TheBigCheese Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Bump, I am still fairly new here and although many of these comments are positive I would like to learn how I can improve from more senior members with plentiful experience. My 20-or-so cards should be enough scope as to criticise or even praise me and I understand that posts made or not made maliciously but with a view to improving the card maker, so on that basis is there anyway I could get some feedback if you think you are an experienced member with a wealth of knowledge to bestow. Greatly appreciated, Regards..... TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 For your first set of cards these are outstanding. The effects are inspired, the images are engaging and overall the cards are phenomenal and these are your first ever ones???!!! O_o As I newbie I made a zelda set and mine dont even compare to yours, just think of what you will be like when you get to over 1000 posts. My only slight criticism is the fact that (i'm no expert though) the OCG seems a little bit wordy I don't know wether there is any way you could perhaps review it. You have the potential to go very far here, good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1296251672' post='4968689'] For your first set of cards these are outstanding. The effects are inspired, the images are engaging and overall the cards are phenomenal and these are your first ever ones???!!! O_o As I newbie I made a zelda set and mine dont even compare to yours, just think of what you will be like when you get to over 1000 posts. My only slight criticism is the fact that (i'm no expert though) the OCG seems a little bit wordy I don't know wether there is any way you could perhaps review it. You have the potential to go very far here, good luck [/quote] Wow thanks. That means a lot coming from an experienced member. Ill try and do more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Bump I am trying to improve as a card maker so I would appreciate and comments. If you don't want to comment on all of them, I suggest that you pick one at random and comment on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Fixed this wording for you: [i]You can tribute 1 DARK Monster you control to decrease this card's ATK by half the ATK of the Tributed monster, and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with less ATK than the Tributed monster. When this card declares an attack, your opponent cannot negate it. Battle Damage this card inflicts is treated as Effect damage instead. When this card is selected as an attack target, except by a DARK Monster, you can remove from play this card to Special Summon 1 DARK Monster from your hand, ignoring the summoning conditions.[/i] These look interesting, I might comment more later. Edit: For your 1st set, you did way better then me. (I have 4+ years of experience, even before joining YCM but I stilll remeber my early attempts) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freak in the house Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Awesome 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 you doin good mayne, your OCG is still slightly off, but you've improved on it my only criticism to this set is the pic for Shiek is kinda meh just the face is kinda not very appealing to me lol but that's just me, i look at the pics more than the effects when it comes to cards on this site so yeah lol xD you doin great, this thread is basically at the same level as my current thread lol, except my thread is huge because of the pictures and immense amount of cards lol but in terms of just cards you might be better than me lol xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='I Hate Snatch Steal' timestamp='1298681523' post='5034496'] Fixed this wording for you: [i]You can tribute 1 DARK Monster you control to decrease this card's ATK by half the ATK of the Tributed monster, and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with less ATK than the Tributed monster. When this card declares an attack, your opponent cannot negate it. Battle Damage this card inflicts is treated as Effect damage instead. When this card is selected as an attack target, except by a DARK Monster, you can remove from play this card to Special Summon 1 DARK Monster from your hand, ignoring the summoning conditions.[/i] These look interesting, I might comment more later. Edit: For your 1st set, you did way better then me. (I have 4+ years of experience, even before joining YCM but I stilll remeber my early attempts) [/quote] Thanks very much for the OCG fix on Ganondorf, that was very helpful [quote name='freak in the house' timestamp='1298683038' post='5034574'] Awesome 10 [/quote] Thanks very much, care to elaborate though, is there anything I could have done better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrblah Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Mainly great cards, except you forgot Zelda. The series is named after her, so get a Zelda card out soon. Other than that, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Nice cards. Very good for a first timer! BTW, Abyss is spelled with 2 S's Keep them coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 I'm now posting my newest cards on the front page, for you all to see what I am getting up to. Remember comments appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nehp3ts Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 sick man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timebomb10 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 toom link not yong link other than that good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 [quote name='timebomb10' timestamp='1299334836' post='5052377'] toom link not yong link other than that good [/quote] English Translation: It's Toon Link not Young link you fool! Otherwise everything is fine. [hr] 9/10 Do I have to explain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 [quote name='Cindy goes Explodes' timestamp='1299338582' post='5052502'] English Translation: It's Toon Link not Young link you fool! Otherwise everything is fine. [hr] 9/10 Do I have to explain? [/quote] thanks for commenting, I would appreciate if you did elaborate.[quote name='timebomb10' timestamp='1299334836' post='5052377'] toom link not yong link other than that good [/quote] In fact I regret to inform you that it is you who are mistaken unfortunately. My young link is in fact the "young link" from ocarina of time and toon link is actually from LOZ the wind waker so there is quite a distinct diference. Thanks for commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted March 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 New card up now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thebobkiller Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 Personally I'd say that Navy should be a Union monster instead of an effect monster. Not a big fan of the Ganon monsters either, but that's probably from gaming. Excellent job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 these are some nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timebomb10 Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 i c no dif. betewn yong n toon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Have you thought about playing with these online? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='FF Fan' timestamp='1306945562' post='5246540'] Have you thought about playing with these online? [/quote] Although I'm flattered I don't think I would play with them online for a couple of reasons: -I don't think my cards are quite good/realistic enough to play online -I don't think you could even play with your custom made cards online Thanks anyway [quote name='timebomb10' timestamp='1306889098' post='5245446'] i c no dif. betewn yong n toon [/quote] Don't worry it's a common mistake. To put it simply there are two timelines that run within The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of time, a future timeline and a past time line so it is therefore correct that the links from each timeline are labelled differently in order to differentiate from each of them. In the future timeline our hero is simply referred to as Link as he is the mature hero ready to save Hyrule however his very same character in the past time line is referred to as young link. He is referred to as young link in order to contrast with the link in the future and to highlight to the player that young link is not quite mature enough to save Hyrule yet. Toon Link is a completely different character altogether. To be precise, he is the hero from the LOZ The Wind Waker and is referred to as toon Link due to the cel-shaded graphics which ornate the game. These cel-shaded graphics create a "toon-like" effect and in colloquial terms he is referred to as toon Link. I hope that clears it up for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonstone Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 ya cards are cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='Alice Moonstone' timestamp='1307012225' post='5248543'] ya cards are cool [/quote] Although I appreciate the kind words is there perhaps any way you could elaborate, as it would seem (with all due respect) like you simply used my thread as a platform to increase your number of posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheezeman224 Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 i love the pic for Uni-Upheaval!!!! its an awesome pic with a good effect to. good cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timebomb10 Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 have u thought about making a toon link card n just wundering has jammie1903 pm ed u also i think his(or hers) madra was better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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