[King.] Geartown 2 - Mecha City [King.]

[Limited Edition KING]

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During your Draw Phase if you drew an "Ancient Gear" monster you can Special Summon that monster. You cannot Summon this turn if you activated this effect. If an "Ancient Gear" monster you control is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Ancient Gear" monster from your Deck that has a lower level than the destroyed monster.

Please leave a constructive comment.[/b][/font][/center]

[poinl]

ocg is a little off but the card is effective and great.

Change connot summon to cannot summon untill your next turn.

8/10

[Limited Edition KING]

[quote name='poinl' timestamp='1293469617' post='4887052']
Change connot summon to cannot summon untill your next turn.
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[font="Verdana"][b]'cannot Summon this turn' is the same as 'cannot Summon until your next turn'.
There is no need for that part to be changed.[/b][/font]

[War Chess]

I think the card is good. Its useful and balanced. The OCG is fine in my opinion.
10/10 for now.

[Ｄｈａｒｃ]

[center][color=#800080][size=2]Good, IMO. Only thing I can see off is the first sentence.[/size][/color][/center][color="#800080"][size=2][center]"[font="Verdana"]During your Draw Phase[b],[/b] if you drew an "Ancient Gear" monster[b],[/b] you can Special Summon th[b]e[/b] monster [b]that you drew[/b].[/font][/center][/size][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]Again, that's all I see.[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]So for the official rate--[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]Picture 9/10: Fits the card and purpose effectively. The only problem is all the lights floating around there.[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]OCG 9.5/10: See my edit.[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]Creativity 7.5/10: Nothing anyone can say they haven't seen before. It's hard to make a creative Field Spell.[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]Playability 4/5: Good. Complements the AGs' normal slow play-style well. Just seems a bit to slow for a full 5.[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][center][size=2]
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[/center][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]Overall-- 30/35, or 85.7%[/center][/size][/font][font="Verdana"][size=2][center]B's aren't all bad. You're doing it right, just give it more "OOMPH!"[/center][/size][/font][/color]

[Icy]

[quote name='Dharc the Dark Charmer' timestamp='1293472069' post='4887200']
[center]"[font="Verdana"]During your Draw Phase[b],[/b] if you drew an "Ancient Gear" monster[b],[/b] you can Special Summon th[b]e[/b] monster [b]that you drew[/b].[/font]
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If you're gonna correct. Do it right. His first sentence IS correct.
Anyway the ONLY thing that's bugging me is the name. Otherwise it adds much needed speed to Ancient Gears and creates less of a dead draw scenario.

[wero-vasto]

I still think that Geartown is better than this... thought this works more for the Archtype

Great!

[Icy]

[quote name='wero-vasto' timestamp='1293478546' post='4887390']
I still think that Geartown is better than this... thought this works more for the Archtype

Great!
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Geartown is an OTK machine and still kills a normal summon with it's effect. It's not really "better" than this. They're pretty much on the same level. This card on the other hand helps the ENTIRE deck and provides a near constant field presence, makes Pot of Avarice a legitimate card (to keep up the monsters), and allows you to summon every Ancient Gear except Golem.

Though if I may be so bold? And feel free to call me out on this:
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[*][font="Palatino Linotype"][b]When you draw card(s)[/b], if you drew an "Ancient Gear" monster you can Special Summon that monster. [s]You cannot Summon this turn if you activated this effect.[/s] If an "Ancient Gear" monster you control is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Ancient Gear" monster from your Deck that has a lower level than the destroyed monster.[/font]
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Makes it more playable and iirc, the text says that even if you drew multiple you could only special summon 1 AG monster. A little faster, but not really in a bad or broken way at all.

[Limited Edition KING]

[quote name='JoshIcy' timestamp='1293480057' post='4887443']
Though if I may be so bold? And feel free to call me out on this:
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[*][font="Palatino Linotype"][b]When you draw card(s)[/b], if you drew an "Ancient Gear" monster you can Special Summon that monster. [s]You cannot Summon this turn if you activated this effect.[/s] If an "Ancient Gear" monster you control is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Ancient Gear" monster from your Deck that has a lower level than the destroyed monster.[/font]
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[font="Verdana"][b]That effect certainly does make the deck faster. I believe I may have also screwed the card over with the 'You cannot Summon this turn if you activated this effect.' Because then it cancels out the cards second effect if your opponent Kaluts or Honests your attack.[/b][/font]