entirely new effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 The thing is EBI are all OP. Which in a way makes them balanced in a sense. Making them balanced compared to normal effect monsters would make it UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Okay well I will get to work and make OP'd I mean balanced no wait oh you know what I mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 I LOVE EBIs and this card is really good. the image is great, the effect of when its destroyed is great, yet i have to agree with lovely c.c. i like that you have brought token swarming to EBIs but i think it should destroy any card but all in all a good card 9 / 10 keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 I like the card. It could be a real EBI. I'm an EBI fan. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 I have finished making the new effect and I am about to put it up. I decided to keep the Token effect because wolves tend to hunt in packs, thus it can Special Summon tokens but I have a feeling I have made it a bit OP'd but I need your opinions whether it is OP'd for an EBI. Alright I am about to post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Lol now it's [b]too[/b] OP. Leave out the S/T part. Thats overdoing it. The rest of the effect should be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Alright I will change it thanks for the comments everyone.changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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