Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Just 3 cards; 1 Excess Monster and 2 basic support Spells. I'm still experimenting with Excess, but you know, this is quite the fun challange. [spoiler=Pyronomic Dragonoid - Furnace] [center] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 1000 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. When this card is Excess Summoned, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for every Overlaid Monster on this card. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, send this card to the Graveyard.[/center][/spoiler] [spoiler='High Temple of Excess'] [center][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: You can only activate this card when there is at least 1 Excess Monster on the field. Once per turn, during each of your End Phases, you can pay 500 Life Points to Overlay 1 monster from your Graveyard to 1 Excess Monster you control (The Level of the Overlaid Monster does not have to equal the Level of other Overlaid Monsters). Monsters Overlayed by this effect are unaffected by your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards until the End Phase of your next turn.[/center][/spoiler] [spoiler='Vaulting the Excess'] [center][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: You can only activate this card during your Main Phase I. Pay 1000 Life Points. As long as this card remains face-up on the field and you control at least 1 Excess Monster that has at least 1 Overlaid Monster on it, you can Overlay 1 monster from your Graveyard onto this card during each of your Standby Phases. If this card is removed from the field, you can Overlay this card's Overlaid Monsters onto 1 Excess Monster you control.[/center][/spoiler] Rates, comments, and fixes are greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. Damage inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated." contradictory... well... actually it goes like this: "I send 1 Overlaid Monster from this card to the Graveyard. I inflict damage to my opp. equal to it's ATK but I activated the effect so I'll be only inflicting half damage." Err... IDK if that's what you wanted but I think it would be better if it goes like this: "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. [b]Battle Damage[/b] inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [quote name='wero-vasto' timestamp='1293933475' post='4904661'] "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. [b]Battle Damage[/b] inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated." [/quote] That's what I meant. Thanks for catching that. I will implement the changes immediately. EDIT: Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow-Master Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Hmm, OCG seems fine and so do the pictures. I don't see anything overpowered. My only complaint though is..why excess? That doesn't seem to relate to your cards. Never mind the fact that it isn't even a monster type in the trading card game. Probably you should take off the "excess" from the monster types and replace it with something more reasonable. Other than that, these are fine cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 1st Card: Great idea. Balance seems to be a bit OUCH. I mean, taking 2 Level 4s for the price of 1000 Life Points is... yeah, out of balance. Increase the Life Point cost or make it so you can only use 1 monster from your opponent's field. 2nd Card: Can't really say yet... I mean, no cards seem to affect Overlaid Monsters as of yet. Probably would see some use. Somewhere. 3rd Card: Ew. No one likes Life Point gain cards; they're pretty much useless. I can see why you made it though. Even though it's a good idea, it wouldn't see any use from how it being: a) a waste of a Spell/Trap card zone. Pretty much useless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Thanks for your comments, Kokonoe. I'm in the process of editting right now. I made the second card mainly to be able to Overlay more monsters, and I added that last effect mainly because I think of Overlaid Monsters as assets. Gotta protect your assets, right? It might come in handy in the future basically. I'm changing the third card's effect entirely. EDIT: Cards editted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [quote name='Shadow-Master' timestamp='1294010398' post='4907394'] Hmm, OCG seems fine and so do the pictures. I don't see anything overpowered. My only complaint though is..why excess? That doesn't seem to relate to your cards. Never mind the fact that it isn't even a monster type in the trading card game. Probably you should take off the "excess" from the monster types and replace it with something more reasonable. Other than that, these are fine cards. [/quote] Yeah there are Excess monsters you can find them here: Excess Summoning [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exceed_Summon"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exceed_Summon[/url] Exceed Monster [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aero_Shark"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aero_Shark[/url] Anyway the cards are great. I think that these cards are amazing I give them a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahhex Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [quote name='wero-vasto' timestamp='1293933475' post='4904661'] "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. Damage inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated." contradictory... well... actually it goes like this: "I send 1 Overlaid Monster from this card to the Graveyard. I inflict damage to my opp. equal to it's ATK but I activated the effect so I'll be only inflicting half damage." Err... IDK if that's what you wanted but I think it would be better if it goes like this: "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. [b]Battle Damage[/b] inflicted by this card is halved the turn this effect is activated." [/quote] I dont know what he want either but i think it would work better if it said"Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. During the turn this effect is activated the ATK of this card is halfed during the Damage Step of your Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [quote name='tahhex' timestamp='1294088731' post='4909322'] I dont know what he want either but i think it would work better if it said"Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the sent monster's ATK. During the turn this effect is activated the ATK of this card is halfed during the Damage Step of your Battle Phase. [/quote] *Facepalm* Your version would halve its ATK. The way I did it was that it would still keep its 2800 ATK, but any Battle Damage that it would have inflicted would be halved. Let it be able to keep some damage, but not so much as to make it too UPed. I halved the damage to make it less OPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahhex Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [quote name='Shion Kaito' timestamp='1294089110' post='4909335'] *Facepalm* Your version would halve its ATK. The way I did it was that it would still keep its 2800 ATK, but any Battle Damage that it would have inflicted would be halved. Let it be able to keep some damage, but not so much as to make it too UPed. I halved the damage to make it less OPed. [/quote] the attack being halved during the damage step means it still has the same attack but you do less damage ex its at 2800 and you attack a kuriboh (ATK 300) you would do 1100 damage because of the atk being 1/2 in the damage step but if you attacked diamond dude (ATK 1400) you would do 0 damage because of its the dragons atk being halved during [b]ONLY[/b] the damage step. and you couldnt have said that in a more dickish way jackass if you use you f***ing eyes and look at my status im a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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