xNightshadex Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [center][b]Image Credit to .Supervillain[/b] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/7453/336373.jpg[/img] [b]Effect[/b]: [i]This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if your opponent controls a Level 4 monster on their side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you cannot Summon a monster during your next turn. Once per turn, if this is the only monster on your side of the field, you can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Deck.[/i] First card...again. I'm really not sure how to word the effect, I looked on some existing cards and tried to word it like the ones I saw, but I'm still not sure. A reword would be appreciated. So, how do you like it? Rate/Comment/Corrections/Anything is appreciated.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [size="5"]My Rate[/size] [size="2"]Pic: 7/10[/size] [size="2"]Originality: 7.5/10[/size] [size="2"]Balance: 5/10 (A little UP'd)[/size] [size="2"]OCG: 10/10(Surprisingly good OCG for a noob)[/size] [size="2"] [/size] [size="2"] [/size] [size="2"]Nice card. Here is an improvement that I would make:[/size] [size="2"] [/size] [size="2"][color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][size=3][i]This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if your opponent controls a Level 4 monster on their side of the field. [s]If this card is Special Summoned this way, you cannot Summon a monster during your next turn. [/s]Once per turn, if this is the only monster on your side of the field, you can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Deck.[/i][/size][/font][/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNightshadex Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Thanks. It's my first card, so I'm still getting used to the OP'ed/UP'ed problems. =] I'll edit it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 [quote name='xNightshadex' timestamp='1294094429' post='4909620'] Thanks. It's my first card, so I'm still getting used to the OP'ed/UP'ed problems. =] I'll edit it later. [/quote] cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Okay, okay. Here's some wording correction: [b]If your opponent controls a Level 4 monster, you can Special Summon this card from my hand[/b]. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you cannot Summon a monster during your next turn. Once per turn, if this is the only monster [b]you control[/b], you can Special Summon [b]1[/b] Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Deck. It's reasonable. I might consider making it unable to be Normal Summoned/Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNightshadex Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Thanks. I forgot to save it, so can't really edit. Ooops. Thanks anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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