Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Ok, don't get on me about Spellcasters being used alot. This is like my 2nd ever Spellcaster, so there! XDOk, well, I got some help from Godaze. No, he didn't directly help, but he helped me LEARN some wording. So thank you very much Kaze ^_^BTW, if you can think of a better name, please say it. I am really uncomfertable with this name =/Thanks ^_^ When this card is Normal Summoned, decrease the ATK of this card by 1000. Then destroy all cards on the field with and ATK lower than this card. When this card is attacked by an opponent's monster with a higher ATK than this card, you may pay 300 Life Points to remove this card from play. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards with 2500 ATK or more cannot attack a monster with 1500 ATK or less. This card cannot be destroyed by a card effect. When an opponent's monster attacks a card you control with an ATK of 1300 ATK or less, decrease the ATK of the attacking monster by 400. If the attackinng monster is destroyed by battle, decrease your Life Points equal to half the monsters DEF. When a card is removed from play by it's own effect, thw owner of the card canpay 300 Life Points to return it to their hand. Thank you very much for looking at this card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gizzerd Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 When this card is Normal Summoned, decrease the ATK of this card by 1000. little harsh for a 7 star monster whos attack is allready really low. Destroy all cards on the field with and ATK lower than this card. When is this effect activated? When this card is attacked by an opponen's moster with a higher ATK than this card, you may pay 300 Life Points to remove this card from play. As long as this card is removed from play, all cards with 2500 ATK or more cannot attack a monster with 1500 ATK or less. Very unique effect, I like. also, grammar n spelling errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Thank you very much for rating ^_^I am trying to impove, I will remembr that ^_^EDIT: I think I have fixed the problem ^_^As for the stars, I thouht the effect made up for the level and ATK =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 ive seen you do better Yankee XD i find it can be very weak at some points the pic is nice though 7.8/10 do what you do best and stick to it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Ok, thank you very much Azuh. This is actually a test card. I am tring to figure out my grammar. I always have problems, so i'm trying to fix that ^_^I am glad you think that I have done some good cards. I find that the effect actually makes it not underpowerd. You may have killed opponent's monsters without attacking, and you may not take damage form an attack by an opponent, and you can make 2500 ATK or more monsters usless, I think it's borderline OVERpowerd, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Ok' date=' thank you very much Azuh. This is actually a test card. I am tring to figure out my grammar. I always have problems, so i'm trying to fix that ^_^I am glad you think that I have done some good cards. I find that the effect actually makes it not underpowerd. You may have killed opponent's monsters without attacking, and you may not take damage form an attack by an opponent, and you can make 2500 ATK or more monsters usless, I think it's borderline OVERpowerd, lol[/quote'] this is why i think its underpowered XD 1. its attack is reduced to 1300 when summoned... not good for 2 tributes2. Even though it destroyes your opponents monsters... 1300 ATK and less is very small... and not good for Sangan >.<3. It doesnt come back when its removed from play... which can be a real bummer4. No one really plays monsters over 2500 ATK... Cyber Dragons, Monarchs all scrape this side mark... my theory 1. Increase this cards ATK to 2500... at least it can destroy things like Six Samurais and Six Attribute Searchers2. Change all cards to 2400 ATK... therefore it can stop Monarchs attacks3. Maybe return it to the Graveyard after a certain amount of turns But oh well.. its not my card XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 it shouldnt be innocence if u know what i mean lol XD nice card tho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 It is kinda underpowered. 1300 attack for 2 tributes=no good. however the effect is really interesting. 9/10 good job but it needs improving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 it's a good card Yankee, nice effect you have there and yes lol why the innocence lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRDDDDDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SORRY ABOUT THE SPAM BUT YOU DESERVE PRAISE 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Its alright ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 man DJ... you psot to quickly... now i see how you get so much posts in so little time XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Hmmm, I see what you all are saying, I guess it does have some problems =/Like I said. I don't like the name. I just plain couldent think of anything else =/If you have a name, please help ^_^Thank you al for posting ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 I added a 2nd card now XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 umm... the second card has a glitch, when your opponent gets one of his/her cards removed from play... you actually get their card..... but unique effect...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Whoops, sorry, I posted the card that wans't completely finished with the grammar, give me a min, lolEDIT: Fixed, sorry about that, this is the REAL card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 I myself say underpowered. Do what Azuh says, and it will be balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 lol now its as good as its gonna get 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 the new card is very good. love the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Thanks alot guys, this isn't gonna be a set, i'm just trying to figure out the grammar. Thanks alot for posting your comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dalekob Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 nice cards and nice pics, probably one of the best cards ive seen all day, which is probably coz these are the first cards ive seen 2day.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 lol, well, thanks for letting me be first! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 10 /10 but overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Overused? What is overused? spellcasters? These are like my 3rd and 4th ever spellcasters >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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