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I made this while I was bored(Forever Remembered)


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There are tonnes of OCG errors but I'll leave it for somone else to correct, but jesus christ? Really? I mean I actually really do like this card? I just love the whole idea of it, the unforgotten warrior who although has passed on lives on, Forever Remembered, a great concept actually, I actually really like the concept and originality, damn, didn't think i'd like it that much, great job.

except get rid of the can't attack part, that just wrecks his memory.
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There are [b]tons[/b] of OCG errors but I'll leave it for somone else to correct, but [b]J[/b]esus [b]C[/b]hrist? Really? I mean I actually really do like this card? I just love the whole idea of it, the unforgotten warrior who although has passed on lives on, Forever Remembered, a great concept actually, I actually really like the concept and originality, damn, didn't think i'd like it that much, great job.

except get rid of the can't attack part, that just wrecks his memory.
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Fixed.

Anyway, this card is sweet. The effect is loaded with OCG errors, no doubt, but the overall concept is nice.
7/10 if fixed, 8.9/10
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[quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1294546312' post='4921871']
There are tonnes of OCG errors but I'll leave it for somone else to correct, but jesus christ? Really? I mean I actually really do like this card? I just love the whole idea of it, the unforgotten warrior who although has passed on lives on, Forever Remembered, a great concept actually, I actually really like the concept and originality, damn, didn't think i'd like it that much, great job.

except get rid of the can't attack part, that just wrecks his memory.
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I would take the can't attack part out but it fits better if it can't because he/she/it is remembered by a statue that got built thus the name of the token "Statue of a Hero"
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Like the concept. Although card itself is underpowered. I get why you don't want to have it being able to attack. Then, I suggest lowering it to 2 instead of 3.

Card makes me remember Kamina =D (search for [/b]Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann[/b] if you don't know what I'm talking about)

Capitalize the words in the name.
All numbers should be written in number form in the card effect, not in "word" form.
four = [b]4[/b]
one = [b]1[/b]
etc.

[b]T[/b]oken is capitalized.
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  • 3 weeks later...

I really like this card. It gives me a "Mataza is a hero" feeling. Why? I won a match with only 1 monster. My opponent was playing Flamvell. Ever had a feeling that you had the ultimate card combo against an Archtype? Mataza+No Entry setup works wonders against Flamvell ;-)
I like the concept of the card. It's a card that does what it says, the monster is forever remembered but since we're talking about a statue, it can't attack. I don't even care about OCG. This card is not just original, it's brilliant and the effect is really good, although somewhat situational. 10/10

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