Heavens Guardian Posted December 24, 2010 Report Share Posted December 24, 2010 [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4598/330701n.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 monster your opponent controls and take control of it. Once per turn, when this card is selected as an attack target, you can change the target to 1 other monster you control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted December 24, 2010 Report Share Posted December 24, 2010 Don't see anything with the OCG I think, I'm not so sure about that comma. Anyways, considering it can take control of an opponent's monster maybe lower the ATK a bit. You could also add an effect like allowing your opponent to have his/her monster back if this card is destroyed by battle or something. Pretty good card, showing modest levels of creativity. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 Thanx ya but still its 1 sacerfice for a 1700 monster but i might make a set of Satan's basicly lIke satan's Pet etc.At the end of the effect :Once this card is Destroy destroy all monster cards on your field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattleite Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 Good effect and balanced Ocg is fine i think. Picture is good too. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 sorry ime not rating that.. The other day i had nightmares about satan and i asked god to banish them from my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y.M.R.creator Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 I like it 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 k So i have 1 person saying to change 1 person saying to banish satan and 2Loving it which one should i go with? LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 BuMp Need Some more comments. I need to make my cards perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 Okay with this. the Lore is very well constructed, you just left out how it is going to be Special Summoned. Picture seems nothing to do with Satan, she seems relaxed, easy going, and kind. Picture - 1/2 Title - 2/3 Attribute, Type, Etc. - 1.5/2 Lore - 2.7/3 Total - 7.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 Some people just done like certain names from religioun to be used in card names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 [quote name='poinl' timestamp='1293288206' post='4882245'] sorry ime not rating that.. The other day i had nightmares about satan and i asked god to banish them from my mind. [/quote] Cool story bro, but nobody here cares about your religion and your dreams based on said religion. If you're not going to comment or say anything about the card, then don't post at all. On topic: The card is decent I guess, nothing really to say here. Small note tough, the picture would have more of an connection to the card name if the cross on the picture was upside down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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